aejdude Posted September 25, 2007 Report Share Posted September 25, 2007 I can't say great chapter because lily was in it. But it was a good chapter the jack and martha stuff was good up until lily lol but yeah i agree with Amber why couldn't jack just walk away from lily and go with martha that bit sucks. Anyway update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacksthehottest Posted September 25, 2007 Report Share Posted September 25, 2007 Excellent few chapters Like everyone else i loved a Drunk Martha aswell, so funny . But what is Jack doing I don't like Lily she seems to be everywhere lol, Poor Martha Please update soon, i can't wait to read more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Jade- Posted September 26, 2007 Report Share Posted September 26, 2007 Update! Update! Update! *chants and stamps feet* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted September 26, 2007 Report Share Posted September 26, 2007 Great chapter. I liked it when Martha started to remember the previous night. Jack couldn't stop laughing. It was funny. I hate Lily!!! Poor Martha. Jack should have stayed with her. He's going to regret this. I don't want them to fight! Please update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
x_kym_x Posted September 26, 2007 Report Share Posted September 26, 2007 Excellent chapter, mind you they're all awesome You write unbelievably well, its so easy to get into the characters I completely hate Lilly, desperate or what?? And i felt so bad for Martha i just wanted to slap Jack, when will he ever learn. I'm not liking the sound of 'oh dear' either Looking forward to an update Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Jade- Posted September 26, 2007 Report Share Posted September 26, 2007 (edited) Arghhhhhh, JACK!!! You pathetic man. Let me tell you a few things (hope you're listening Rach )... 1. Lily is pathetic, obsessive and stupid. She needs to GO, and you need to stop granting her every wish and falling for her stupid excuses. 2. Stop making it up to Martha for ditching her for Lily (even though, I swear, if my memory is correct, that it was indeed Martha who you actually invited on the trip) and then doing the same thing all over again! 3. And you know what? I had a lot more to say but it's just left my brain. lol 4. Oh yea, start treating Martha like she actually means something to you. Idiot. As you can see, wasn't particularly happy with Jack there....or Rachel for that matter since you're writing the damn thing. BUT, other than those 'issues', I'm loving the fic. It's great and it's original, seriously brill writing (wouldn't expect any less from you) and even though I don't always comment (erm, more like never) I do read it and I it. Great stuff Rach! *thumbs up* Edited September 26, 2007 by -Jade- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-x-Siana-x- Posted September 26, 2007 Report Share Posted September 26, 2007 (edited) Why is Jacky being such a.... a... well a man! The whole way through this he only thinks with his pants... but one does still love the whole story! Stupid!!! I dont like Lily! He needs to stop doing whatever she says... *Stamps feet and has a little tantrum!* I dont like her!!!! Hmmm anyways besides the fact that I hate Lily... and Jack was just being a typical man and only thinking with his pants... It was brilliant!!! So please update soon! Oh and thanks .... But i really hate my name Siana__x Edited September 26, 2007 by -x-Siana-x- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamey-Maria Posted September 26, 2007 Report Share Posted September 26, 2007 Jack is going to lose her. And it'll serve him right. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bay girl Posted September 26, 2007 Report Share Posted September 26, 2007 (edited) I want Jack to feel pain. Martha's needs to hurt him. A-hole. And Lily is just pathetic. Edited September 26, 2007 by bay girl Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted September 27, 2007 Report Share Posted September 27, 2007 Jack sucks! Martha deserves better liiiiike Michael *hides from haters* Lily sucks too, but hopefully we wont have to hear of her again. I wont be surprised if she pops up in the Bay pregnant And what about poor Laurie Great chapter More please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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