jenpen08 Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 Arhh I've read this all but for now was the oppurtune moment to comment! The whole fic has been amazing!! Loved it!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 He didn't marry her!!!! YAY! lol That was the perfect ending, seriously Its been a great fic Hope to read more of your stuff..... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrongturntaken Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 That was amazing! Just a lovely summary of all the messages of the fic! I loved it! Clever doing the Aden/Belle bit first! I loved their conversation, it was so sweet! I'm sad this fic is over, i really enjoyed it! I hope you write more in the future, you're great at it! :D :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaiyaBlake Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 Aww that was an amazing ending! I'm glad most things worked out for them all I don't know what to say really, that whole fic was so good! Thankyou so much for writing it for everyone! I hope you write another one soon... Please? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anaya Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 Yay! Yay! Yay! Niff. Talk about ending on a high, the whole epilogue had me feeling totally ecstatic. Geoff's not as b&w as we think, confessing his love to Nicole on his wedding day to Melody, that boy's got shades of grey creeping in. The funny thing is he actually did the right thing for the first time in his life. He finally had the guts to choose what he wanted, who he loved, and to take a chance with Nicole. Not settle for what he thought was right for him, what was ultimately second best, not to settle for Melody. Also liked the Belle/Aden scene and how it played out in reverse order. I knew that Geoff chose Nicole & didn't marry Mel just from the lines Belle/Aden exchanged. Even though you didn't actually have them say it. Oh and in the chapter previous to the epilogue (didn't comment on it before as I just read it), I really liked the Geoof/Nicole scene, it was really written well & as a reader I could really feel the tenseness between them. Also the Nic/Aden exchanges were fun to read, witty as usual. Especially the whole cake stuff. Really well written story, always perfectly in character, and highly original. Well done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdoddy Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 That was really good, honestly this and December Mourning are my favourite stories so far.. write more soon, I actually think you might be my favourite author - your other Nic/Geoff wedding story was awesome too.. you know the most embarassing thing that could happen know is you coming back and saying that you didn't write those others and I had you mixed up with someone else! Glad everything was tied up, and I loved the exchange between Belle and Aden here, gives answers but it's only on second reading I truly understood what it was getting at! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
karter Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 That was really good, honestly this and December Mourning are my favourite stories so far.. write more soon, I actually think you might be my favourite author - your other Nic/Geoff wedding story was awesome too.. you know the most embarassing thing that could happen know is you coming back and saying that you didn't write those others and I had you mixed up with someone else! Glad everything was tied up, and I loved the exchange between Belle and Aden here, gives answers but it's only on second reading I truly understood what it was getting at! Nope I did write those as well, Glad you liked them. Thanks for all the feedback guys! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 YAY! Geoff didn't marry Melody. That whole Geoff and Nicole scene was great. Loved the Belle and Aden scene, too. I'm very that this has finished! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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