The "Alternate" 2009 Mystery Storyline (by TelephotoMarigold, tessalove and Georgia) - comments

[Danni02]

Awesome start.

Looking forward to more!

[Scotcaz22]

What a strange twist!!! Really looking forward to the next chapter and seeing what you've got in store!

Loved all the twists on the names - sooooo funny!

Can't wait!

Edited November 16, 2009 by Scotcaz22

[Zetti]

I have started reading fics again and this one just makes me smile

[Danni02]

Haha! That was so funny!

Cant wait for more of this!

[Danni02]

Aww Ruby!

But Niff though....haha. Might have guess El wrote this chapter!

[tessalove]

Aww Ruby!

But Niff though....haha. Might have guess El wrote this chapter!

I have a Niff addiction! I big one haha!!

Im also not likng Ruby to much atm!

I hate this chpater though, im not good at writing comedy! :/

[Danni02]

Aww Ruby!

But Niff though....haha. Might have guess El wrote this chapter!

I have a Niff addiction! I big one haha!!

Im also not likng Ruby to much atm!

I hate this chpater though, im not good at writing comedy! :/

Really you have a Niff addiction?! I would never have known.....

Im not liking Ruby much lately either. Didnt like Angelo to much in that chapter either! lmao.

Aww it was a good chapter though!

[ish_the_angel]

hahaha this is great!

[adellejefferiesxox]

That was goood

Quick question (not related to chapters)... Are people importing fish fingers instead of Abalone?

[Georgia]

I loved that chapter. Purely hilarious El, and you say you can't write comedy

Can't wait for the next update