Zetti Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 Lily isnt happy. Jack and Martha forever Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 Great fiction! I love Martha and Jack's relationship. They're so close and so cute. They should be together. I hope Lily will leave them alone. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 awwww...Jack was a jerk, but I love him now Im glad he chose Martha over Lily. Me no like Lily. And Marthas right aout Laurie, the poor girl Great chapter More please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bay girl Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 Lily's a dog. And Jack's still a jerk. Martha still needs to find a guy to **** Jack off. Great update Rach. Can't wait for the next one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamey-Maria Posted September 17, 2007 Report Share Posted September 17, 2007 (edited) Jack doesn't seem to have any problems with where he pokes his... *ahem*... man-hood, does he? As long as she has boobs and a pulse that is... It was a sweet chapter though. Especially when he kissed her cheeck. I feel for Lily, and Laurie. Especially Lily though. He just decided to sleep with her the night before and toss her aside casually the next. Jerk face he is. Great chapter Rach, update soon-ish. Edited September 17, 2007 by Jamey-Maria Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shortie_689 Posted September 18, 2007 Report Share Posted September 18, 2007 SO DON'T LIKE LILY!!! I don't feel sorry for her I think she is mean and I don't like that she is going to try and get in between Jack and Martha and she can't do that, that would make her a meany!!! Keep it up I am really enjoying this story!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam =) Posted September 18, 2007 Report Share Posted September 18, 2007 Exactly who are they kidding? Update soon. Jacky is back to being nice to martha now Lily is a tart Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted September 18, 2007 Report Share Posted September 18, 2007 Rach, you broke my heart *wipes away tear* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puja Posted September 19, 2007 Report Share Posted September 19, 2007 Jack can be such a sweetheart sometimes I loved it how he ignored Laurie and went and sat with Martha at the end Maybe Laurie will back off now I still like the idea of Martha hooking up with someone else though...an over-protective, over-sensitive and slightly jealous Jack would be fab! This is really great. Can't wait to read more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamey-Maria Posted September 19, 2007 Report Share Posted September 19, 2007 See Rach. Too many other chicks. You've got poor Puja thinking that Lily is Laurie. You're meant to be updating today too... just a little reminder. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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