Barbara Posted September 19, 2007 Report Posted September 19, 2007 Poor Martha! I hope she will find a nice guy who will love her and respect her. Jack will be jealous and realise he is losing his best friend. Can't wait for the next chapter! Quote
Jamey-Maria Posted September 19, 2007 Report Posted September 19, 2007 (edited) Quote “Well, why doesn’t she do what you’ve done, go out and find someone to spend time with, someone different, someone exciting” she raised her eyebrows. Because she's not a slut like Lily. Can you not describe Jack's little sex romps in so much detail Rach? Put me right off my breakfast, lol. Make Martha call up that boy, the sweet one. Jack's a jerk. Please update soon. Edited September 20, 2007 by Jamey-Maria Quote
vale4eva Posted September 19, 2007 Report Posted September 19, 2007 ^^ Erm Where exactly was the detail? Apart from the few descriptive words, I thought I'd cut it down quite nicely. Be thankful I'm not writing sex scenes like I used to Krystal Thanks peeps, more should be up soon Quote
bay girl Posted September 19, 2007 Report Posted September 19, 2007 I don't really like Jack that much. He just keeps screwing up, and hurting Martha. He can go away. And Martha can find someone else. Quote
Tasha Posted September 20, 2007 Report Posted September 20, 2007 Poor Martha Jacks a jerk Lily is a slag Great chapter More please Quote
Jamey-Maria Posted September 20, 2007 Report Posted September 20, 2007 vale4eva said: ^^ Erm Where exactly was the detail? You asked for it... Quote He gently kissed her back, his hand cupping her cheek as he did so; the tender moment soon transforming into something much more passionate however. Truth be told, having a naked woman standing in front of him, at his mercy, willing to devour him, right then and there, was just that little bit too much for Jack to handle, so, he proceeded to deepen the kiss, his mind and common sense being thrown out of the window as his hormones yet again took over. Getting lost in the moment, he wrapped his arms around her warm and soft body, his hands trailing around her back and to her front as he pushed her up for more. She moaned through pleasure as his hands worked her front, her body was now tingling all over; right from the top of her head to the tips of her toes. She had never felt so alive! Now you may not think so much of that, but I call 9 lines a little too detailed for my liking. But yes you're right it is a lot more tame than your usual stuff, lol. BUT when you're writing it about J&M we will excuse you. Quote
puja Posted September 20, 2007 Report Posted September 20, 2007 Jamey-Maria said: You've got poor Puja thinking that Lily is Laurie. Lmao! My bad I blame this fever I've got; plays havoc with the brain! LILY is a joke. I mean, I know it's Jack and all but, what a complete desparado Jack should learn the concept of the word 'No'- it's not that hard! More soon please Quote
Zetti Posted September 20, 2007 Report Posted September 20, 2007 Love the chapter but not the bit with Jack and Lily and all the other bits More please Quote
Zetti Posted September 20, 2007 Report Posted September 20, 2007 Love the chapter but not the bit with Jack and Lily and all the other bits More please Quote
Jamey-Maria Posted September 21, 2007 Report Posted September 21, 2007 Make him get an STI Rach! That's a shock, and it'll teach him not to sleep around so much. Quote
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