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:o Either I'm stupid or that was a big shock of Steve being their father! Yikes! That was the best chapter so far in my opinion. I suspect in the series that Brax, Heath and Casey have different fathers anyway If he's dyslexic, it would run in the family... I'm really intrigued now

A nice slow down so we can all get our breath back after the hotness of the last episode! Casey's clever isn't he? Going round to Dex's house to 'help him make a video' and asking him- conveniently the brightest student- to help him with his English work. So, if anyone asks, he can innocently say 'he's just helping me with my school work, nothing else is going on.' And going round to Dex's house again instead of putting them in the line of his brothers' awkward questions. I see also that Casey must have been reading a copy of The Girl's Handbook because he's following the rule: 'act all helpless to get a boy's attention', which has been in force since the year 0. I've never done that of course, no, never... And sweet lovely Dex still hasn't quite got the idea he's being pursued, bless. He's not quite sure why Casey is seeking him out all the time. The bits I loved were: Them gazing at each other, then laughing. The awkward moment on the front doorstep. Dex gazing at Casey while he demonstrates mounting his bike! Dex re reading his essay for fun As well as the entire rest of the scene! Brilliant Jen, I just love this story. Its so nice and slow moving and subtle. I like subtle, believe it or not....

Thankyou (bows). You are a Big Tease, missee. I thought your post was an update

Glad you liked it JT. It was all Red Ranger's great work The next part will be up later today... dun dun DUR!

Universal Soldier. I love that film even though its corny and 20 years old. Lots of fighting to amuse the boys, lots of naked men to amuse the girls. Brilliant

Keep going, I'd love to see where this goes, cos that is a massive cliffhanger

Warm, sunny, Easter weather Makes a nice change.

Haha! I watched The Terminator recently, I was actually thinking of writing a version of that. The Rominator, or something But that is off at a tangent, for another time

oh x 10 You're on a roll now, Red. First my fight scene now your own fic. Are you sure you don't want me to write a scene for you so I can keep up I'd also forgotten about Ruby's fish experience. I liked the way Rabbit reminded Miles he was Milco once too... I feel like Nic's going to have the baby with Lucas in attendance, but if she's only 7.5 months This story is so funny. But you can't kill Alf, Nic or the cheating tosspot can you surely? Nooooo!

Oh, that was quick darl, as Irene would say. 'everybody was kung fu fighting' Brilliant As I said, you interpreted slashery both literally and metaphorically I bow to the master

Aha, the two plots are starting to come together I just love this story, all the characters are their best selves and its full of intrigue too. Don't blame you for writing the story before you post it. I usually do too, I have to get it straight in my head before I post it

Ah, I think I know what you mean. I've just been collaborating with Jen too much about stories Sorry, i didn't phrase that very well. I was morseo acknowledging that Dex knew that this isn't real .... that himself & everyone else, incl RogueRuby, are just figments of someone's imagination .... I'm sure there's a term for what I've just said, but I can't think of it.

Why must you do this to me? I'm tempted to just pretend I didn't read this and assume that everyone is gay and will have all the slash in the world written about them and their kinky costumes . See, I would volunteer, but you've just put a ban on slash, so I can't . I'll just take all my fantasies to my own story ... Brilliant as usual. I eagerly await the next installment. Hahahahahahaha. As I said to JosieTash above, I'm still out of breath after my last slash outing. Anyway its tongue in cheek, so they could all disobey Professor Dex's ban, couldn't they? And slash away despite him. That sounds weird but you know what I mean! I must say, Dex is surprisingly manly in this story unlike the other boys Re: a fight scene. I'm quite happy for you to write it, I'll send you and Red Ranger a PM.

I feel I must apologise for my complete gushing over this scene, I can't think what came over me :lol: I didn't think it was particularly kinky Don't worry, I'm sure you haven't peaked too early

Well, I've just flicked through this as really I like to get into a fic right from the start. But I really love the 'script' layout of it, I prefer lots of dialogue to endless descriptions of people looking out of windows etc that you get in some stories

Oh glad you liked it JosieTash. Yes, I'm afraid my slash reservoir is empty at the moment after my last story I'll have to get other writers to add slash episodes if they want!

Gosh, that is mysterious. A secret son and a secret ID exchange Very interesting though

Okay, I'm not going to read then not comment cos life's too short to worry about things. I liked your story, its very sweet, funny and interesting. I liked the Lucas, Ric, Drew, Belle, Matilda group, its a shame they've left.

You tell him Alf/Mr Stewart! Grrr! I have a feeling that the plan is all coming together (turns suddenly in swivel chair and strokes white cat)

Thanks Carina. I admit I made myself laugh with that bit too (she said egotistically ) Not sure who will write the fight scene, I'll have to bribe people

Right. (takes a deep, calming breath) Dex noticing things at last. 'the rest of his kind' Very well observed. another great observation. He's always doing that! Firstly, Dex woffling on again made me laugh. Secondly, I wish I understood what Dex was saying I think he is half kidding, I can just imagine him saying it! Sounds a bit kinky/ vampiric, in a good way. Very good description of both Casey and Dex's observations. So there will be a sequel...! I think that might be dangerous as the heat generated might cause explosions to all readers

Crikey, its suddenly got a bit hot in here (fans self with newspaper) I did wonder when Casey was going to 'wear something rebellious'. This is completely fantastic, so realistic. Dex and Casey are so well described, I can just imagine all this happening. I'm not just flattering you, its brilliant. I will be back later to point out my favourite bits when I've recovered, if I can actually look at the screen without it melting

Right JosieTash. I set you a challenge to find all Star Wars references so far Bet there's more that you thought

I love the fact that Belle and Aden are both teachers Its nice to see a good long chapter about the Aden/Belle/Justin triangle again. So why did Justin and Joe swap IDs? I love the mystery about all these story lines, its clever. Take it easy

I will repeat myself: mwah hahahaha! MWAH HAHAHAHA! You'll have to wait! You know I'll never give a definitive answer