Where the Heart Lies (by Red Ranger 1) - comments

[Miranda]

Oh great! You got into this quickly, I was expecting you to take a break for a while.

Loved the moments of awkwardness e.g. Xave feeling like a gooseberry, Romeo not knowing whether to help Ruby up into the seat or not. Foreshadowing of things to come.

I see that you bit the bullet and got Dex and April together, wonder if that will last...

Also the classic line 'fasten your seatbelts'. No doubt you will know that in a certain film, its followed by 'its going to be a bumpy night'. Well done.

I am so keen to see this fic develop, no pressure though dude

Edited May 6, 2011 by Miranda

[Zetti]

You get Dex and April together Didnt think you would do that.

I like Casey/Ruby in this chapter

Loving the awkwardness

Hope to see more soon x

[pembie]

good start looks like its going get very good as it goes on

update soon

[lozlovesh&a]

Loving it already. Poor Xav being the only one alone. Continue soon.

[HighwayUnicorn]

That was an amazing first chapter ... & I look forward to seeing how you continue this.

Well done & I look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx

[JosieTash]

This should be an intriguing “ride” …. given all the ‘ship history tween them, e.g. ....…

Not too far away, Dexter, April, Ruby and Casey were waiting by the minibus they’d hired.“I’m just amazed they invited me on this trip,”Ruby was saying,“We haven’t exactly been friends lately.”

“They needed someone else who could drive,”Dexter explained.

Ruby’s face fell slightly.“Thanks for shattering my illusions.”

“No problem.”

[Miranda]

I've been thinking: if- and I mean IF, cos I don't know what's going to happen- a love triangle develops between Xavier, April and Dex, how would April choose between them? Talk about the devil and the deep blue sea

[Inactive User]

Yayyyy another fanfiction! Great start Update soon xx

[lozlovesh&a]

I've been thinking: if- and I mean IF, cos I don't know what's going to happen- a love triangle develops between Xavier, April and Dex, how would April choose between them? Talk about the devil and the deep blue sea

Have you read the spoilers Miranda? About April & Dex I mean?

[Miranda]

I've been thinking: if- and I mean IF, cos I don't know what's going to happen- a love triangle develops between Xavier, April and Dex, how would April choose between them? Talk about the devil and the deep blue sea

Have you read the spoilers Miranda? About April & Dex I mean?

No! No I haven't. I haven't read any spoilers, I was just imagining what COULD happen both in Red's story or in the series.

I was just thinking aloud about how could she possibly choose? Xavier and Dex are both nice in different ways , neither is horrible and she would have a difficult decision. Would be a good storyline though. Better than Indi/Romeo/Ruby/Casey.