Forever Yours (by Danni02) - comments

[beebee]

YAY ... what an amazing chapter!! Loved that they were able to talk things out & that Charlie was able to let Brax understand what was upsetting her most!!!

Thankyou for an amazing chapter!! Please please don't make Brax the father of Biancas baby! (I'm just going to chuck this in every review LOL ... just for good measure)

xx

[mizziette]

“Baby they are amazing. And you know it would be unfair on everyone else if we kept making such great kids.”

Loved that line. So true. Those kids are the cutest. Great update.

[CharlieAndBraxLover]

Amazing couple of updates danni! Loved that chax talk at the end, glad they have worked things out (sorta). I'm just really scared and think yiu'll break them up again and brax will be biancas kids dad. More soon xx

[Dingo x]

Amazing chapter.

Loved the whole talk between Chax. I really hope Brax isn't the dad, I don't think Charlie would be able to handle it if he was.

Looking forward to more. xx

[Sazzle]

Fabulous last 2 updates! Loved their honesty with eachother and the love and humour portrayed. Really love your story and you are sogood to us all in updating so frequently. Still hoping there is some other guy that turns up and remembers his night with Bianca and that Chax can keep their happy time.

Loved Brax and Charlie and their conversation. Such good writing and really looking forward to more.

Thank you!! as always, fabulous!

[JosieTash]

Sooooooooooooooooooo glad that Charlie “broke” about what’s REALLYT going on !!!!

Adored EVERY LITTLE BIT of that, most especially ......

 “Exactly.” Charlie said as she felt herself welling up with tears. “Not even a mistake.” Charlie shook her head. “I can never give you any more children. The choice has just been taken from me and I can’t....it’s not...” Charlie broke down into tears as she hid her face from Brax’s view with her hands.

“Hey hey.” Brax said as he got off the couch and knelt down in front of Charlie. He placed his hand on her arm and rubbed it gently. “We didn’t have a choice.” Brax spoke softly. “You know it was this or losing you. Leaving Rubes, Jacob and the girls without a Mother and me....I’d have lost the love of my life.” Brax said.

“I know it had to be this way and I’m obviously grateful I still have my life, but I just can’t...it’s so hard to try to accept.”

“I thought you were coping okay. I’m sorry, you seemed to be fine. You know you seemed so strong and together.”

“Well I had to be.” Charlie cried. “Like you say. Rubes, Jake, the girls....they’ve need me.”

 “Well no.” Charlie shook her head. “I mean, it’ll be hard. I don’t know if I’ll ever stop feeling like I’m empty inside.....like part of what makes me a woman is gone, but, you’re right. We have so much to look forward too with Jacob and the girls....” Charlie trailed off as she smiled lightly. “And then there is Rubes. Maybe one day I’ll get to walk her down the aisle and see her have children.”

 “Okay yeah, it’s sad that we can’t have any more kids, but the ones that we have....” Brax smiled lightly. “Baby they are amazing. And you know it would be unfair on everyone else if we kept making such great kids.”

“I know you’re trying to be really sweet right now but it’s not helping.” Charlie continued to cry. Brax pulled her into a hug and gently rubbed her back. “I mean we’re never going to get the chance to hear a baby’s first cry, see a first smile, and hear a first giggle...” Charlie trailed off as she continued to cry.

“No, no we won’t.” Brax shook his head. “But we still have so many firsts with the kids that we do have.” Brax smiled. “We’ve still got to see the girls waving, crawling, walking, hear their first word, first haircut, first loose tooth.....Charlie there’s still so much we have to look forward to with the kids. The girls going to pre-school, Jacob starting the big school, his first surf competition, Riley’s first soccer goal, Paige’s first ballet recital, or whatever it is they are going to be into....their first Christmas, their first birthday, teaching them how to ride a bike....” Brax tailed off as he pulled Charlie’s head up softy so she was facing him again. He cupped her cheeks with his hands and wiped away her tears with his thumbs.

“The day the twins come home announcing they have a boyfriend.” Charlie managed a weak smile.

“Well now no.” Brax shook his head. “We’re supposed to be talking about nice things here. No boy is getting near my girls until they are at least 18.”

“Good luck with that.” Charlie laughed lightly.

 Brax smiled lightly before he looked to Charlie and into her expressive blue eyes. They were gorgeous. She was gorgeous. If he was to go with his head he and Charlie wouldn’t be deciding anything about their relationship until after the baby’s paternity was discovered, but his heart? Well that told him something else entirely, and in this situation his heart was going to win. He smiled lightly before he leaned forward and placed a soft kiss on Charlie’s lips. Charlie smiled into the kiss, knowing his answer.

[Red Ranger 1]

I loved the line about having too many great kids too.Good that they're going to give it a go, hopefully it won't all go belly up...

[~Zoe~]

Good that they're giving it a go. Great update.

[pembie]

Glad they talked things through and getting back on track for now anyway Hopefully Brax won't be the Dad.

Liked Brax's line when he said too many great kids too, and everything he said was so true, they do have a lot of stuff to look forward to with the children they do have.

[Jen1205]

Wow Danni, you are doing such a brilliant job on this fic.

So happy that they are working things out, I really hope the baby is not his and they can move on from it all. Looking forward to reading more