wrongturntaken Posted January 16, 2009 Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 OMG! Who hit Nicole?!?!?!?!? I really liked that Adelle scene! Twas great!!! Update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted January 16, 2009 Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 Nicole!!! Loved the Adelle scene, i'm really intrigued as to what happened! Poor Geoff, i hope he's ok!! Great update Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anaya Posted January 16, 2009 Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 *Gasp* Nicole's been bashed over the head. Who would do such a thing? Is it related to the secret anyhow?? Maybe it was Geoff (okay, that's stretching the imagination too much. ), but maybe he'll find her when he's out on his drive. Hey Karter, you really enjoy writing Nicole getting bashed or in a car crash (the last time being in DM). Oh & it was Geoff that found her in DM, let it be the same this time too. Yay! *hopes & prays* And Roman's married now. Eh? When did this happen?? How long's he been married? More importantly, who's he married to?? It better not be Martha , they're better as friends. A CaR marriage... that would be good. That Geoff/Irene scene felt really sad whilst I was reading it. Geoff came across so lonely & as though he was trapped where he didn't want to be (in Mel's clutches). He should talk to someone. Poor Geoffy. Lastly, I liked that Aden & Belle scene, angry Aden & defensive Belle. Wonder what she did, what the secret is?? The writing implies she cheated on him, and then lied about it too. In her words to protect, in his eyes out of cowardice. But the cheating may be too obvious, I bet it's something more. Anyway, great writing as per usual, but I want more. Update soon, Please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted January 16, 2009 Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 ?! Nicole!!! Great chapter once again. Loved all the different parts - Adelle, Geoff/Irene, Nicole! Cannot wait for more! Hopefully, with some more answers! xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdoddy Posted January 16, 2009 Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 good stuff there Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xGlowingAngelx Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 NICOLE! That's not good! Who on earth would do that?! Loved the Aden/Belle scene. Another great update. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symphony Posted January 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Yay I had two updates to catch up on - OH gosh, who attacked Nicole?! What happened between Belle and Aden?! Heck what happened between Geoff and Nicole?! So many questions - and who was Annie's date update soon pleaseee Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
karter Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Thanks for all your feedback guys, the next chapter should be up tomorrow night and just for you Anaya there will be a mention of a CaR baby Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symphony Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 YAY that they ended up talking i loved this chapter, and again love how you go into just enough detail but not too much! fabulous writing - i eagerly wait for more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaiyaBlake Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Glad he talked to her Nicole and Aden aren't together are they? Loved Nicoles reaction when she found out her car had been stolen Great Chapter. Update soon please? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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