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Do you know, I could have sworn I posted here to say thanks for the latest comments? But I was obviously imagining it Anyway, thanks Zetti, Red, Carina, Loz I'm glad you found it funny, Carina, that was the intention I think Heath suffers from foot in mouth disease tbh

Thanks for that dedication. Right back at you cos you are there when I rant about all my fics to you Go Roman Why did he have to leave the series? Big ! The secret language of men. Oh, I thought I\'d explode at that Good for you Nicole, you didn\'t have to do that. Good for you too Maz. Of course they knew! The perfect ending! Angelo, you\'re all man Brilliant fic Zetti, I really enjoyed it. I couldn\'t put as many smilies on this message as I wanted, the board wouldn\'t let me! Otherwise it would have been full of smiles and wubs

You are mistaken, Madame, how can you say that? I want to see more Nic/Ange definitely They are a passionate couple, always the best

Ah, don't worry about it being over in two weeks. Sometimes you have to go with the momentum and just get on with it, stories want to be printed and read. Nicole/ Angelo A few years ago, that combination would never have been thought of, but look at them now

Yay, Marilyn gave Rob to Nicole. I hoped Maz was mad, not bad. I'm so glad you brought Roman into this. If only he'd really come back to see Nic. Well done, this is a brilliant fic Never mind about the non SAS Roman. I'm sure I can come up with someone else to fill that role in the future, wonder who?

Aw what a sweet ending, nice and subtle. Well done Jen, you described and got into the heads of Dex and Casey perfectly. I liked the message at the end: don't judge people by how they appear externally But, you can't leave it there my dear. They should definitely get in trouble and be forced to run away together, especially with the violence of Heath that Casey mentioned. Your last post about the potential storyline was spot on (hint hint)

Argh! no! Marilyn come back! I can just imagine Roman swinging into action now and going all SAS to chase after Marilyn Crashing through windows on a rope etc like Mission Impossible. Great story, one of my favourites

Brilliant Z Roman and Roo They would be a good couple, wouldn't they? She would indeed keep him in line. That Marilyn! She's turning into a true villain, how dare she?? She will get her come uppance I hope! But at least Nicole has Angelo

thanks Red and Carina Carina, you never need to apologise for not commenting cos you are the most reliable commenter I've ever had. Please just do the best you can, don't worry

Oh fantastic chapter JT! Could not stop laughing. Leah and Ruby having a cooking contest! And the H1000 going back to Colleen's mobile home hahaha. He'll be a bit dishevelled when he comes out of there again. Pats on back, JT. I had a right old giggle over that Now, pressure's on me

Aw, how sweet. Nic/Ange They've got the first piece of their family in place. Its funny, this fits with what the series is doing right now, with Nic/Ange planning to run away together

I agree with Kevin and Danni, I love Leah/Miles

Thanks Loz. You know I like unlikely couples

Or will she? wait and see....

Oh, Roman If only he'd come back to see Nic and Angelo in the series. I'd forgotten about his friendship with Miles, that came across well. I loved the way Miles shoved him out of the door when Angelo came in. I liked him realising Marilyn was more hurt. Great chapter. I do think your writing is improving all the time Hope that doesn't sound patronising

Angelo, use the brain in your head not your other one! I think he might have gone too far for Nicole to take him back Oh, boo hoo

Great as ever Is it just me, or is Amy a bit clingy/ pushy/ sinister? It seems a bit odd to go back with Xavier when she'd only just met him Does she not have her own home?

Argh! Angelo! No! Marilyn is really the evil witch in this story isn't she? Poor old Nic and Rob, its all going down the drain... Oh, forgot to say thanks to Red for telling us the story of Angelo and Roman

They are hardly 'small boys' More like a road movie, constantly on the run from the law. Casey almost certainly knows about various types of crime, he could steal a car, steal other stuff, probably hold up a petrol station for the money... See, I'm doing it now A kind of Brokeback Mountain (with a happy ending) meets Thelma and Louise. Yes, a glamorous big sky adventure would be more my cup of tea, but its your fic

Really good story. This will strike a chord with most of the female sex, I think. I must admit I guessed it was Ruby because she is the only one with a mother present, out of the current teen girls. The other ones have absent mums. So really, Ruby is lucky to have her mum around. I can't really believe she didn't have a pregnancy scare in the series after the Romeo and Casey fiasco. It was poignant how she was disappointed at the end, but probably better for her. Who knows. Who can say what is best for people

(bows)

Thanks Belgshep and JosieTash Honestly, JT, I was thinking my episode wasn't as good as yours. You don't have to live up to anything, just write funny things

What was their history, remind me?

Thanks Pembie, Red, Zetti, Carina Yes, I wonder who that girl could be, hm? I decided that if I make myself laugh, it must be funny enough to put in Realised I didn't do a very good comment on JosieTash's episode: I loved Ruby's way of checking if it was the real Elijah and Leah with bible and cake questions And the Rominator's method of tracking Ruby and her taking it a bit further teeheehee! And him crashing through the wall. I bet we can get more Universal Soldier references in this somehow I almost like Universal Soldier as much as the Terminator

Aw Angelo crying in his room. I wish we'd seen this side of him more in the actual series, instead of Robocop Angelo Oh, this is the classic situation of he thinks she doesn't love him, she thinks he doesn't love her. Come on Roo and Roman, knock some sense into them! Hey, Roo and Roman.... that sounds quite good