LAURZY! Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 WOW!!! i did not think it was that lol Oh i so wanna see Nicole fight for him The convo between Aden and Belle was amazing, really well written Cannot wait to read more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anaya Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 I really liked the Aden & Belle scene. Their converstaion was very mature & I liked how they forgave each other yet everything's not miraculously back to normal between them. Everything that happened was a big deal & now they're still unsure about where to go from here. And yay for Nic fighting for her love. Even if Geoff's not a selfish person, Mel will never be enough for him. Update soon please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrongturntaken Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 Wow! That was a great scene! I love how you wrote it! I really hadn't even considered there might have been a baby involved, it's so sad. Geoff and Nicole should be interesting now. Can't wait for the next update! Soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdoddy Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 very good stuff - can't wait for extention on the Mel/Nic/Geoff triangle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 That was awesome. I loved their conversation. I like that they actually talked about it and forgave each other but they still aren't totally over it. GO NIC! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 Awww i loved the Geoff/Belle interaction!!! I hope Geoff does the right thing, i'm surprised Nicale said she wasnt doing anything! I really cannot wait to find out what happens next! it's so intriguing lol Oh and i was wondering what the name meant lol thanks for that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrongturntaken Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 LOVED that conversation!!! Great update! That's cool about the name thing! Update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anaya Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 Eh?! Nicole's giving up without a fight, that's not like her. But I undertsand what she means, Geoff (the silly fool ) chose Mel over her, it's not like Mel's scheming resulted in them being engaged. So Nicole's not going go professing her love to him. Geoffy already knows in his heart how she feels, so it's up to him to change things, if he's got the guts to. He better had. Really loved the Belle/Geoff conversation. It was classic Geoff confused about everything and clued-in Belle trying to show him the other side of the coin. For a boy adamant on always doing the right thing, it so funny how he always manages to royally screw-up & do the wrong thing. lol! Great writing, can't wait for the next update. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdoddy Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 really liked this chapter, but hope Geoff pulls his finger out.. and soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 I loved that conversation. That was some pretty classic Geoff stuff. Thinking he should do the right thing but not actually knowing what the right thing is. I hope he chooses Nicole and doesn't settle for second best for the rest of his life. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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