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I dont know whether it's just me but I love xavier and he was even sweeter in that chapter! Are you gonna get him with April?? I hope you do because I really like them two together.

Romeo. I have no sympathy for him or Ruby. Two times is just asking for trouble.

I hope you update soon and yea I know how hard it is to get time on your day off to do anything.

Looking forward to the next update xx

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So, Dex and April aren't sleeping together, it seems. I could just imagine superstud Xavier revving up as he spoke to April :wink:

Indi is just too nice a person for Romeo. She has a low opinion of herself, poor girl, due to all these betrayals by boyfriends. I like the way you say that Romeo and Ruby 'have sex' whereas Ruby and Casey 'make love'. Very telling indeed.

Casey is soppy, I mean that as a compliment. He's heading for heartbreak, I've got a feeling he's the type to be really cruel if he's betrayed...

Brilliant chapter Red. This is a classic fic, its going to go down in history. No pressure though :wink:

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Oh yay! I love reading this fic! :D

Ah I loved Dex's line

"I would,"Dexter noted,"But I think I'll be too busy sticking pins in my eyes."

Romeo is trying to make Ruby jealous to what end? I hope you aren't thinking of getting them two together... would mean a division in the gang or is that your intention?? Hmmm! Curiouser and curiouser :lol:

Xavier's met someone? I hope it doesnt last, I would rather he end up with April even if it does break Dex's heart...

Looking forward to more whenever you can :D

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Romeo and Ruby back at the chalet eh? While Xavier surfs with Indi and Casey. Hm....

Oh, I hope Xavier finds happiness somehow, poor chap. I feel like apologising for the conduct of my namesake :lol: But I suppose he did make an idiot of himself.

Good chapter Red, its obviously leading up to something. Nice to see what Xavier thinks, its miserable being the odd one out.

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