Miranda

I liked this line: Its nice to see another side of the Braxton brothers i.e. being a family and not just a load of thugs. Poor old Heath

Ah yes, its all coming back to me now I have too much going on in my head, mainly fantasy. Glad to be of assistance, ma'am And thanks for the thanks.

Did I? When?

Can't believe I nearly missed this! Its great Zetti. Really imaginative and moving. Glad I could help, not that I really did anything Poor old Casey, I thought he had a dodgy past Well done Z.

I replied to this. I know I did. Then the internet crashed. anyway... Thanks for all your comments , I like people enjoying my stories. I thought everyone would think it was too silly for words Now Red, I'm very impressed you obsereved the Star Wars references. But did you notice the other two sci fi references, not Star Wars? I'm surprised I know all this myself, I am obviously so deep in sci fi geekness, there is no hope for me...!

Ah, Zetti ((Hug)) for your friend and for this chapter. Belle and Aden

Ha ha! Well done Red. I LOVED that old series, I was in love with Lou Ferrigno/the Hulk, not boring old David Banner/Bill Bixby. I still swoon if I see Lou Ferrigno

Thanks Jen I could make a list of people who want to write episodes if people PM me, then it could be a group effort. This story just came to me in bed the other night, oo er missus. Something about our lads in those black X men suits from the film... But it was mainly cos Xavier Austin could be related to Steve Austin, the six million dollar man, we have the technology to rebuild him etc. Roverine.... Yes, that's my favourite too. Half man, half dog So, who got the Incredible Hulk reference in the Prologue then? Hands up? Anyone? Call yourselves geeks, tut tut, I'm ashamed of you all Probably all a bit young though.

Oh, poor Casey, what he's going through. You do torture him Zetti Hopefully he will have a happy ending soon

Thanks all Yep. You can do the macho fight scenes, I'll do the 'relationships' scenes

Mwah ha ha ha ha! Oh how nice it is to be silly

You know what I think Jen... excellent writing Dex is so well done, telling Casey what to do and not caring what he or anyone thinks. I think Dex is going to be one of the icons of Home and Away, he's so original My favourite line is 'Wear something rebellious.' What the heck is he going to wear?!?

Carina, have you ever thought of being a professional reviewer? You are very prompt and consistent. Thanks

God! Poor Casey I hope Heath and Brax get the man who hurt him Very interesting chapter indeed, lots of info. I wonder if the two stories will converge. Well done, Z.

hahahaha! Romeo and Xavier are really clueless, aren't they? I like the way Romeo has become Nicole's brother in every fic and even the series, that is good. I like the farcical air of this story, its got lots of hilarious one liners

Gosh Zetti, that was grim, but well imagined. Just had a brief read through. Poor Xavier

Miranda chuckled to herself as she read her friend Red Ranger's new episode. Romeo and Xavier wrestling? Nicole and Lucas snogging- sorry, pashing? Alf saying 'flaming drongo'? Miranda was overcome with admiration at Red Ranger's expert handling of all these situations but rather worried that she had started talking about herself in the third person... Call it extreme tiredness due to small child waking her up all night but the world was starting to blur and look unreal. She hoped that RR would carry on with the story as it was developing into a comical masterpiece. She still didn't get any gay vibe from the wonderful Xavier though, he always seemed to be a ladies man. Or was that just a front? And the return of the lovely Mr Holden junior was a dream come true, just what Miss Franklin needed.

Ditto, re: my story. We are good at supporting each other A mutual admiration society, dahling mwah mwah

Why thank you Luc . I feared I'd woffled on too much and taken over the thread. Yes, Jen, Dex is definitely your muse . Unfortunately my muse at present seems to be Romeo, damn him

Sh Zetti! Don't give away my secrets

Morning! I like the fact that Aden is a concerned teacher in this fic, it is nice to see more of his caring side. Still wondereing what the heck is going on with Justin EDIT: I'm not sure whether it was a dream or not now I've read Red's post. I think he is right. It was a dream and I'm a numpty getting distracted But anyway, obviously Casey is worried about the relationship... Its good that it is a mystery, better than it all being obvious. Intriguing

Great! Well done. Just to say publicly (in case you didn't see the dedication I just put in my story) that if it wasn't for your encouragement I wouldn't have posted my story. But anyway as you know, I like your new story and here's the lines I loved: (much laughing) (very clever ) (god, we’ve all been there) (fabulous. Its just so what Dex would write) ( I can just imagine Dex looking snooty but curious as he looks him up and down. Good boy Dex and bad boy Casey....) (whatever could be occurring? )

Its good, I will comment more tomorrow, its been a long day

oooh!

Oh no, the slippery slope! However, listening to my readers did make the story better, it seems. Oh dear, I can't be the dictator in my own little world anymore Yes, you do need to get on with your fiction!!! Hint hint. I look forward to reading more from you. I've enjoyed our little chats too, they aren't going to stop are they?