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“I just wish there was somewhere the two of us could be alone together.”She was interrupted by an offended sounding gurgle from the pram.“Sorry, Ben, three of us.”

Aw how adorable! They can't forget about Ben! He's too cute! :wub:

Rabbit looked grumpy.“I kept getting told to stop talking.”

“Well, you do talk quite a bit…”

“See, now you’re making fun of me.People aren’t meant to make fun of me, I’m meant to make fun of them.”She sighed deeply.“It’s no fun when they answer back.”

She sure talks a lot! :lol:

“Rabbit…have a carrot.”Miles held the vegetable out to her.

Rabbit shot him a withering look.“I suppose you think that’s funny?”

That's funny to me! :lol:

“Nope, I’m the boss.”Alf took his fishing rod and a bucketful of bait from the back of the shop.“Which means I get to relax while you do all the work.All right with you, Ruby?”

I guess that's the greatest thing about being the boss. :P You can make other people work for you.

I'm finding it hard to imagine Liam and Bianca fishing, especially her!

I'm loving the way you're writing Rabbit! I love Lily and Rabbit's friendship as well! It's nice that they both have found a friend who has about the same age!

Keep up with the great writing! More please! :D

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Hilarious Rabbit :lol:

“Well, there’s a way to fix that, isn’t there?”Nicole looked at Rabbit’s piercing gaze and sighed.“I guess… I guess it’s not ideal, all of us living here, Ben in with me.Lucas and I have talked about getting our own place but…”

Rabbit patted her hand.“Leave it to Auntie Rabbit.”

Nicole looked at her sceptically.“Just like that?”

“Hey, have I ever let you down?”Rabbit saw Nicole start to answer.“They call that a rhetorical question.”

:lol: Best bit of the chapter.

Looking forward to more soon :)

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