CharlieAndBraxLover Posted March 1, 2012 Report Posted March 1, 2012 Great chapter, i like the idea of charlie proposing but i think brax would want to be the one to do it to her. Awww jacob was so hurtful towards brax for no reason More soon please danni xxx Quote
RoRo90 Posted March 1, 2012 Report Posted March 1, 2012 Must have been hard for Charlie having to congratulate Bianca, when all she wants is to get married. Wow felt so bad for Brax bit surprised by the way Jacob acted towards him, he seemed ok not long before Hope he doesn't continue like that, also felt bad when he chose to put Angelo's name instead of Brax. More please that was another great chapter Quote
JosieTash Posted March 1, 2012 Report Posted March 1, 2012 REALLY enjoyed that, especially ….. “Congratulations.” Charlie forced a smiled as she looked down at the ring on Bianca’s finger. The ring that she saw just the day before and mistakenly took to be for her. “Try and sound pleased for me.” Bianca sighed as she pulled her hand away. “I am. I really am it’s just...” Charlie trailed off as she sighed. “I saw the ring in Brax’s office and I thought...I thought he...” “So maybe you could propose to Brax?” Bianca questioned. “I dunno...he’s always seemed pretty traditional when it came to things like that, like he should be the one to propose.” “Well you’ve got kids before marriage.” Bianca stated. “Not so traditional is it? Or well I guess that is more common these days.” Charlie shook her head. “Maybe you right. If I want to get married maybe I should be the one to propose. I’ve just always wanted someone to propose to me.” “Hey Bella.” Charlie smiled as she wrapped her arms around the girl and gave her a hug. “How was your nap?” “No like em.” Bella shook her head. “Aw would you rather be playing?” Charlie questioned and Bella nodded. “I bake?” Bella asked as she looked up at Charlie then looked to her mother. “Sure.” Bianca nodded. Bella smiled before she looked back up to Charlie. “Where Paige and Wiley?” “They are with their daddy.” Charlie answered. “Why?” Bella asked. “They are having a day where it’s just daddy and them.” Charlie smiled as she stood up and carried Bella over to the kitchen where Bianca had already taken out the Dora explorer cupcake mix. Bianca handed Bella a wooden spoon to mix the mixture with but Bella rejected the offer and threw her hands into the mixture laughing as it squelched between her hands. “Daddy stop it.” Paige giggled as Brax tickled his daughter. “Please daddy stop.” “Never. You’re stuck with the tickle monster now.” Brax laughed. “I help you Paige.” Riley shouted as she jumped up onto Brax’s back. “Ahh got you.” Riley laughed. “No.” Brax shouted as he fell into the sand and Paige jumped up onto his back too and both girls began tickling him. “I surrender girls...I surrender.” “No.” Paige giggled as she and Riley continued to tickle him. “The bestest.” Riley answered. “Swings, slide, tractor, monkey baa’s....the park the funest.” “I want a Wii.” Riley said as she looked up at Charlie. “Me too mummy.” Charlie nodded lightly before she stopped and looked up at Brax. “Brax are we ever going to -” “Mummy I need a pee-pee.” Paige said as she pulled on her hand and did a little dance on the spot. Charlie exhaled lightly as she looked down to her daughter. “We are nearly home sweetie, can you hold it in?” Charlie asked. “I try.” Paige said. “But we be quick.” Charlie and Brax picked up the pace as they walked home, remaining silent for the rest of the walk, Charlie deciding now wasn’t the best time to have this conversation with the kids being present. She only hoped that one day soon, Brax would take the hint and propose and she could finally become Mrs Braxton. Or perhaps Bianca was right, and maybe Charlie should bite the bullet and ask Brax the question herself. “Jacob Buckton-Rosetta is that homework?” Charlie asked as she looked round at the boy. Jacob nodded shyly. “Do we do homework at 7pm on a Sunday evening?” “No.” Jacob shook his head. “Friday right after school so it out the way.” “Maybe if it’s okay I could put my tummy daddy?” Jacob questioned. Charlie nodded lightly, slightly surprised at his choice. “If that’s what you want.” “Yeah. How you write his name.” “A...n...g...e...l...o.” Once again Charlie spelt it out as Jacob wrote it down. “And he just Rosetta not Buckton-Rosetta?” “You alright there mate?” Brax asked as he looked down to his worksheet. “Fine.” Jacob scowled up at Brax. “Oi.” Brax said. “I was only asking.” “Well you no need too. You not my real daddy.” Jacob shouted before he picked up the worksheet and his pencil case and ran from the room. Brax sighed lightly as he watched the boy walk away. For what he feared might happen when he found out the truth, might now be happening. Quote
~Zoe~ Posted March 1, 2012 Report Posted March 1, 2012 Had quite a few chapters to catch up on. Its really good. I'm enjoying this Quote
Zetti Posted March 1, 2012 Report Posted March 1, 2012 Ah Jacob..tricky area. Its normal for him to be angry about it but I hope Brax has the patience to wait it out, Jacob will come around to it again. Poor Charlie though, cannot be easy congratulating Bianca when all she wants is a ring on her finger.. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 1, 2012 Report Posted March 1, 2012 Ohhh, I thought maybe Brax would see the family tree and be upset but I wasn't expecting Jacob to be as blunt as that.Hopefully they can work it out. Quote
Spotd1 Posted March 2, 2012 Report Posted March 2, 2012 Great chapter Danni! I really hope nothing happens between Charlie and Ryan!! They always seem to run to someone else for comfort when things get tough..Brax and Bianca and now Charlie with Ryan..I can understand Charlie is upset but Brax did ask her to stay and talk it over...please update soon! Xx Quote
pembie Posted March 2, 2012 Report Posted March 2, 2012 Well Brax really messed up there didn't he. I felt sorry for him. I can see why Charlie stormed out through. RYAN'S back well I want him to go away again. Oh my I think I maybe starting to come over to wanting Chax to get married in this story. Hopefully Brax will ask her to marry him soon before Ryan gets in the way. Quote
CharlieAndBraxLover Posted March 2, 2012 Report Posted March 2, 2012 Hmmm, don't know how i feel about this. I get the PoV of both charlie and brax. Its a difficult situation. Interesting to see how it plays out. I like how they talked about it for a while, instead of running away straight away, even though she did in the end. More soon please danni xx Quote
Inactive User Posted March 2, 2012 Report Posted March 2, 2012 Awesome chapter Hope nothing happens between Charlie and Ryan! More soon please xx Quote
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