Miranda

Oh great! You got into this quickly, I was expecting you to take a break for a while. Loved the moments of awkwardness e.g. Xave feeling like a gooseberry, Romeo not knowing whether to help Ruby up into the seat or not. Foreshadowing of things to come. I see that you bit the bullet and got Dex and April together, wonder if that will last... Also the classic line 'fasten your seatbelts'. No doubt you will know that in a certain film, its followed by 'its going to be a bumpy night'. Well done. I am so keen to see this fic develop, no pressure though dude

What? I'll stop reading shall I?

Also liked the way Heath said after Romeo kissed him: 'you're gay.' Gosh Heath, nothing gets past you, does it?

Actually I was lying, I have no images in my head except Thor

Gosh! I shall have to come back later to comment on all this! I'm a bit speechless, but in a good way Right, had my tea, ready to comment.... I liked to see the sensitive side of Heath not telling Casey what happened with Romeo but trying to help him instead. Its all given me very interesting images in my mind now Again, you're good at showing the Braxtons being a family and caring about each other. Poor Angelo, feeling so sad

Yes, we aren't his harem at all, are we?

Good, we're all looking forward to it

This is good, I am having a break from reading and writing fanfic now but I do like yours. Belle is so cheeky. I liked the details of the boy and the sandcastle, it was very realistic

See, we all love you . In a platonic way I mean

Phew, back to the normal fic without all my silly interference At this point, I was cross with Dex, but obviously later he redeemed himself. Or is he a princess who needs saving? Sounds like he is Yay! Oh I laughed out loud at their role play. Dex trying to be hard and macho. Bless him. Definitely a friend of Dorothy then....! Again, Dex sums up life for a vast section of teenage society. I didn't know what this meant at first, but then I guessed, and its a brilliant way to put it. Dex is intelligent enough to understand and obviously Casey is too. Aw... Good for Dex just letting him get over it in his own time. Celebrate eh? Jen, this is absolutely brilliant, I can't say more All I want to say is that ever since I started reading this fic, I've had that song in my head: The only one who could ever reach me Was the son of a preacher man The only boy who could ever teach me Was the son of a preacher man Yes he was, he was, ooh, yes he was You could substitute 'doctor' for preacher, couldn't you?

Yes, but don't put too much pressure on yourself! We'll be patient and wait

Who's that then? who? who? who? (is there an owl in here?)

Then, you get to study the boys in detail and describe them, while I can write lots of dialogue. Result! Meanwhile, Red can write fight scenes. We are a team

I did like the idea of Dex/April but when I saw Xave leaping to April's rescue at the party when Heath threw her in the pool, I thought what a great couple they were, they look great together

I see a way we could all help each other....

You're welcome I LOVE writing dialogue. I HATE writing descriptions and things. Just sayin.

Yes, they were a good couple. Dex is just her Gay Best Friend, or whatever. I know he's not gay in the series but he is the equivalent of that to April.

Loved this story Looking forward to your next foray into fanfic, wonder what it'll be

Glad to hear it JT A pat on the back to you for all the above. I thought Xavier and Roverine fitted being Luke and Han, especially as Roverine kept saying he had a bad feeling about this. Hey, we could write a proper Star Wars parody, couldn't we, hm..... Fancy doing that sometime? The techobabbling sent me into fits of laughter, I could hardly type, I was laughing so much. Here is the source of it: http://axia.ws/axia/html/sttbg/index.html Yes, I had to get in Dex quoting Dorothy, he may be a friend of hers, we don't yet know The Nordic character is definitely not a plank anymore, his acting skills are vastly improved, and he looks much better in a Viking costume than a school uniform. Excuse me while I swoon for the umpteenth time

Uh oh! Romeo's for a beating Ironically! An ironic beating... This is an interesting story, I get a good idea that the restaurant is busy and they are rushing about serving customers, no time for long discussions about how they feel. Angelo jealous I see a slow burning story coming up, they're always the best. Hope your days get less tough x

I liked it the first time I read it and this version is better. You're like me, you keep fiddling with your stories

We never even found out who spread the word that she had been in that position. I read it was Casey originally, but he said he didn't and Xavier said he didn't. It was implied it was Romeo BUT my friend reckons that as Charlie told Brax, Heath must have found out. Heath was jealous cos he tried to chat up Ruby but she preferred his little brother, so he spread it around due to jealousy. There's never a simple answer in my H&A theories

Oh, I do. Don't worry . Oh good. Dex obstinately decided to remain straight in this fic, so I had to add a bit of camp Thanks Carina, Jarliefan and Jen. I'm glad everyone enjoyed it so much I am really sad now after finishing this and my last two stories. I'm relying on the rest of you now to cheer me up with your stories

Yes, but obviously if 'someone' writes another version, it doesn't have to end that way. Driving off together into the sunset is always possible...

Lifting dialogue! You mean making an affectionate homage to the films