KaitieL Posted April 29, 2008 Report Posted April 29, 2008 Great start. I really like this, it's different. Are Bo's parents someone we know? I wonder what his real name is. More please. Quote
Luc Posted April 29, 2008 Report Posted April 29, 2008 Love it! It's a great start to the fic. Please update soon Quote
KaitieL Posted April 29, 2008 Author Report Posted April 29, 2008 OMG! Didn't see that coming at all. I thought maybe Bo might be Archie. Did they sleep together. Oh god. I'm still in shock, but I'm hooked. More please. Quote
emmasi Posted April 29, 2008 Report Posted April 29, 2008 (edited) Hehehe... I just can't do a plain old girl meets boy fic now can I ? Thanks for the replies, and sorry for posting it without the italics first lol. I have my proof reader chained to a desk, editing more chapters as we speak Edited April 29, 2008 by emmasi Quote
Jen Posted April 29, 2008 Report Posted April 29, 2008 Jem, it's fantastic! When Ella met Bo I was thinking of all the possible couples he could have belonged to. So great that it's Kim and Kit's. Can't wait to see how this all goes. “But what if we did do it?” demanded Ella hysterically. “What if I’m pregnant!? What if I give birth to an inbred freak!?” ^ Loved that bit! Quote
KaitieL Posted April 29, 2008 Author Report Posted April 29, 2008 An update. Yay. Poor Ella, here she is thinking that she's just conceived a baby with her cousin. Why can't she just take the morning after pill? They wouldn't be able to tell if she was pregnant the day after, would they? Loving this. More please. Quote
Jen Posted April 30, 2008 Report Posted April 30, 2008 It's great! The phone convo with Kim and Robbie was so well written. I can just imagine Robbie on the other end. Poor Ella ... I wonder if they actually slept together? I'm sure you'll let us know soon or later. Quote
emmasi Posted April 30, 2008 Report Posted April 30, 2008 An update. Yay. Poor Ella, here she is thinking that she's just conceived a baby with her cousin. Why can't she just take the morning after pill? They wouldn't be able to tell if she was pregnant the day after, would they? Loving this. More please. lol. That's about the time that you need proper medical research, which I clearly haven't done I have a theory that, being raised by Robbie and Tash, she'd feel like IF she was pregnant, it would be meant to happen... like fate... and she's clearly not keen on the idea of abortion, so... maybe stopping a fertilization that was "meant to be" would be just as bad in her mind... I kind of think that's why she's taking the "wait and see" approach... That's the long answer/excuse. The short answer is of course, where would be the drama in getting it all over and done with with a simple little pill straight away ? Thanks for the replies Quote
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted April 30, 2008 Report Posted April 30, 2008 Hey, I just read it all It's great, I love it. I love how you're incorporating all the babies. Maybe you could have Cassie's baby, a precocious sixteen-year-old that tries to get with Archie, and Ella gets jealous then annoyed at herself for being jealous Just an idea Quote
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