Tasha Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 A baby boy You can call him Jayson Holden Yay! Great chapter More please soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 That was such a sweet chapter! They have a cute little boy! I love Eli. She's funny and cute. More please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 It was a feeling beyond words to have its warm soft skin under your own, seeing its little button nose, tiny delicate fingers and those big almost black eyes looking up in amazement. Aww. You had me from then on So cute “I cant get over how much I love him” she shook her head in disbelief, her eyes not leaving the little man tucked up neatly in his yellow fluffy blanket. “I’ve never fallen in love with anything so quickly”. Jack sat beside her, his arm around his girlfriend, completely in awe of how stunning his son was. He couldn’t talk, the solid lump in his throat preventing his speech. “He looks just like you Jack … he’s so beautiful” she smiled, finally managing to tear her eyes away to look up at her boyfriend. “Are you alright?” she asked at his state of silence, her brows knitting together ever so slightly, before her eyes fell back to her son, her smile reappearing. He was too cute not to smile at. Perfectly put. Awesome! Eli is too cute and funny especially in this bit. “He smells kinda funny” Eli scrunched up her nose as she looked back at everyone. The gentle laughter from the adults, bought the plain white walls to life. Well, that and the many beautiful flowers and cards which also added colour and delight. “That’s what baby’s smell like silly” Jack laughed at her. Update again soon x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zzazzb Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Eli's adorable! and yay for a baby Jack I loved Martha "Huh Baby" great update! more soon Please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaitieL Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 I've been reading, just forgot to comment on the last couple of chapters. Sorry. Awwww a little baby boy. They way you described how she felt after the birth was perfect, all the emotions were spot on. Exactly how I felt. Except I had a name fo him. So you better hurry up and update cause I want to know what she calls him. More please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dee83 Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Yeah i can`t for an update and I hope she choose a nice name for him and not a silly ones or not old fashioned ones choose a name that suits him well and fits with his last name update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stephyrose4 Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 Yay a boy! How adorable. Lol Eli is so cute and funny, " he kinda smells funny" made me laugh. More please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaiyaBlake Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 I just read this whole fic... It's amazing Awww they are so sweet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Thanks for the brilliant back-from-school-camp present They're having a boy!!!!!!!!!!! :wub: Babies everywhere...next year there will be FOUR new bubs in our family! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dee83 Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Great so far can`t wait for the next chapter Update Soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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