kaciexox Posted September 21, 2007 Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 she loved it really they should just give in to each other already great chapter update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caitrules Posted September 22, 2007 Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 I have to agree with Krystal. Definately give him a STD that will put him out of action for a while. That will teach him to keep it in his pants Dont make any of his 'conquests' pregnant. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted September 22, 2007 Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 Hehe, Great chapter Jack is evil Poor Martha More please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bay girl Posted September 22, 2007 Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 I really do not like that grl. She's going to end up causing prblems for Jack and Martha. Intentionally too.! She's a cow. Great chappie. Can't wait for more. Just hook Martha up with some guy. **** Jack off a bit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam =) Posted September 22, 2007 Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 Hmm Jack's shock has to be something good like say finding out Martha has feeling for him. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted September 22, 2007 Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 Funny chapter. Thank God Jack came before that guy could do something to Martha. Martha is hilarious when she's drunk. I don't think she will be that happy to wake up in Jack's arms... practically naked. Especially if she remembers taking a shower in front of him! Please update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aejdude Posted September 22, 2007 Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 (edited) You know i love it but seeing as this is my first comment [only started reading last night and finished it now ] i just like to say that i think the storyline has been really good and that it's good it's not just a typical Jack and Martha fic where they are together already it keeps you wondering whether they are going to get together. The latest chapter was good, glad that henry didn't do anything don't really like him and definitely don't like lily/laurie +[any other future interruption although hope there isn't another one but seems like there will be] in a way i am glad martha got drunk because even though it may not have been the best thing to do what jack has seen he can't take back which means he'll be thinking about her even more now he's seen parts of her and less about others and hopefully he'll stick to what he said at the end - the only way he can make sure it doesn't happen again is by not leaving her for some other chick which means he prob won't be going with as many if any from now on and hopefully then can start to become a couple now although i wouldn't put it past you if you didn't make them one yet . Can't wait for next chapter. Edited September 22, 2007 by aejdude Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted September 23, 2007 Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 A drunk Martha <33 I dont think i could have asked for more "im not drunk. Im just happy" My favouritest Martha line Great chapter More please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaciexox Posted September 23, 2007 Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 protective Jack is just too cute love drunk martha update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamey-Maria Posted September 23, 2007 Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 Rachel you scare me.... Martha is an annoying whiney little 5 year old (who is HILARIOUS when drunk) and Jack is some weird overly possesive sex maniac. I don't actually want them to be together now... they have more of an older brother/younger sister relationship going on... minus the fact they're not related, lol. That chapter was funny though, I especially loved this bit: There was no way he would be able to sleep in the same bed as her tonight! Not only was the prospect of sharing a bed with a half naked woman (who just so happened to be his best friend) a mixture of temptation as well as torture. But he’d also have to worry about him accidentally grabbing something … or two things to be exact. He he he. Please update soon with another lovely LONG chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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