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It must have been all that domestic and stain remover made her go a bit fuzzy

You mean to say that now poor Irene is doing more than wiping tables you want her to leave? . I feel they have changed her history quite alot with scary Mick being her son I still don't believe that.. But I guess they had too think of something to do with her. She's very creepy though

Its not often I feel sorry for Brax but poor guy getting a bonk on the head with a crowbar His dreams of wanting to play the action man here really hasn't gone to plan in this story Oh dreamy Danny DeVito or Doris as she was otherwise known she had herself one final fatal face lift I see At least Karma seems to feed a deadly hit to Smithy for the killing of one of my four times poster pin up dream girls. Oh and Josh and Kyle are being sold to become sex slaves Man oh man All of a sudden being in prison doesn't seem that bad I bet Josh will look back with fond memories Agent Lee is a eejit that is all

Puntastic I haven't used that one yet Don't count your chickens just yet I'm very sharp

Its a good job I live on my own so I can do my blushing in private But really the nerves shouldn't have been spiked with that chapter Had to work my pun in there somewhere...And yes I had thought of it as soon as you told me your were nervous about this chapter haha Oh and Brody's been told he kisses like a letterbox I'm trying to work out if that is worse than kissing like a fish Well written and great story

Nice chapter I guess VJ and Billie were too busy tending to their vegtables and it was because of that reason why their son ended up with a name that might just come out of Star Wars as one of the androids V3 I see Oscar's still around Funny how we all write him as being still alive haha

revisions you say.. Yes have VJ driving his very own combine harvester.

Quite odd to think of VJ as a farmer but its a cool little idea I can see Billie in the role of maybe a milkying maid Josh and Phoebe so their together with a kid?

That poor dog he must feel like his legs are about to drop off the number of walks he gets Last time Brody gets to have a family hmmmmmm very mysterious my intriging mind grows ever the spiker with wonder Oh forgot to say Mason was making a hell of meal out of that sandwich haha

I would be very wary of Kyle for the rest of my life. Or maybe he could be one of those friends that we say yeah yeah we will stay in touch but then never call

That was a very scary story Kyle was way more scarier than Tank was in Blindsided. You write horror very good considering you aren't a fan and I do find that funny There wasn't much harmony to be had in this story though haha You know how to write a good baddie Oh and it was funny how Kyle teased himself about being called Kyile in his own mind So I have read all your stories now The full works of Ludub You need to write some more now haha

Hmmm this Kris guy his a very prickly fella methinks Brody seems to have gotten himself a very interesting sort of love bite on his neck? Brody is right to feel the need to get away hospital food is dreadful

We spiked your hurmour you could say Ok I will stop now

I'm glad its in a positive way I can't think of another way to be honest haha

Very stiffly put We will see

Ah sorry wasn't this the part that was meant to spike my interest? Was my interest spiked a bit too early here? Good of you to pinpoint where my attention was during this chapter.. That was very sharp of you to have notcied I'm glad you pointed it out to me Pun pun pun pun and its only the first chapter I wonder if I can keep it up all the way?

I will try maybe one day to write something vagey normal And Ludub I don't think you were expecting to write something so out there when you said hey let's write something silly together haha Thank you for all your comments people had such fun writing this

Oh I was hoping that somehow it was Heath that had gotten to Kyle and Joshs prison van and he was just playing dead in that grave But he really does seem to be dead

I have no doubt in my mind that this Kris Novotny isn't what he seems I have to agree with Brody that being with someone just isn't about having sex. The main point is firstly is that you both can stand each others company haha Oh and I have never been blown away by the sight of boobs either their quite odd things But I guess they are nice too Well not the really huge type Update to my comment I'm very sorry I got distracted by blabbering on about boobs I don't know Staillon Tamers in Caged and now this What am I like? Anyway here's what I wanted to say Very good job you have done of writing Brody in this very differnt way it gives his character very good depth and sets the scene well for this whole mystery. The fact he was found naked on the beach it gets you wondering why I could delete the first part of my comment but no lets leave it there for comedy value haha

I think I heard it or read about it somewhere I don't know how it would work because they have cast a new Superman in Supergirl I don't watch that show.. So unless its like set in a parallel universe as The Flash can do such time bending things we might have Tom Welling back who never wanted to fly as Superman so that could be quite funny. Have a flightless superman while we have this new guy as a updated flying Superman as well then maybe.

Buffet was great so was Angel not so the ending I stuck with Smallville. but oh my very frustrating programme . It's going to have a crossover with The Flash next season don't know if you watch that

Cool I look forward to the next one

It all depends what you have in mind and the comedy comes from you so I think it will work more natural and easier if you choose which characters that you feel will work for the style of comedy that you want to write And not feel like you are forced into writing the charcters that other people would like to see. Go for what works for you. Hope that helps you out I will look out for your story

Oh wow just thinking of Skye and Billie weidling huge swords is just such a dreamy thought Glad Skye got away from her evil dads clutches. What a evil ogre he was Great story Will there be a 9th story to this saga I do enjoy these wacky little tales of yours

As I don't take any notes when I write and my ideas come at me as a whole I normally write quick so I don't forget