Zetti Posted March 18, 2007 Report Share Posted March 18, 2007 She cant be hurt!!!! no! More soon xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sally_Fletcher Posted March 18, 2007 Report Share Posted March 18, 2007 You are killing me here! Loved the update... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted March 18, 2007 Report Share Posted March 18, 2007 Thanks for the comments guys Well the next chapter reaveles allot :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
allibaz91 Posted March 18, 2007 Report Share Posted March 18, 2007 Loved the last chapter! Can't think who the figure could be Update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted March 19, 2007 Report Share Posted March 19, 2007 Thanks for the great comments guys apresiate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted March 19, 2007 Report Share Posted March 19, 2007 Chapter 6 Sally's house Breakfast (Brad, Rick, Alf, Cassie, and Sally are all at the breakfast table waiting for Valerie and Mitzi to show up for breakfast) BRAD: I wonder what is taking them so long... SALLY: We had better start eating without them or we will be late! RICK: Right Sal, Can you give me a lift to work today? SALLY: Sure Rick BRAD: I will check up on Val and Mitzi Looking at the window and the back SALLY: They probably went to the diner for something CASSIE: I saw Val there the other day with Jack... Shaking her head trying to suggest something ALF: Well I am sure young Jack took her there again this morning Looking at Cassie BRAD: Your probably right Chuckles SALLY: I will go there after dropping Rick off BRAD (Stands up and gets his stuff together) Drive safely Sal... SALLY I will love you BRAD: Love you to Heads out the door SALLY: Cassie you had better run we are late and I still want to go to the diner CASSIE: Right, I will get my bag RICK: I am ready The Diner (Jack and Peter enter) PETER: Remember Jack woman are very sly… Sips his coffee JACK: I agree with you on that, but she is different! PETER: They all are in the beginning of things... JACK: Martha sure was. SALLY: Shame on you for talking like that PETER: Hi Sal JACK: We did not see you there SALLY: Of course, you did not... Chuckles PETER: Sit down with us SALLY: Actually, I came looking for Valerie and Mitzi neither off them showed up for breakfast this morning PETER: Come Jack I hope I am wrong about this one... (They Rush past Sally and heads out of the diner) Summer bay High Mitzi's classroom (Brad enters only to find Mitzi not being there before leaving his eye catches a file with the name Josh West written on it.) Brad rushes to Sally's house to check up on Mitzi and Val Summer bay caravan park (Jack and Peter) JACK: Look, her caravan door is open! They look at each other PETER: Quick let's go (They rush off the caravan only to find it empty) PETER: Maybe she is at the beach; you know how she loves it! JACK: You are probably right PETER: When we arrive at the station, I will tell Fitzy to check on the caravan just so that you can relax (Jack and Peter leaves not noticing the black van parked behind the trees in the distance Brad arrives to check up on Mitzi and Val) PETER: Hey Brad BRAD: Hey Pete! PETER: Have you seen Val today? BRAD: No, I just came to check up on her and Mitzi PETER: We have not seen them sorry! BRAD: Have you looked in Mitzi’s caravan? PETER: No we have not, why would Val be with her she is Josh's sister after all Turns around and gets into the car and he and Jack drives off to the police station BRAD: What can no one have a chance to prove him/herself! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted March 19, 2007 Report Share Posted March 19, 2007 PETER: They all are in the beginning of things... JACK: Martha sure was. SALLY: Shame on you for talking like that Yeh, shame on you Jack. Never talk abotu Martha like that Where is that girl anyways, can we please have more of her??? great chapter though. I hope Val and Mitz are ok. More please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted March 19, 2007 Report Share Posted March 19, 2007 Well i'm brain storming about her, Can't promise you that everything is well in the bay, but they will make it lol thanks for the reply Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sally_Fletcher Posted March 19, 2007 Report Share Posted March 19, 2007 Cool thanks for the update... * Off topic - The day after tomorrow... Brad enters only to find Mitzi not being there before leaving his eye catches a file with the name Josh West written on it. Interesting... a file with her brother's name on it? What is this girl up to? PETER: No we have not, why would Val be with her she is Josh's sister after all Grr! Bad Peter! Mitzi can't help that she's related to Joshy... As for Brad defending her... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted March 19, 2007 Report Share Posted March 19, 2007 Coolies! Jacks funny But hes worrying too much about Val. He needs to think about Martha more. Maybe JnM could get bk together in the future *hopes* Great chapter though, and i do like Val. I hope shes ok. Still not sure about Mitzi though ...... hmmmm *scratches head* Update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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