blue sky dream Posted October 21, 2006 Report Share Posted October 21, 2006 I jus read it all, great fic! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted October 21, 2006 Report Share Posted October 21, 2006 I just read it all, great fic! Hehe, so did I, and as you eventually commented in my fic, I will comment in here That was brilliant, all of it, and as you said that you're not doing anything for the next 24 hours I expect another........hmmm........another certain amount of chapters, can't decided how many at the moment, but I expect alot. So you better get writing missy, and post them soon, like before I end up going to sleep. Once again that was brilliant and I update an update in the next hour, okay, that may be pushing it, so I will say two hours , oh, I'll just say ASAP, in the next 24 hours lol. Great writing hun, Em xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amz89 Posted October 22, 2006 Report Share Posted October 22, 2006 That was good wonder what she has to say, hope its all good!!! Can't wait for next post!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-ParaisGal- Posted October 22, 2006 Report Share Posted October 22, 2006 Its great, keep going. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loobieloo Posted October 29, 2006 Report Share Posted October 29, 2006 Chapter 13 “Mattie, What’s up?” I ask as I give her a hug. “I….I…..There’s something I need to tell you Martha” “Here sit down” I knew ushering her to the couch was the best thing to do, she looked as if her legs were about to cave in anyway. “You know you can tell me anything Mattie” I reassure her. Matties POV Martha keeps telling me that I can trust her to tell her anything but I already know that. Its not that I don’t trust her, that’s not why I can’t tell her. Its just that every time I try to say it to her I can’t, the words just stick like superglue to my throat and no matter how hard I try I cant seem to get them out. Martha looks at me, encourages me with my news but I can’t say it. One last try. I take a deep breath, here goes……. “Martha…” “Yes… go on Mattie, don’t be scared.” “I…..I’m pregnant.” Marthas POV “W…What?!” I gasped not wanting to believe what I had jus heard. “But….. Mattie are you sure?” I watched as she hung her head low, feeling embarrassed and ashamed. “Yes” she whispered as a solitary tear rolled down her innocent cheek. How could all this be happening to her? why is life so unfair? “So” I paused, trying to pick the right words “How far-“ “4 months” She cried interrupting my question, “Martha what am I going to do? You can already tell if you look”. As she lifted her top, she was right I could tell. Her stomach was only slightly rounded but I knew it wouldn’t stay like that for long. Mattie’s POV I could see the shock on her face as she saw my tummy. I feel so…so disgusted in myself. Looking at it makes me want to throw up. The thought of this, this thing growing inside me , living off me like a parasite makes me physically sick. Please review x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted October 29, 2006 Report Share Posted October 29, 2006 Good update. Poor mattie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted October 29, 2006 Report Share Posted October 29, 2006 Yey you update, great going hun, keep up the good work Looking forward to your next chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matty and luke forever Posted October 29, 2006 Report Share Posted October 29, 2006 Great updates!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackieleanne Posted October 29, 2006 Report Share Posted October 29, 2006 Awww poor Matilda, I hope she talks to Lucas about what happened and what's going on he needs to know. Great work glad she has Martha there for her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted October 31, 2006 Report Share Posted October 31, 2006 Great update. Im loving the Mac and Mattie friendship. Like Jackie said though I hope she talks to Lucas about everything. Hope there is more soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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