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I'm finding it a bit hard in keeping up with who is with who here... But other than that I like it. It feels like. something the show could do for their. 30th anniversary with everyone coming back to see a dying Alf.

Try for tonight if you can it gives me some late night reading

Oh dear that is very sad...This really will rock or change the bay forever I was shocked I thought something was up with Leah.. Oh hang on I think there might be some hope but I won't say in case I ruin it for other people Cool that Jett's back and I enjoyed the scene with him and Mason Oh and I mis read abit Billie was talking about changing V3's nappy and I read it as VJ But your quite right V3 does sound like a World War 2 rocket.

Oh I loved that last scene with Brody begging It was very spooky and quite unerving and you wrote the atmosphere prefectly That I pictured all the people peering at Brody having ghostly faces and kind of floating like a nightmarish some sort of dream They felt like phantoms as Brody staggered on passed them.. You are very good with your little clues as to what might be up with Brody as well. Oh and I found Mason's words to wisdom to a upset Justin very amusing. That went well Geee Mason hasn't even tried to talk him Brody All his done is eat a kingsize sandwich since Brodys been back Oh nearly forgot That chapter was spiketanstic

I liked how Josh didn't comment on wheather he thought Phoebe's singing was good or not Just Yes I have heard her And I think I would class Josh and Phoebe as boyfriend and girlfriend It makes it clearer for them both and Phoebe wouldn't have to ask Kat about it. Phoebe and Kat just seemed to have like the fakest friendship going on the show

Oh I have thought of a pun so you will be getting two comments from me.......What I should have said was Kris never managed to spike up Brody's excitement levels in the way he was hoping too. See run out of puns my eye

Kris I think he needs to work on his flattery skills his clearly not impressed in the way he was hoping too, and standing there in the dark looking oh so menacing isn't going to cut it either.. I can understand Brody's need to block out all sunlight and sit in a darken room Sometimes the sunlight is just too bright and seaking just doesn't cut it

You know what everyone are in great need of some Minion Bruise Soothers Everybody is soo banged up and injured... Yaaaay for the return of Heath I did think he was dead.. But no HIS BACK!!!!!!!!! Woooooooooooo hoooooooo Nice twist with Smithy becoming a sex slave Death was always going to be to kind for him.. Its about time he got to know how it feels to get ****ed I'm sure that was someone's quote in this chapter I can't remember who but never the less its funny Oh and Brax poor guy seems quite confused to wake up thinking his in bed calling for Ricky He must have a really hard mattress at home One that feels like metal Oh and if I had to speak to Kat on the phone I too would answer with a loud sigh and very tired sounding voice... Has Ash turned his phone off? I mean he isn't that rushed off his feet his not out playing hero His hanging out with Ricky and Bianca in nothing more than his underpants isn't he? Loved the chapter

Interesting pairings you have going on here Is Hunter going to start killing people that is the question?

It must have been all that domestic and stain remover made her go a bit fuzzy

You mean to say that now poor Irene is doing more than wiping tables you want her to leave? . I feel they have changed her history quite alot with scary Mick being her son I still don't believe that.. But I guess they had too think of something to do with her. She's very creepy though

Its not often I feel sorry for Brax but poor guy getting a bonk on the head with a crowbar His dreams of wanting to play the action man here really hasn't gone to plan in this story Oh dreamy Danny DeVito or Doris as she was otherwise known she had herself one final fatal face lift I see At least Karma seems to feed a deadly hit to Smithy for the killing of one of my four times poster pin up dream girls. Oh and Josh and Kyle are being sold to become sex slaves Man oh man All of a sudden being in prison doesn't seem that bad I bet Josh will look back with fond memories Agent Lee is a eejit that is all

Puntastic I haven't used that one yet Don't count your chickens just yet I'm very sharp

Its a good job I live on my own so I can do my blushing in private But really the nerves shouldn't have been spiked with that chapter Had to work my pun in there somewhere...And yes I had thought of it as soon as you told me your were nervous about this chapter haha Oh and Brody's been told he kisses like a letterbox I'm trying to work out if that is worse than kissing like a fish Well written and great story

Nice chapter I guess VJ and Billie were too busy tending to their vegtables and it was because of that reason why their son ended up with a name that might just come out of Star Wars as one of the androids V3 I see Oscar's still around Funny how we all write him as being still alive haha

revisions you say.. Yes have VJ driving his very own combine harvester.

Quite odd to think of VJ as a farmer but its a cool little idea I can see Billie in the role of maybe a milkying maid Josh and Phoebe so their together with a kid?

That poor dog he must feel like his legs are about to drop off the number of walks he gets Last time Brody gets to have a family hmmmmmm very mysterious my intriging mind grows ever the spiker with wonder Oh forgot to say Mason was making a hell of meal out of that sandwich haha

I would be very wary of Kyle for the rest of my life. Or maybe he could be one of those friends that we say yeah yeah we will stay in touch but then never call

That was a very scary story Kyle was way more scarier than Tank was in Blindsided. You write horror very good considering you aren't a fan and I do find that funny There wasn't much harmony to be had in this story though haha You know how to write a good baddie Oh and it was funny how Kyle teased himself about being called Kyile in his own mind So I have read all your stories now The full works of Ludub You need to write some more now haha

Hmmm this Kris guy his a very prickly fella methinks Brody seems to have gotten himself a very interesting sort of love bite on his neck? Brody is right to feel the need to get away hospital food is dreadful

We spiked your hurmour you could say Ok I will stop now

I'm glad its in a positive way I can't think of another way to be honest haha

Very stiffly put We will see

Ah sorry wasn't this the part that was meant to spike my interest? Was my interest spiked a bit too early here? Good of you to pinpoint where my attention was during this chapter.. That was very sharp of you to have notcied I'm glad you pointed it out to me Pun pun pun pun and its only the first chapter I wonder if I can keep it up all the way?