Skykat

that was beautiful...and horrible. You were right it did make me cry but there was some really touching moments in there too. I hope Kirsty's granddad figures out what's going on. Poor Kane, really well written ILM.

You evil little.... Great chapter. That kiss was so innocent and sweet. I loved it yet again ILM.

Aw poor Jacob! Her past has got me really intrigued now. Great work Natasha.

no I take it back...go away again! Measles and torpedoes...nobody writes kids quite the way you do ILM. Another fantastic chapter.xx

Wow Natasha! I did not expect that! I've been keeping up with this by popping on and off but i've not had time to reply before now. Really great work...I can't wait for the next part!

Nooo! ILM I'm completely hooked on this. Please don't hurt Kane! The taste of clouds had me in stitches. Great chapter.xx

Wow this moved on quick! Great work Natasha, please update soon.xx

Oh my god no! Please don't keep me in suspense...

Uh oh!

Anna you already know I love this but just in case you didn't get it I LOVE THIS STORY. It's so beautiful, there's a magical quality to this, an innocence. It's so natural, so moving and the description is just excellent. I loved the structure with the flashbacks, really well done. this story just flowed from beginning to end. I loved that description the first time I read it and I love it more now that you've added to it. really superbly wrote. that line is just so innocent for me, so childlike and sweet. You've added this bit in and I'm glad you did. I can really imagine that's how she'd feel, I really got a sense that her parents didn't understand. that they didn't really know her, really well done. fireflies and misty mornings...completely unique descriptions and really, really vivid. That reminds me of my childhood when I used to watch the little hover leaves spin to the ground. Again really touchingly innocent and the color description really brings it to life. You should just write an essay describing a tree, the imagery is so vivid. I loved how you developed their bond through their memories of each other. It was so realistic. That description is great on so many levels because it reflects the feelings of the children, how they were dying without each other. Really powerful stuff. This had a really magical feel to it, the fairytale theme was beautiful all the way through and really highlighted their childhood innocence. Probably I've gone into more detail than necessary and I said a lot in my origional review but this is a really fantastic piece of work and I hope you do well with it.

Aw poor jacob! Great update.

Oooo! Great chapter as always ILM. Poor Kane, the old heart strings are going again! The swearing made me laugh and the cops in the dark thing even though it's not really funny. You write children so well.

I suspect this'll only end in trouble! Great updates, love that they're so regular and I'm intrigued as to which way you'll take this. As to your earlier comment: you're very welcome.

You guys are doing a really good job of converting me to stalker type fics. Great work. Love your little teasers as well!

This is really good Natasha. I'm so glad you decided to post it, not all of us appreciate J/M you know! I was just reading your post about fanfics in the Dan Bennett thread and I know exactly what you meant. Glad you changed your mind though, this is a great story. I laughed my head off at that, very true and very Morag!

Wicked Jess! Ric the town hoe...I love it. more soon. *begs*

good luck with them. I'm so glad I never have to do essays again!

Great work! I'm really liking this, it's nice to see origional characters for a change.

Wicked! Great work Tash.xx

Hey everyone...

Thanks for explaining that to me, I feel really thick now! Wow her husband sounds like bad news! I think this is great, I hope there's more to come.

I'm probably being completely thick but I have no idea what you mean by slash Great start to a story though. Wonder who Morag's lover is? Hope you post again soon.xx

Yeah I know what you mean. I can never seem to get off to sleep and when I finally get there it never seems to last long enough!

I was thinking that. It's just after lunch here. It's so strange to think that we're all in different timezones.

Thanks I'm worrying a bit because I've never not spent christmas at home and it's going to be really wierd being the other side of the world. I have to do it that way though to get the dates right. I think my sister and a couple of my mates might be flying out to meet me though so that'll be good. I love fireworks, I was born on bonfire night so I've always been to big displays on or around my birthday. I'll be spending that in Sydney too next year! Is the Gold Coast Queensland?