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Everything posted by pembie
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Oh I hadn't thought of the device being sent to earth so Billy could talk with his home planet I like that idea.. I wonder if his or her planet is under attack?
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Wasn't Damien a abit nutty. I seem to remember he was.. I think it would have been much more believable for me if he had taken Mick's role In Irene's part to Billie's story.
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I don't blame Kyle for rippling up a photo of Brax sumg silly grinning face I would too.. He might hate Phoebe too but it could be wrose she could be in there singing him one of her songs which sound all the same. But having said all that I don't think Kyle should trust this very spooky phantom Aaron. I think he will turn out to be quite dangerous for Kyle's heatlh Even though
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So Ruby's now become a lesbian of sorts if she still wants to date Billy I thinkshe should Billy's a cool alien soo.. yeah I wonder what this object for there little hunt thing is?
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Blimey me Well it was sweet that Kyle got to say a final goodbye to Aaron. Nice touch that Dimitri was there singing Twinkle Twinkle Little Star the last song to have been heard when Aaron had died.. Aaron was a great character. I would say Kyle needs some alone time to come to terms with what has happened but he may just go abit bonkers down in that hole I would like to think that Kwon can be trusted and won't turn out to be another sex crazed nutter but knowing Josh's luck the jury's still out on that one I think its about time Brax and Heath leapt over a few rooftops and broke in through the vent systerm, of this well guarded crazy jailhouse and broke Josh and Kyle out Yes I'm sure that can be done Very good chapters
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I kept thinking maybe you will make Raffy a Jedi You might still with that blinding light at the end there
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Charlotte's murder I think
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Yeah I thought Matt was safe for abit long So I was suprised to see you kill him off and I'm writing this little story with you So yeah its funny when even the writers don't see the twists and turns coming soo funny
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I'm not too sure if reality has ever been in the building when I have wrote any story on here Red
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Maybe I would have killed Matt off if I was writing this by myself JT
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Oh no its at this point I would like to tell you I like Aaron but I had a feeling something bad was going to happen to him. So I'm pretty prepared for this to end badly for him.. Josh has had his time of suffering now its Kyle turn me thinks The clue being that Dimitri gives Josh a lollipop.. I did find that amusing while in all the chaos of a prison riot Josh and Dimitri share and bond over lollipops
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Oh dear nobody got to enjoy their sausages So now Vasily and his crew are dead... The curse of Josh nobody should mess with him because they all seem to meet a grisly end So now I'm left wondering who will be the next big bad to go up against Josh, and also thinking whoever it is they really do need to carry a lucky charm or something... But in saying all this it might be for nothing because maybe Josh Kyle and Aarron can all espace while this prison roit is going on...
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As Heath was given the bat in the first chapter, and seeing as Negan has a bat named Iucille in TWD. I thought there could be a clever parallel with Heath naming his bat April and it was done for comedy effect given their history.
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I would love to know what Kyle's idea of flirtying would be throw In abit of that for his and Aaron's farewell scene haha
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Oh yeah give Josh the tough love maybe..but maybe not when his naked and standing in a open shower Total Twithead
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I'm sorry but Kyle isn't at all tactful is he? Its like the night when he poured sour grapes on his night of passion with Aaron all over again Hey, we’re just trying to help!” said Kyle, in a frustrated tone, “This is what you always do! …You shut people out, you push them away when you need them most!” Well at least let Josh get dressed first. They were all stood around naked at this point So not really a surprise that Josh was trying to push them away and shut him up Notice his bruises yes and then speak queitly too him about it afterwards surely...Haha I agree with Aaron I don't think its the right way to get Josh to open up either while his butt naked with a bunch of rapists with their wandering eyes and grabbing at their groins
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Is everyone in this place a potential rapist?? Well minus Kyle and Aaron I think they are yes Heck I would go as far as to say everyone other than Kyle Aaron and Josh are just crazy bonkers as a box of frogs...Josh needs some self defence classes... or something........... maybe a big hammer to splash everybody's wonkas with or a pair of scissors. Look forward to more..
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I'm not too worried for Josh as he said he neutered Alexei in a very impressive way Vasily maybe scary but I feel Josh shouldn't be underestimated.. He is like a a slient assassin Funny thing is he doesn't even realise it Way to go Kyle that's a way to kill the mood after having steamy sex It will be interesting to see if Aaron does leave..
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Checked shirt hoodies and danger I would think he would be into a game of Coppers and Robbers too I have no idea about Ricky but I would think she would be the bossy type haha
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I'm liking how Ricky was thrown into the mix I'm suprised she agreed, It might do her good to get that strap on.. Might come in handy if she crosses paths with Smithy again.. I don't know if you could knock someone out or cause them harm if you were to use a strap on as a weapon though.
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So huge penis head Alexei has now been dealt with.. He might need to take up a differnt hobby I can see him being any good at fishing no more Not with a damaged todder. I did find his character funny even with the whole rape thing Josh now finds himself in the middle of a prison war Poor guy hasn't had chance to catch a breath and I'm sure these 28 years will just fly by with all his action packed prison days No time to get bored
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Ok cool don't go sticking your arm in a jar of acid The acid would win Good luck with your other writings and have a good Christmas Red.
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You could write a Oscar spin off story if you wanted and had the time.. Its quite sad for Maddy to be with Oscar but to not really be with him because his in hiding...But cool in another way true to life that not everything is tied into a neat bow. Nice that Tori got her dance with Sid but very arkward for Indi and Brody if they ever got to together Nice ending scene with Alf and Irene seemly the watchful guardians of the bay seeing alot of people come and go over the years.. Nice and touching heartfelt closing line too.
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Oh Lu Oooooooh SNAP ouch the side effects of taking too much viagra...Never given it much thought but sounds like a nightmare Ewwww plusing veins and your todder turning purple... I have never winced while reading before but it happened tonight.. Graphic very graphic but I still enjoyed it in a strange way
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Cheryl has a way with words (So you doing each other) Heath's responses to the way he felt about April were priceless untill he admitted he loved her Alf must have soften in his old age he didn't blow a casket over Roo and Frank Things are about to get steamy for Brody and that's not just in the kitchen Look forward to your last chapter of this story.