holden_girl9051 Posted September 8, 2007 Report Share Posted September 8, 2007 aww that was such a cute ending great chapter please update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam =) Posted September 9, 2007 Report Share Posted September 9, 2007 Aww That was absolutly adorable cutest thing ever Just hurry up and get together they basically are anyway Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puja Posted September 10, 2007 Report Share Posted September 10, 2007 Gorgeous Too gorgeous! Martha is way to innocent; it's cute. Even though I didn't like her comments, I think Tasha is right. Martha is way too dependant on Jack. And, if things go further with this Laurie, she'll have a rude awakening! Looking forward to reading about their little trip. I think it's practically impossible for them to get closer than they are currently but, I hope we see some changes to their relationship after this holiday Please, please update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bay girl Posted September 10, 2007 Report Share Posted September 10, 2007 I do not like that girl. And i dont want Jack seeing her when he gets back. He belongs to Martha. Geez, when are they gonna do it? They both want too; but just haven't realised yet. lol. Can't wait for another update. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted September 10, 2007 Report Share Posted September 10, 2007 awwww...Jacky got angry at Martha Martha met Laurie, im glad she likes her, but does she really? Great chapter Cant wait for the holiday More please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-lolly- Posted September 11, 2007 Report Share Posted September 11, 2007 I should apologise for my lack of comments on this fic, i do mean to i just always read it either really late or really early (for me anyways ).. Anyways, there's not much more to say except i love it! "Your not flabby, you're still as gorgeous as ever" N'awww, that is so cute. I love the relationship that Jack and Martha have, although i wish it was more than just friends - they may as well be they're so loving towards each other already. Please, please update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaciexox Posted September 11, 2007 Report Share Posted September 11, 2007 too cute what is Jack doing chatting up a girl when he is already seeing someone but she should be seeing Martha they're practically together anyway please update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted September 12, 2007 Report Share Posted September 12, 2007 awww poor Martha Jack is going to hurt Martha isnt he?? What a butt Great chapter though More please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamey-Maria Posted September 12, 2007 Report Share Posted September 12, 2007 You know he will. Man whore. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaciexox Posted September 12, 2007 Report Share Posted September 12, 2007 Jack is going to give into temptation isnt he marthas not going to be too happy great chapter, i just hope Jack doesnt hurt Martha like Tash thinks update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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