Miranda Posted May 6, 2011 Report Share Posted May 6, 2011 (edited) Oh great! You got into this quickly, I was expecting you to take a break for a while. Loved the moments of awkwardness e.g. Xave feeling like a gooseberry, Romeo not knowing whether to help Ruby up into the seat or not. Foreshadowing of things to come. I see that you bit the bullet and got Dex and April together, wonder if that will last... Also the classic line 'fasten your seatbelts'. No doubt you will know that in a certain film, its followed by 'its going to be a bumpy night'. Well done. I am so keen to see this fic develop, no pressure though dude Edited May 6, 2011 by Miranda Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted May 6, 2011 Report Share Posted May 6, 2011 You get Dex and April together Didnt think you would do that. I like Casey/Ruby in this chapter Loving the awkwardness Hope to see more soon x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted May 6, 2011 Report Share Posted May 6, 2011 good start looks like its going get very good as it goes on update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lozlovesh&a Posted May 6, 2011 Report Share Posted May 6, 2011 Loving it already. Poor Xav being the only one alone. Continue soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted May 6, 2011 Report Share Posted May 6, 2011 That was an amazing first chapter ... & I look forward to seeing how you continue this. Well done & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 This should be an intriguing “ride” …. given all the ‘ship history tween them, e.g. ....… Not too far away, Dexter, April, Ruby and Casey were waiting by the minibus they’d hired.“I’m just amazed they invited me on this trip,”Ruby was saying,“We haven’t exactly been friends lately.” “They needed someone else who could drive,”Dexter explained. Ruby’s face fell slightly.“Thanks for shattering my illusions.” “No problem.” Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda Posted May 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 I've been thinking: if- and I mean IF, cos I don't know what's going to happen- a love triangle develops between Xavier, April and Dex, how would April choose between them? Talk about the devil and the deep blue sea Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 Yayyyy another fanfiction! Great start Update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lozlovesh&a Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 I've been thinking: if- and I mean IF, cos I don't know what's going to happen- a love triangle develops between Xavier, April and Dex, how would April choose between them? Talk about the devil and the deep blue sea Have you read the spoilers Miranda? About April & Dex I mean? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda Posted May 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 I've been thinking: if- and I mean IF, cos I don't know what's going to happen- a love triangle develops between Xavier, April and Dex, how would April choose between them? Talk about the devil and the deep blue sea Have you read the spoilers Miranda? About April & Dex I mean? No! No I haven't. I haven't read any spoilers, I was just imagining what COULD happen both in Red's story or in the series. I was just thinking aloud about how could she possibly choose? Xavier and Dex are both nice in different ways , neither is horrible and she would have a difficult decision. Would be a good storyline though. Better than Indi/Romeo/Ruby/Casey. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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