Guest Posted July 29, 2017 Report Posted July 29, 2017 Great start everyone getting drunk just by seeing Irene. Irene can't get drunk Update again soon Quote
Inactive User Posted July 29, 2017 Report Posted July 29, 2017 Amazing start! Loved the part when everyone were all drunk Looking forwards to the next chapter 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 30, 2017 Report Posted July 30, 2017 Hilarious subversion with Irene incapable of getting drunk but everyone around her does.Tori's list of questions! Brody having a vineyard in the back garden! Kat wanting to blow her police whistle! Chris and Matt a couple! Looking forward to more. 1 Quote
Ludub Posted July 30, 2017 Report Posted July 30, 2017 Love this! It would be very frustrating being around a town full of people p!ssed as farts! Being around drunk people when you're sober is never fun! Even if she's the one causing this inebriation. Brody, my brother who keeps to himself in the backyard, lol! Loved Tori's list of questions. 'Do you feel the need to kiss me?' Lol! Alf and Irene are like a couple of little lovebirds, just circling round each other, how cute is that? Matt and Chris as a couple?! Surely that's just too much quipping for one town to handle? Haha! Can't wait for the next one . 1 Quote
Kellicopter Posted July 30, 2017 Report Posted July 30, 2017 This is amazing! The way you've written it, actually allows me to picture them all with big smirks on their faces! The Brody bit made me LOL! I cannot wait to read more! 1 Quote
Ludub Posted July 30, 2017 Report Posted July 30, 2017 I think I might be just as surprised by Matt and Chris' announcement! i might have spat my cornflakes out too! Have they figured out where they're getting the baby from? The high fiving is very funny! Sounds like the bay is suffering one hell of a hangover! But maybe there's worse to come if pumpkin juice has the effect that Irene seems to think it will! Looking forward to the next chapter x Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 30, 2017 Report Posted July 30, 2017 Is Chris expecting a visit from an actual stork? Raffy is a scarecrow!I'm starting to sense a theme... And Hunter's newfound father is a wizard?Okay... Looking forward to more! Quote
Inactive User Posted July 30, 2017 Report Posted July 30, 2017 Great chapter Loved the interactions between Chris and Matt. So funny! Update soon please xx Quote
Guest Posted July 31, 2017 Report Posted July 31, 2017 Great chapter Chris and Matt wanting to become parents. Raffy is a scarecrow? Update again soon Quote
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