adellejefferiesxox Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 Aww Nic is so mean in this fic Poor Belle Please Aden just dump Nicole! I really loved that chapter, it was great how you showed Belle's image of herself and her feelings. At least Aden is trying to be nice, unlike Nicole. Bad memories of high school flood back reading this, but I can really empathise with Belle, so I still love this fic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rocknroll Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 great update! i loved how nicole warned her off.. i don't like her thinking of Belle as a slave! hmmmm Aden is a sweetie in this! update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meant2live Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 Awesome, glad she had a good first day at work, well til Nicole came along and blew everything up pretty much. Can't wait for more. Loving this Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni02 Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 So I read the first chapter then I didnt come back..... So just read the last 4 chapters and......wow. They are amazingly written, you are such a talented writer. You write emotion's and everything so well. Funny how Nicole kept getting Belle's name wrong and man she is such a meanie in this! Hope you update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 At least Belle's having the strength to resist.Nicole's princess behaviour sort of made me smile but unfortunately Belle took it to heart and was genuinely upset and blackmailing her over the job was very out of order.Not sure if she was getting her name wrong on purpose or if she just doesn't care. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 Poor Belle! I feel so sorry for her! I really hope she stays away from the drawer!! REALLY HOPE!! Great chapter as always! Update soon! El x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted October 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 oh gosh I hope Belle will be ok and someone finds her before its too late... maybe Aden... or Irene! beautiful update, Nicole is such a *****! am loving it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TelephotoMarigold Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 I hate Nic in this.... but you write Evil Nic well! And the scenes with Belle are heartbreaking! Very well done... Love Tele xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 WHOA!!! That was really really goooood!!!! You really captured the personality of people like Nicole in high school,poor Belle I really feel sorry for her. Damn you Aden, you should want to kiss Belle instead of Nicole!!! Great chapter G Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 I thought Belle was making progress when she stood up to Nicole instead of cowering away like she usually does but then she had another setback with Aden and it pushed her right back.Definitely not looking too good at the moment.Liked the mini-flashbacks showing us how she got there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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