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That was so..... :wub:

Finally there getting somewhere, its about damn time Martha stopped acting like such a fool

It was all so perfect! :wub:

Well it was, until -

NEXT CHAPTER: Uh Oh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I mean what the heck is that Amber!!!

You just want to ruin it all dont you! *cries*

Anyway, GRRReat chapter.

Update soon :)

^^ My thoughts exactly!

I was sitting at my desk, my smile getting bigger and bigger by the second so that I was looking like a complete fool, and then you go and put a spoiler like that.

It was a brilliant chapter Amber but I'm not happy with that last line. Just a little tip - you may want to change it. :)

Please update when you can. :D

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NEXT CHAPTER: Uh Oh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol, what's that suposed to mean? Maybe they get walked in on by Tony, Joy comes and barges in or something, I just hope it's not that lady who wants Martha dead.

Loved the Jack and Marthaness in that chapter, glad she finally started telling the truth.

Can't wait to read what happens next.

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Finally! :D Martha put her ego aside and now they're togther again :wub: That chapter was so cute Amber, really good!

:huh: Don't like the sound of the preview though...

Can't wait for more, please update as soon as you can!

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Corey's mother? I'm guessing she was the woman from the hospital. Glad Irene didn't have memory loss too.

:wub: JnM were so cute in that chapter. Hope Jack's talk with Joy goes alright.

Can't wait for more.

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Corey's mother? I'm guessing she was the woman from the hospital. Glad Irene didn't have memory loss too.

:wub: JnM were so cute in that chapter. Hope Jack's talk with Joy goes alright.

Can't wait for more.

I agree with all that

God Corey is loser!!!!!

JnM :wub:

Update soon

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