I quite like Sara, she seems nice but I get this sense that she could be quite nasty when protecting what's hers...
Great chapter. Loved the lucas/Kit stuff and the Matilda/Lucas almost conversation. You can almost feel the tension yet I'm sensing the chemistry's not the same as it was, that they've grown apart and don't really want to...I may be way off the mark though, or maybe they just haven't realised they still want each other, or they have and won't admit it?
Hmm...I'm baffling myself with theories now! it's a good writer who really gets me thinking about plots, I usially just go with the flow and that, in case you didn't get it Jess, was a compliment