puja Posted April 26, 2007 Report Share Posted April 26, 2007 (edited) Tony reached over and took one of Martha’s. “Hey, I’m not just Jack’s dad,” he started. “I’m yours too,” he told Martha. “Thank you,” Martha squeezed his hand tight. She felt her eyes tear up a bit. Jack and Lucas were so lucky to have him. Aww, that was very well written; so sweet! That woman from the hospital sounds plain evil! Mrs Holden had better watch her step *gulps* Martha may not be looking forward to the conversation, but we all are Can't wait for the next update Amber! Edited April 26, 2007 by puja Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linzie_mac01 Posted May 1, 2007 Report Share Posted May 1, 2007 Good chapter, but please, they have to talk in this next chapter, before something happens to Martha! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bay girl Posted May 3, 2007 Report Share Posted May 3, 2007 Next chapter is coming soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-lolly- Posted May 3, 2007 Report Share Posted May 3, 2007 Awesome. Can't wait! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted May 3, 2007 Report Share Posted May 3, 2007 You've just made me very happy Amber Looking forward to it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted May 3, 2007 Report Share Posted May 3, 2007 That was so..... Finally there getting somewhere, its about damn time Martha stopped acting like such a fool It was all so perfect! Well it was, until - NEXT CHAPTER: Uh Oh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I mean what the heck is that Amber!!! You just want to ruin it all dont you! *cries* Anyway, GRRReat chapter. Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted May 3, 2007 Report Share Posted May 3, 2007 Amber, i dont like "uh ohs" Evil lady is coming back But great chatper. They are finally together, took them long enough, or Martha i should say. But that was great. That first part was intense, but the second was was beautiful. More please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted May 3, 2007 Report Share Posted May 3, 2007 That was fab :wub: :wub: I'm so happy right now!!!! But why do I feel its not all going to go according to plan and the plan is: To live happily ever after!! That was soo worth the wait!!!! Update soon P.S. Im choosing not to notice the Uh Oh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Part Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*J&M* Posted May 3, 2007 Report Share Posted May 3, 2007 Brilliant writing! Loved the part update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted May 3, 2007 Report Share Posted May 3, 2007 (edited) YEY! An update! Get in! N'awww! So cute! What's going to happen!? Its that woman, isn't it!? She tried to kill her before, and she'll do it again! Evil witch. More soon! Edited May 3, 2007 by Nicom Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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