vale4eva Posted March 15, 2007 Report Share Posted March 15, 2007 Oh dear oh dear! Belles not to happy with Amanda! Dont blame her though! Jack and Val seem to get along really well, do i sense there could be 'something' there! Why arent JnM friends though i guess she just really hurt Jack when she slept with Ashton! Jack, your better off without her! Ooo, did i say that! Update soon! Great chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted March 15, 2007 Report Share Posted March 15, 2007 Well yeah who could blame just Amanda?? You will have to see what is in store for Jack and Val you are rushing my thoughts lol just joking they are gonna go their ways onley to find friendship in tragedy and thats all im gonna say Tnx i will update really soon Tnx for al the response Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
allibaz91 Posted March 15, 2007 Report Share Posted March 15, 2007 Awwww feel a lil bad for Amanda now!! but Belle's quite right too ..... Lol at least Jack senses trouble Great update!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted March 15, 2007 Report Share Posted March 15, 2007 Jack be nice I like Mitzi Poor Amanda Great chapter. Can we have more Martha please?? Maybe with her own new love interest More please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sally_Fletcher Posted March 16, 2007 Report Share Posted March 16, 2007 Heyyyy! Good update, you didn't email it to me so I was surprized to see that you've updated! But it's all good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted March 16, 2007 Report Share Posted March 16, 2007 That was great...but I agree Jack & Valarie seem to be getting on VERY well...I hope this doesn't go any where lol...Gooo Belle...Update soon..xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted March 16, 2007 Report Share Posted March 16, 2007 Thanks for the possiteves reply's guys i apresiate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted March 18, 2007 Report Share Posted March 18, 2007 Chapter 5 The caravan park Valerie walks to her caravan from Sally's house she hears a noise and grabs for her gun she sees a dark figure…. VALERIE: Hello… Is any body there? Turns around pointing her gun in Jack's face JACK: Hey, calm down... Takes his hand and push the gun downwards VALERIE: You startled me! Smiles and looks down JACK: You are shaking! Pulls her into an embrace VALERIE: Do you want to come in for coffee? Looks up at Jack and releases herself from his embrace JACK: Sure! His phone rings he pics it up it is Peter he gets bad news over the phone Sorry Val, It was Peter I have to go to the station Rushes off VALERIE: Drive safely Jack She calls after him She sits down the steps of the caravan MITZY: Hey Valerie! VALERIE: You must be Mitzy. Smiles MITZY: Yes, that is me VALERIE: Would you like to come in for coffee? MITZY: That would be awesome neighbor Chuckles The two off them enter Val's caravan not even noticing the figure standing next to Mitzy's caravan…. Sally's house (Brad enters the kitchen) Brad looks trough the kitchen window towards the caravan park and sees a man /woman in black runnig from between the caravans (Sally enters) SALLY: Brad what are you looking at? BRAD: I'll be back now Sal Runs out the back door SALLY: Be careful… Sighs, goes, and sit on the couch(Brad enters again trough the back door) SALLY: And… BRAD: It was to dark could not see him Sits down on the couch with Sal Police station (Jack enters Peter's office) PETER: We have a problem on our hands Jack! JACK: What is it.. PETER: I got news that there was a burglary at a gunshoppe in the city! JACK: What does that have to do with summer bay? PETER: It was gang related JACK: Who? PETER: I just hope Val is okay.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted March 18, 2007 Report Share Posted March 18, 2007 I hope Val is ok too And who is that figure??? GReat chapter More please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted March 18, 2007 Report Share Posted March 18, 2007 WHAT! Noooooooo! You cant hurt Val! So let me get this straight, a gang stole a gun, but how is that related to Val? Or do we find out in the next chapter? Great chapter, for a second there i thought something might have happend between Jacky and Val. But nope, not yet Update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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