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  1. I'm glad its in a positive way I can't think of another way to be honest haha
  2. Very stiffly put We will see
  3. Ah sorry wasn't this the part that was meant to spike my interest? Was my interest spiked a bit too early here? Good of you to pinpoint where my attention was during this chapter.. That was very sharp of you to have notcied I'm glad you pointed it out to me Pun pun pun pun and its only the first chapter I wonder if I can keep it up all the way?
  4. I will try maybe one day to write something vagey normal And Ludub I don't think you were expecting to write something so out there when you said hey let's write something silly together haha Thank you for all your comments people had such fun writing this
  5. Oh I was hoping that somehow it was Heath that had gotten to Kyle and Joshs prison van and he was just playing dead in that grave But he really does seem to be dead
  6. I have no doubt in my mind that this Kris Novotny isn't what he seems I have to agree with Brody that being with someone just isn't about having sex. The main point is firstly is that you both can stand each others company haha Oh and I have never been blown away by the sight of boobs either their quite odd things But I guess they are nice too Well not the really huge type Update to my comment I'm very sorry I got distracted by blabbering on about boobs I don't know Staillon Tamers in Caged and now this What am I like? Anyway here's what I wanted to say Very good job you have done of writing Brody in this very differnt way it gives his character very good depth and sets the scene well for this whole mystery. The fact he was found naked on the beach it gets you wondering why I could delete the first part of my comment but no lets leave it there for comedy value haha
  7. I think I heard it or read about it somewhere I don't know how it would work because they have cast a new Superman in Supergirl I don't watch that show.. So unless its like set in a parallel universe as The Flash can do such time bending things we might have Tom Welling back who never wanted to fly as Superman so that could be quite funny. Have a flightless superman while we have this new guy as a updated flying Superman as well then maybe.
  8. Buffet was great so was Angel not so the ending I stuck with Smallville. but oh my very frustrating programme . It's going to have a crossover with The Flash next season don't know if you watch that
  9. Cool I look forward to the next one
  10. It all depends what you have in mind and the comedy comes from you so I think it will work more natural and easier if you choose which characters that you feel will work for the style of comedy that you want to write And not feel like you are forced into writing the charcters that other people would like to see. Go for what works for you. Hope that helps you out I will look out for your story
  11. Oh wow just thinking of Skye and Billie weidling huge swords is just such a dreamy thought Glad Skye got away from her evil dads clutches. What a evil ogre he was Great story Will there be a 9th story to this saga I do enjoy these wacky little tales of yours
  12. As I don't take any notes when I write and my ideas come at me as a whole I normally write quick so I don't forget
  13. No I hope to have a clever ending coming just need to do some rewrites and editing I'm taking it as a good thing that you all were fooled thinking it was the ending haha
  14. I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks so
  15. Oh no no no I don't even like eating lamb in fear it might come back Alive and jump off the plate. But I will check your curry out thank you
  16. May I say thank you very much for telling me the plot for The Notebook I have made it this far in life without watching it and now I never have too Oh and Robert Pattinson seen him in the first Twilight and that was enough they all had a game of cricket as I remember and sparked like diamonds in sunlight What a great film
  17. Firstly the little mention of The Stallion Tamer’ at the start You don't know how I laughed at that I can't think why Most of that chapter was amusing Agent Lee being very useful as ever Brax and Ricky should just go all Rambo style and sort this mess out Josh might be blind oh dear but at least he won't see the rapists coming now Is that a good thing? Oh and he is right to think that the doctor may just run out of paper A few months a few months he can't truly make 28 years ha funny Agent Ricci and Agent Lewis they so wanted to get into each others pants flirting much Shame they can't now given their dead.. So glad the babe Doris isn't dead Smithy is a lucky man... Oh and how dare Agent Lewis think Doris looks like a MAN I am truly shocked I do love this story it makes my day night
  18. Poor Joshura he does not fair well in your stories at all
  19. Tank was getting his freak on no doubt I took it as being a rape scene
  20. Well after 40 days and 40 nights I have reached the end of this story.. Its been a blinding read of greatest. . I really enjoyed Tank's character in this... I never really found him that interesting in the show. But you truly brought his psychopath ways to life and that is why the final chapters of his whole grand masterplan hostage chapters were my favourite part of the story I like a good viilain he even sort of got the last laugh there with Episode 9 So not so the happy ending The first couple of chapters I thought they worked well the slow build up is good because you know something big is coming to knock everyone for six I liked how Tank played his clever mind games with Josh at the start Cool that everyone thought he was making up well not cool but made it gripping Clever that throughout the story Tamara was slowy getting her sight back and in the end she had it restored enough to take Tank down I thought that was a very clever little twist.. Funny that Kat talked Andy out of telling Josh about the DVD at the end there Because nowadays Kat would be right on the phone blurting it all out I don't think I could write a story with 40 chapters though I don't know how you do it I think my brain would melt
  21. Oh Raffy's ok and Olivia Deeble is a good actress. I liked Phoebe believe it or not I found her quite amusing
  22. Chris and Brody are you sure? I think you will find they are trapped in a world filled with zombies and aliens
  23. Its just dawned on me that I was slightly mistaken when I said that you have all your favourite characters in this very dangerous story I can say without doubt that Matt won't die yes his safe at least well his abit driftwood at the minute.. Can you tell I'm abit too much into all this?
  24. Well with a name like Raffy she seemed suited to the role And she was my main feature The story wouldn't have worked without her .. If I write anymore stories after this one and if Raffy shows up I will be kind to her shall I?
  25. Would you kill one of your favourite Characters? You ask. hmmm I just don't know you have a few and they all seem to be in this very dangerous story
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