HighwayUnicorn Posted May 22, 2011 Report Share Posted May 22, 2011 Another great update. Love the portrayal of Rabbit as per usual. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elikell Posted May 23, 2011 Report Share Posted May 23, 2011 Loved it. Miles and Rabbits portrayals are very true to character and very amusing to read Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lozlovesh&a Posted May 23, 2011 Report Share Posted May 23, 2011 Loved it. Very amusing! Continue please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted May 23, 2011 Report Share Posted May 23, 2011 (edited) Great chapter. Liked it And I like the intercation between Lily/Rabbit Update soon xx Edited May 23, 2011 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted May 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2011 Cantwait to see where this is going I like the mystery to this story Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted May 24, 2011 Report Share Posted May 24, 2011 Tjhis is BRILLIANT !!!!! SOOOOOO much to love, especially ….. “Don’t you think people are going to notice that there’s suddenly a little girl living here?” Miles sighed.“Look, I’ll call Human Services, tell them we found her in the caravan park and we’re happy to have her stay until they find out where she comes from.Which will probably take them a while.” And Miles rolled his eyes.“Different?Oh great.That usually comes right before ‘I love you but as a friend’ or ‘Wow, Miles, you’re just like one of the girls’ or ‘It’s okay, I’ve got a cousin who’s gay’…You’re gonna say we should just be friends, aren’t you?” Gypsy pressed her lips against his in an impassioned and decidedly non-platonic kiss.“Convinced?”He nodded, not quite able to get his mouth to form coherent speech.“Good.”She kissed him again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted May 24, 2011 Report Share Posted May 24, 2011 I like the way everbody (including Rabbit) is surprised to see her but it gave them the opportunity to thank her in person. It'll be interesting to see how they're all interacting with her. Everyone else was silent for several seconds until Romeo spoke.“So, if I imagine seeing a girl-you know, one a bit older and hotter…would she become real as well?” I'd doubt it! I think it's nice that Miles and Gypsy are going slow and aren't living together yet. I love this part: “No, no.”Gypsy shifted slightly against him.“It’s good that you’re different.” Miles rolled his eyes.“Different?Oh great.That usually comes right before ‘I love you but as a friend’ or ‘Wow, Miles, you’re just like one of the girls’ or ‘It’s okay, I’ve got a cousin who’s gay’…You’re gonna say we should just be friends, aren’t you?” More please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted May 27, 2011 Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 Rabbit glanced round as Romeo and Nicole entered and grabbed Romeo’s hand.“Can’t Blondie here walk us in?” “I’m, ah, heading to the Diner first,”Romeo explained awkwardly. Rabbit fluttered her eyelashes at him.“Please?We’re just two defenceless little girls in a town full of psychos and weirdos.” “How about we all go to the Diner?”Nicole suggested,“Then it won’t just be you and your fan club, Blondie.” Romeo suddenly found he had both Rabbit and Lily holding his hands.He gave a sigh of resignation. “Okay, let’s go.” I couldnt stop laughing at Blondie Romeo glared at her.“Rabbit, can’t you just hop off?” Too funny. You can never fail to make me laugh Looking forward to more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted May 27, 2011 Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 That was another great chapter ... I just love Rabbit! Fantastically written as per usual. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elikell Posted May 27, 2011 Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 Loved it as usual. Rabbit makes me laugh. She's certainly different to anyone else! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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