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Thanks Suzza So glad you enjoyed it. I think Kyle being in a gay relationship might have come as as big a surprise to him as it is for you readers! He's still very confused about it and uncomfortable with any kind of outward display (especially in this dangerous prison environment) Aaron's departure in a few weeks makes any kind of opening up about his feelings difficult too. We'll see how his chat with Brax goes. Thanks for reading!

Thanks Kristen! glad you enjoyed it, I was a bit nervous about this chapter

My goodness, Summer Bay is getting jiggy tonight! What was in those drinks at the wedding reception?! I'm just sad Alf didn't hook up with someone Really enjoyed this chapter, and as Pembie said, it flowed really well. I'm pleased that VJ told Billie about Olivia (they're finally being honest with each other) and she was okay with it. Chris and Sasha were actually kinda sweet, and Roo and Frank was a surprise (from what little I know, I'm not sure that's such a good idea? ) Loved Dex desperately tryong to hit record with Lottie being a little more insistent on other things! Looking forward to the next chapter x

Loved this chapter. love the sibling relationships going on here and I enjoyed Tori's little prank. Brody needs to be honest about how he feels or he's going to regret it. Absolutely loved this line: "you know you three are in a non-existent love triangle that none of you know your in"

Yeah, kinda had to get that out of the way in this chapter and they kind of needed it to reestablish their friendship too. Now we can get into the real story...

Im not sure New Fish would be all that keen on that idea . I mean, as seductive as Alexei is, with his never ending bowel movements and sexually threatening behaviour, I think Josh might still be a little too hung up on Evie to start something new right away... but who knows?! Alexei is a very persuasive man, apparently Haha! yeah, Josh is having a lot of fun Thought things were getting a bit too cosy. You know the way my mind works, haha! I wanted to give Josh the chance to explain himself. It's something the show never did. We're just meant to believe that Josh is some heartless little coward who didn't feel anything about killing Charlotte (mainly because he didn't know he'd done it until the big reveal). I wanted to give him a chance to explain the (frankly ridiculous) plotline of him going straight out and killing Charlotte, and why he didn't come forward. (I still don't believe that thats what he would have done, but here we are, so I'm making Lemonade.) Thanks j.laur5 and Kristen, really glad you're both enjoying it!

Love the relationship between Brody and Tori (in your story as well as the show) and I think you write it very well! They're lovely together. Really enjoy all their teasing.

I liked Xavier's idea! Pretending that the prank didn't work is absolutely the best pay back! lol! Looking forward to the next chapter x

Poor Kyle! What a terrible childhood. No-one deserves to grow up like that. So sad that he had no-one to help him. Must be terrible for Casey to read about. Did any of them ever really know Kyle?

Feel very sorry for Rebecca. Such a toxic relationship between her and her brother. She shouldn't be letting him get away with that but sadly that's what people do. Threatening Dylan wasn't very nice either but maybe his parents need to know about him just as much as Rebecca's need to know about her. Matt and Ellie's relationship served as such a sharp contrast here. They're just lovely together. Very well written! x

Thanks j.laur5 welcome aboard! glad you liked it. I guess he was a bit older and maybe understood what it was like to feel abandoned and have a massive chip on his shoulder. I never really thought of him as a father figure though, interesting. Thanks Kristen, glad you enjoyed it too Josh isn't really enjoying his first day in prison, is he?! Thanks Jarlie I think Josh is just relieved to see a friendly face and Kyle was obviously pleased to see him too, even if it does mean he's got himself locked up! Thanks Red Glad you liked Alexei! and the white supremacists! They are meant to be a bit of a nutty bunch. It is a drama but I couldn't help bringing a bit of dark comedy in. I don't know about you but I wouldn't fancy bring locked up with Alexei and his dodgy digestion! Thanks for reading everyone x

Thanks KittCatt! I can't pretend to know what being in prison is like so I'm stealing from all the prison movies and TV shows I've ever seen and I've been doing a bit of half arsed research on Australian prisons (my search history was pretty weird already with all of my other stories and now I've just added more weirdness! lol!) I was looking up things like 'what do prison cells in Australia look like?' haha! Anyway, glad you enjoyed it x

Thanks Suzza! I thought you might like this one! haha! I couldn't resist! If Josh has to go to prison, then he's going to prison with Kyle Glad you enjoyed it! x

God I love Brody Like I said before, you write him really well.

Great chapter. Enjoyed all the interactions but especially Brody's scenes. You write him very well

Interesting development with Dylan being gay. I'm a little bit worried about the age difference between him and his boyfriend though. Is he 13 like Raffy and Ellie? ...which would make the other guy 16? Hmm.... Rebecca's parents don't seem like the most responsible people. Wonder who called the cops on them? Love how you write the dialogue between Matt and Ellie. They're great. Sounds like Jude didn't just hurt Matt when things went bad between them. Ellie seems to be carrying around a lot of resentment too. Interested to see what happens here.

Hmm, so Duncan's gone back to the states in your story too. I think that was the right thing given the circumstances. Always love Matt and Roo's relationship

I was trying to figure out if Jude was someone I'd somehow forgotten. So they seem to have some serious history, Matt and Jude? A previous relationship from before he moved to Summer Bay? Wonder what's going to happen there? Glad the girls are okay.

Oh wow! A lot of old faces in this chapter . Loved Indi getting drunk and talking rubbish at Lottie! And Justin's line about needing a flow chart! hahaha! So true! I think we could all do with one of those! The confusion over Mason sleeping with the 'best man' was pretty funny too. Really enjoyed all the interaction at both parties. Chandler is certainly an interesting name choice for the baby but I'm not surprised given that it's April (very in character). The wedding was lovely too ...Also, Chris and Sasha was not something I would ever have expected to happen, but I don't see why not. Looking forward to the next chapter x

Oh, Raffy and Ellie are just doing a bit of teenage drinking... I was worried it might be something to do with the Syndicate and they were walking into a trap. I wonder where Matt is though?

Mysterious chapter Who were Raffy and Ellie going to meet? How did Phoebe and Evie get lost in the caravan patk? What's going on with Matt? I'm very intrigued... Really looking forward to the next chapter x

Gosh they're very nosy people, arent they?! I mean, obviously if it was the other way round, Kat wouldn't be able to keep her nose out of it either, but surely people should be alllowed to have some secrets?!

Raffy and Ellie are very cute love them. Interesting chat between Justin and Hope too. Looking forward to seeing what happens with them.

Aw, liked the flashback. It does seem like he had fun with his brothers, even if Heath doesn't realise that. Interested to see what comes of Casey's trip and what he manages to find out.

Aww, thanks Pembie! Mason does have strange taste in women and an unusual idea of what constitutes a relationship! What's a little castration, eh?! As far as monobrows go, I guess Helga from Hey Arnold should really have served as a warning! Smelly feet is probably less of an indicator of psychopathic behaviour, haha! Glad you liked the 'legless' line too. It's a little cruel but I thought it was funny, and I was thinking about how easily people put their foot in it, and say things without thinking. I know I do. All the time Im a little sad it's finished because it was a lot of fun to write, but a oneshot that turned into twelve chapters was probably long enough! haha! So glad you enjoyed it! x