allibaz91 Posted March 13, 2007 Report Share Posted March 13, 2007 Can't believe she's Josh's sister!! Love it lol - update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted March 13, 2007 Report Share Posted March 13, 2007 Great update. Jack and Valerie seem to be getting on well! O oh, im sensing Mitzys gunna have a hard time now that people no shes Josh's sister. Update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted March 13, 2007 Report Share Posted March 13, 2007 Great fic! Awesome chapters Jack and Valerie hmm interesting! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sazcaz89 Posted March 13, 2007 Report Share Posted March 13, 2007 what a fab fiction. i wonder how people will react 2 mitzy being josh west sister. please update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted March 13, 2007 Report Share Posted March 13, 2007 Hey folks thanks for the possitive response will be away for one night so ill updat in a vef dayz sorry for the trouble but ill make it worth the wait Tnx to Sally_Fletcher for some ideas on the fic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted March 13, 2007 Report Share Posted March 13, 2007 Aww! Update when you can Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sally_Fletcher Posted March 14, 2007 Report Share Posted March 14, 2007 Tnx to Sally_Fletcher for some ideas on the fic Anytime! Most ideas are yours anyway! I'm just the reason you write! *I got her into writing, guys! But Amz, update soon plz, as soon as you get home because I want to know where you are going with this... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted March 14, 2007 Report Share Posted March 14, 2007 I dont like Jack Poor Martha. Great chapters. BUt Jack and Valerie sound nice together Mitzi is Josh's sister?? Awesome. I hope she is nicer then Joshy though Great chapters More please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted March 15, 2007 Report Share Posted March 15, 2007 Hey guys i' back thank you for understanding Here is my next post i hope you like it Thanks so much for the great response :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanda Vale Posted March 15, 2007 Report Share Posted March 15, 2007 CHAPTER 4 At Sally’s house (Valerie, Jack and Sally) Val and Jack enter JACK: Sal..! Hey exclames out loud SALLY: Hey Jack! JACK: This is Valerie Scott SALLY: Sally Fletcher, Nice to meet you VALERIE: The pleasure is all mine; Jack told me only good things about you Looks at Jack and smile SALLY: So are u still interested in staying at the caravan park? VALERIE: That would be great Sal SALLY: Sure anytime, plus your not the only new person in the bay staying here! JACK: Who is the other person? SALLY: It is a new teacher that started today, Mitzy West is her name JACK: Didn’t Josh West have a sister called Mitzy? Looks puzzled SALLY: She is his sister yes JACK: Sal..! You know how he was she could be far worse! He exclaimes SALLY: I don’t think she is like that she seems nicer Turnes away from Jack and Val VALERIE: Why argue about it Jack you have never even met her! Gives Jack the eye JACK: She spells trouble I know it…. The diner (Amanda enters) COLLEEN: Morning Amanda! She says very snotty AMANDA: Morning Colleen! COLLEEN: What is it that you want? (Looks at Amanda as if she wanted to strangle her) AMANDA: Only a take away coffee please Trying to sound as if she didn’t realize Colleen is being snotty BELLE: WHAT THE HELL DO YOU WANT HERE AMANDA? Shouting at Amanda AMANDA: I came for a coffee Belle Looks confused BELLE: Drink coffee at your own house!! AMANDA: Belle please I’m sorry BELLE: Well sorry doesn’t cover it Amanda you slept with Drew AMANDA: I’m sorry Belle I made a mistake! BELLE: No I did I found you, you’re a horrible person AMANDA: Belle I’m your mother, I love BELLE: Not anymore Amanda, tell that to someone who cares, wait there isn’t any left because everyone hates you AMANDA: You don’t mean that Belle BELLE: Yes I do I hate you Amanda…. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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