Complicated Desires, Forbidden Meetings (by matticus01) - comments

[dolly-999]

Nice start, it's certainly looking interesting already, I'm guessing the girl was Martha?

Can't wait to read more, good job.

[katie343]

OK I'm hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

xx

[Barbara]

Yay you already posted the first chapter of your new fic!

Nice start. I already like it.

I'm guessing the girl's Martha.

Their families are enemies. That sounds really promising.

More please.

[matticus01]

lol glad you all like it so far

i thought i would psot the first chapter before i posted the last chapter on my other fic so hope you like the end of my otha fic

[*caitie*]

YAY!!!Another fic!!!Great so far!!!!

Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Barbara]

The girl is Martha!

Martha's a very bad girl. Sneaking out when her parents aren't home...

She's a heavy sleeper, isn't she? She didn't hear the maid clean her room.

Martha smiled but that smile soon faded when she knew that they could never be, for if Jack Holden ever found out it was his arch enemies princess who had fallen for him, this war would end in disaster.

She knows who Jack is but he doesn't. Wonder what Jack's reaction will be when he finds out.

Love the DeadSexy nickname.

More please.

[valli]

Ah, so the girl was Martha. She's a very bad girl, isn't she? Sneaking around in the middle of the night, acting like a slut

She reminds me of me when it comes to sleeping. She's a heavy sleeper, so am I. I never hear if something is going on unless I'm almost awake

Wonder how Martha found out that DeadSexy () was Jack, but Jack hasn't been able to figure out that WonderGirl is Martha. Wonder what will happen when he does

If Jack and Martha love each other, but the families are enemies and refuses them to be together, then let the war begin

More please!

[dolly-999]

This reminds me of Romeo and Juliet, I just hope they don't die at the end.

Good Job.

[*caitie*]

Great update!!Can't wait 4 more!!!

[Channy!!!]

Great fiction it's very original which is great!

can't wait for a new update!