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Haha people are unbelieveable in this story I like how they talk things through

Come on now get those fangs sunk into it

Oooooh my excitement levels are Spiked so please pretty pleeeese. With a cherry on top update tonight . You know me and my bedtime reading

Question is Brody able to transform himself into a bat now? Justin and Tori should really watch out for Brody's sudden outbursts of rage. Maybe Justin should find something sharp and pointy at the garage something that you would call spiked. There you go here's this chapters pun Another chapter that just shows your spiked brilliance.

I want happiness for Justin the poor guy lol

Phoebes happiness means alot at the end of the day doesn't it? To everyone it seems haha

I don't know what to really say here but man this story makes me laugh But Phoebe and Brody they deserve each other

This is all getting mad Hunter and Olivia broke up over Phoebe wow really The Morgans declaring their no longer family that's abit over the top Phoebe is very selfish for not stopping all this mayhem from happening

Ok so I think I may have poked myself in the eye or something because my eyes were slightly watering here You might even go as far as to call it crying but please don't because that wouldn't be very manly All the old photos on the wall of Brax and Ricky Its pretty cool that Brax never returned because lets face it he would just get bored with family life again and end up playing toy cars again Anyway Casey has Josh to play pirates with now. Hopefully Josh will start to live his life now and come to realise he can still do what he wants. Its good that Kyle got to move on with Ben and is sweet that he still sees Aaron from time to time. and got to have his garden centre, Casey learning the word bull**** from Heath That's great Oh and yes Andy Josh for all his hardships his finally free my goodness I don't know how he managed to last so long He must be like a super human Nice scene with Evie's t shirt my goodness you tried your best in this chapter to pull at the heartstrings didn't you? My goodness To say I really enjoyed this story surely isn't enough I can't even tell you how much I loved it. Very thrilling and every single chapter was like a page turner of a very good book.

First of all I was thinking how very unlucky after all that he has been Josh now has to give Kyle his kidney.. But what a relief for him he seems to have moved to a nice hotel. Well prison but really its like a five star holiday compared to what he has been used too... I hope at the end of this though Josh has learnt its just not worth breaking the law because that only leads to rape and God knows what.. I really liked the Kyle and Aaron scene very sad, but at the same time had some really laugh out loud moments Like Kyle realising that he had his very own horny friendly ghost Well sort of.. Oh and it reminded me abit of the scene when Aaron I think it was who killed the mood after they had just had sex.. because he was being released from prison soon. it was a repeat of that here with Kyle you have to go now you can't stay in this gradencentre forever not when we both have compost in veryawkward hard to reach places Well I never would of thought in a month of Sundays that Kyle would have been a fan of Titanic He is quite the dark horse Errrr Brax the magician vanishes again very good party trick Oh and that line at the end Lets see how this screw likes to get screwed comedy gold there I would say Brax cares about Brax Ricky maybe but that could be all a front

I better hurry up and finish read Caged then or I might get spiked with your talents If your updating this soon too

Well Coco found herself a place to stay really easily and she's not even nervous of these new people she's just meet good on her And VJ saying yeah come stay with me I thought maybe there was hint of flirting in there maybe not though As for the other Astoni's running off to the other side and leaving Coco to fend for herself isn't very cool

It's very entertaining

I haven't seen the new family yet But Cocco always makes me think of cocoo pops How will they get this divided thing sorted? I think Phoebe must have blackmailed half the town .

Oh all hail Phoebe's happiness why I'm not sure to be honest What a pair of twits Brody and Mason are not standing by Justin just because..... I'm not sure why half the bay would be that bothered either to take sides. People like Matt and and Hunter are they all huge fans of Phoebe's music or something have free concert tickets? Why doesn't Phoeobe love Justin anymore doesn't he change his socks or something haha I'm on Justin's side

Well Phoebe was straight to the point there wasn't she? If Justin ever finds out that it was because of Heaths advice he wont be very popular haha But I think Justin has had a lucky escape

I'm finding it a bit hard in keeping up with who is with who here... But other than that I like it. It feels like. something the show could do for their. 30th anniversary with everyone coming back to see a dying Alf.

Try for tonight if you can it gives me some late night reading

Oh dear that is very sad...This really will rock or change the bay forever I was shocked I thought something was up with Leah.. Oh hang on I think there might be some hope but I won't say in case I ruin it for other people Cool that Jett's back and I enjoyed the scene with him and Mason Oh and I mis read abit Billie was talking about changing V3's nappy and I read it as VJ But your quite right V3 does sound like a World War 2 rocket.

Oh I loved that last scene with Brody begging It was very spooky and quite unerving and you wrote the atmosphere prefectly That I pictured all the people peering at Brody having ghostly faces and kind of floating like a nightmarish some sort of dream They felt like phantoms as Brody staggered on passed them.. You are very good with your little clues as to what might be up with Brody as well. Oh and I found Mason's words to wisdom to a upset Justin very amusing. That went well Geee Mason hasn't even tried to talk him Brody All his done is eat a kingsize sandwich since Brodys been back Oh nearly forgot That chapter was spiketanstic

I liked how Josh didn't comment on wheather he thought Phoebe's singing was good or not Just Yes I have heard her And I think I would class Josh and Phoebe as boyfriend and girlfriend It makes it clearer for them both and Phoebe wouldn't have to ask Kat about it. Phoebe and Kat just seemed to have like the fakest friendship going on the show

Oh I have thought of a pun so you will be getting two comments from me.......What I should have said was Kris never managed to spike up Brody's excitement levels in the way he was hoping too. See run out of puns my eye

Kris I think he needs to work on his flattery skills his clearly not impressed in the way he was hoping too, and standing there in the dark looking oh so menacing isn't going to cut it either.. I can understand Brody's need to block out all sunlight and sit in a darken room Sometimes the sunlight is just too bright and seaking just doesn't cut it

You know what everyone are in great need of some Minion Bruise Soothers Everybody is soo banged up and injured... Yaaaay for the return of Heath I did think he was dead.. But no HIS BACK!!!!!!!!! Woooooooooooo hoooooooo Nice twist with Smithy becoming a sex slave Death was always going to be to kind for him.. Its about time he got to know how it feels to get ****ed I'm sure that was someone's quote in this chapter I can't remember who but never the less its funny Oh and Brax poor guy seems quite confused to wake up thinking his in bed calling for Ricky He must have a really hard mattress at home One that feels like metal Oh and if I had to speak to Kat on the phone I too would answer with a loud sigh and very tired sounding voice... Has Ash turned his phone off? I mean he isn't that rushed off his feet his not out playing hero His hanging out with Ricky and Bianca in nothing more than his underpants isn't he? Loved the chapter

Interesting pairings you have going on here Is Hunter going to start killing people that is the question?