Ludub Posted June 26, 2017 Report Share Posted June 26, 2017 2 minutes ago, pembie said: I'm glad its in a positive way I can't think of another way to be honest haha Unless it's like the Joker i.e. with a knife? Oh god, that made me laugh! Thanks both of you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted June 26, 2017 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2017 We spiked your hurmour you could say Ok I will stop now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted June 26, 2017 Report Share Posted June 26, 2017 Had been catching with the last chapters of this fanfiction and I have to admit it's a great start to this fanfiction. Am looking forwards to the next chapter 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted June 26, 2017 Report Share Posted June 26, 2017 Great chapter Seemed like Brody was having a good time with Kris. It wasn't a good idea for Brody to discharge himself I hope Tori, Justin and Nate find him before it's too late. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted June 27, 2017 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2017 Hmmm this Kris guy his a very prickly fella methinks Brody seems to have gotten himself a very interesting sort of love bite on his neck? Brody is right to feel the need to get away hospital food is dreadful 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bijou Posted June 27, 2017 Report Share Posted June 27, 2017 1 hour ago, pembie said: Hmmm this Kris guy his a very prickly fella methinks Brody seems to have gotten himself a very interesting sort of love bite on his neck? Brody is right to feel the need to get away hospital food is dreadful That was my immediate thoughts to the marks on his neck another very well written chapter you're description of Phoebe thinking she's always right is spot on this Kris guy seems like one to keep an eye on also Brody's reaction to Nate touching him was very well done can't wait for the next chapter 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 27, 2017 Report Share Posted June 27, 2017 Well, Phoebe had her ideas about Brody and Kris but she may have been a bit wide of the mark.Brody certainly seems to be in an agitated state in the "present".My first thought was that he might have been injected with something..? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 28, 2017 Report Share Posted June 28, 2017 Hmm.Is Justin right in his suspicions about Brody?I can't think of any other explanation offhand, guess we'll have to see.Nice use of the Morgans' frustrating habit of leaving Raffy out of everything, although this time it's perhaps more understandable than some. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted June 28, 2017 Report Share Posted June 28, 2017 Great chapter Glad Brody was found. Like Red said the Morgan's never tell Raffy anything. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted June 28, 2017 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2017 That poor dog he must feel like his legs are about to drop off the number of walks he gets Last time Brody gets to have a family hmmmmmm very mysterious my intriging mind grows ever the spiker with wonder Oh forgot to say Mason was making a hell of meal out of that sandwich haha 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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