shortie_689 Posted November 15, 2006 Report Share Posted November 15, 2006 That was a great chapter!!! Matilda can't be angry at Lucas cause he told Belle and Mattie heard it so if she gets angry she is silly!!! Gosh this is lke a real show to me haha!!! Oh Tony is soooo absolutely cute!!! I can't wait till u update next!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 15, 2006 Report Share Posted November 15, 2006 Yeh can't wait when Beth and Tony share their first kiss Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted November 15, 2006 Report Share Posted November 15, 2006 Awww...poor Martha But loving Jack and Amanda, he better be using her to make Martha jealous though Great chapter. Tony is so cute Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted November 16, 2006 Report Share Posted November 16, 2006 Will hopefully be updating when I get home from work. Thanks for the reviews guys, Im glad you are enjoying it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted November 16, 2006 Report Share Posted November 16, 2006 Jack, how could you do that to Martha and Amanda I could kill her, and Jack for that matter, please update soon, great chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted November 17, 2006 Report Share Posted November 17, 2006 Just a short chapter. Chapter 13 - New experiences. Lucas's P O V "Matilda I might have known" Belle says still moving closer to me "Belle, Just back off Lucas is with me and even if he wasnt he wouldnt go for a skank like you" Matilda says grabbing my hand and trying to position herself between Belle and I. "lets just see about that shall we Maddie" Belle says kissing me on the cheek, and giving Matilda a wink she walks away from us, and I can hear her laughing as she goes. I cant believe this is happening to me, Im not the type of guy girls want but I have to admit it is really flattering and ever so slightly cool. I turn and look at Matilda and suddenly the situation doesnt seem so cool. Tony's P O V "You look beautiful" I say to Beth as I enter the house. She really does look good. "Thanks your not to bad yourself" She says kissing me on the cheek. It takes all my will power to stop me from pulling her close to me and kissing her passionately. "Come on lets sit down" She says leading me to the dining table. She has obviously gone to a lot of effort, everything is laid out so nicely. It looks so romantic. "Thanks love" I say as she hands me a glass of wine and sits down next to me. She smiles at me and I think she is thinking the same thing as me or at least I hope she is. I might as well find out, I lean forward and touch her face, and kiss her lightly. Jack's P O V Amanda's house is amazing she is obviously one rich lady. We sit on the sofa with glasses of wine and she is chatting on telling me about her life. If im honest im not really listening, there is only one reason I came back here and I think she knows that, she seems like an astute woman. Putting me glass down I lean closer to her and look in her eyes she realises then what I want if she didnt before. I put my lips to hers and we kiss slowly, eagerly she returns the kisses and they get more passionate as she leads me upstairs. There is no spark or connection between us, not like there was when I kissed Martha, but hey Martha doesnt want me and Amanda does, well at least for one night and I can think of worse ways to spend an evening than having sex with an attractive women. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gypsy & Will Fan Posted November 17, 2006 Report Share Posted November 17, 2006 Brilliant Tasha! LOL at Lucas! Not so good with girls away from summer Bay comes to SB and he has two girls fighting over him! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skykat Posted November 17, 2006 Report Share Posted November 17, 2006 I LOVE Jack in this, I love him as a womaniser...so much more preferable to the lovey stuff with Martha. Lucas is so lovely and naive...I love it. Great update hun.xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted November 17, 2006 Report Share Posted November 17, 2006 Thanks Penny and Kat. Glad you like a different side to Jack and that you both like Lucas in this. I dont think I will ever get bored of writing Lucas. More will be up over the weekend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted November 17, 2006 Report Share Posted November 17, 2006 That was a good update, more soon please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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