ciaobella Posted April 18, 2006 Report Share Posted April 18, 2006 guys please do more on the story, seriously i jst need a idea, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted April 18, 2006 Report Share Posted April 18, 2006 You should so carry on! Because you're a great writer and I'm sure you'll be able to think of something! If you need help then you can always PM me asking for ideas, not that I'm good at them.. lol But I don't know, I'll try and help you. It's just so hard to follow such a great storywriter! lol It's your story, it almost feels wrong me writing something to it. If you don't carry on, then i'll hunt you down, and poke you with a long wooden stick. Twice. You have been warned! lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ciaobella Posted April 22, 2006 Report Share Posted April 22, 2006 ok i think ive got an idea, next update, tomoz or monday Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Jade- Posted April 22, 2006 Report Share Posted April 22, 2006 YAY!!! I'm so glad that you're going to continue! I can't wait for the update!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted April 22, 2006 Report Share Posted April 22, 2006 *Dances* lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack is so hot Posted April 23, 2006 Report Share Posted April 23, 2006 OMG I CANT WAIT OMG YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYY YYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OH MY GOD YES I CANT WAIT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted April 23, 2006 Report Share Posted April 23, 2006 OMG I CANT WAIT OMG YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYY YYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OH MY GOD YES I CANT WAIT Okay then... *Steps back* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack is so hot Posted April 23, 2006 Report Share Posted April 23, 2006 soz i tend to get a bit dramatic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ciaobella Posted April 24, 2006 Report Share Posted April 24, 2006 1 year later It was around 11pm when they finally got to the house; Martha got into her pjs on and went straight to bed before Jack, who had gone to check the house out. So when Jack came back, Martha was already asleep. He gently kissed her on the lips. Martha’s eyes fluttered open, and she saw Jack staring at her through his beautiful chestnut eyes. She grabbed his waist and pulled him on top of her, they kissed passionately. Martha put her hands on his bare chest, Jacks hand slipped under her vest. She still got that same tingling feeling when she touched Jack, it felt like heaven. She would remember today vividly for the rest of her life, it had been the most wonderful day in her life so far, her wedding. Maybe the perfect house, people, food, decorations did play a part in it, but it was only small, the fact that she was marrying Jack made it so amazing and wonderful. They had discussed it ever since they had got engaged and now they were married they decided it was time, they knew it was right, they both loved them, and most importantly they wanted them from and with each other. sorry its a bit weird, but thats all i could think of Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted April 24, 2006 Report Share Posted April 24, 2006 Aww so they got married? Awww! lol Very good! =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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