bijou Posted July 1, 2017 Report Share Posted July 1, 2017 That was very well written like an episode of law and order SVU very well done 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 4, 2017 Report Share Posted July 4, 2017 Great chapter Poor Brody I wonder what is wrong with him. Raffy feeling left out again. Wonder who was watching Brody. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted July 4, 2017 Report Share Posted July 4, 2017 Great chapter Felt for Raffy as she is feeling left out Really intrigued about who is watching Brody Update soon please xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bijou Posted July 4, 2017 Report Share Posted July 4, 2017 (edited) Interesting I really think Justin's said the wrong thing at the last part before time jump Brody clearly isn't going to react well You've got Raffy nailed I think even Olivia Deeble would be impressed with that however I get Tori's a doctor and its in her nature to want go help but she kind of annoyed me in this chapter and Mason calling Kat was just another one of Mason's dumb ideas it's obvious Brody's not ready to talk just what did happen in the hotel room that led to Brody having a nose bleed and is he trouble again on the beach after all he was found passed out there i also don't know if I'm right but something tells me Brody was forced to have oral sex Edited July 4, 2017 by bijou 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted July 4, 2017 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2017 Kris I think he needs to work on his flattery skills his clearly not impressed in the way he was hoping too, and standing there in the dark looking oh so menacing isn't going to cut it either.. I can understand Brody's need to block out all sunlight and sit in a darken room Sometimes the sunlight is just too bright and seaking just doesn't cut it 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted July 4, 2017 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2017 Oh I have thought of a pun so you will be getting two comments from me.......What I should have said was Kris never managed to spike up Brody's excitement levels in the way he was hoping too. See run out of puns my eye 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 4, 2017 Report Share Posted July 4, 2017 Justin seemed to get it in the neck from everyone here, especially Tori, while trying to do the right thing by Brody...although that question probably wasn't the best thing he could have said.Buddy seems to have picked up on something but the dumb humans weren't listening.So...was that Kris waiting for Brody or someone else? 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 6, 2017 Report Share Posted July 6, 2017 Great chapter Oh Justin we all know you tried to be a good brother but why talk about Brody possibly being gay with Phoebe? I wonder how Brody got home as he seemed very confused at the end of Saturday night. This is really good. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bijou Posted July 6, 2017 Report Share Posted July 6, 2017 Didn't think Brody would react well to Justin's question we now know where he spent Saturday night however what happened on the beach still remains a mystery I really like it 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 6, 2017 Report Share Posted July 6, 2017 Well, good that Justin's family were understanding despite him messing up.A bit more information about Brody but we still don't know who this young man is or what he did to him... 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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