allibaz91 Posted March 12, 2007 Report Share Posted March 12, 2007 Love the update!! Awwww Brad wants to propose What prisoner?! Awww at Jack and Valerie too - something in the air? Great chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sally_Fletcher Posted March 12, 2007 Report Share Posted March 12, 2007 Brally, Brally! Yay! Loved it darl, update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilone Posted March 12, 2007 Report Share Posted March 12, 2007 This is really good. please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted March 13, 2007 Report Share Posted March 13, 2007 Sure will do guys tnx for the great response allibaz91 - The identity of the prisoner will be reavealed soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sally_Fletcher Posted March 13, 2007 Report Share Posted March 13, 2007 It's... it's... It's Jack's evil twin! Aaaargh! Lol, just kidding, had to do that. Amanda please - put some Brally in it or I'm going to kick you out of my house when you come to stay with us. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted March 13, 2007 Report Share Posted March 13, 2007 Agggg Sally u would never kick me out of ur house u will miss me to much And then ill get a tent and kamp on ur snake ridden grass lol just joking Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted March 13, 2007 Report Share Posted March 13, 2007 Thanks for all the feedback Im sure you will like this update Take care Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted March 13, 2007 Report Share Posted March 13, 2007 THE DINER Valerie and Jack VALERIE: That was the best cake I had in ages… JACK: Well we could always have some more..! He laughs VALERIE: No thanks, I'll pass. Have to watch the figure. Laughs JACK: There is nothing wrong with your figure! But... COLLEEN: Jack love, would u like anything else. JACK: No, thank u Colleen it was great COLLEEN: And u love? She smiles at Valerie with a glitter in her eyes VALERIE: Oh,.. No thanks Colleen I am fine thanks it was nice though. COLLEEN: Okay then. She turns around and walks back to the kitchen (Martha enters the diner) MARTHA: Hello Jack JACK: Hey Martha.. MARTHA: Good to see u… Smiles at Jack with a frown on her face JACK Shouldn't we get back to the station Val? Seeks an answer in her eyes VALERIE: Sure Peter is probably freaking out already. (Jack and Valerie exits the diner) Back at the Station (Jack and Valerie enter) PETER: Back so soon? JACK: Yes, we had a run in with Martha VALERIE: Who is Martha? PETER: She is Jack's ex-wife Rolls his eyes and walks into his office VALERIE: What happened between the two of u Jack? JACK: Between Martha an me? VALERIE: If I may be as bold as to ask! JACK: She cheated on me with my best mate when I was in hospital! VALERIE: I am sorry Jack Turns her face to the side JACK: Do not be it was not your fault! Looks down then Smiles at Val PETER: Jack, Valerie can I please see you in my office? (Jack and Valerie heads into Peter's office and close the door) Summer Bay High – Sally's classroom (Sally sits at her desk, there is a soft nock on the door) SALLY: Come in MITZY: Sorry to bother you, but Brad said that you own the caravan park here in the bay! SALLY: Yes that is correct, were you thinking of staying there? MITZY: Yes I recall my brother saying it looks quite nice there! SALLY: Your brother lived in the Bay? MITZY: Yes for quite a while. His name was Josh West. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sally_Fletcher Posted March 13, 2007 Report Share Posted March 13, 2007 okay, good update... But when you are in my home I am going to beat you with a stick until you give me some Brally action! Having said that, am I sick for thinking Josh West was SO hot? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sarah_Lewis Posted March 13, 2007 Report Share Posted March 13, 2007 Awesome Update Amanda =]] cant wait to read more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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