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Oh no poor Morag! She's going to blame Laura for this...I just know it!

Oooh this is gripping stuff Natasha, love it.

Well seeing as Frankie said it was okay Loved this ILM. You got Irene completely spot on, I loved her little memory scenes and the bit with Tasha. Great one shot, it didn't really need much more. I'm just gutted you're going to stop writing fanfics...such a waster *shakes head*

Oooh the venom! They can't be at each others throats though, Morag needs to save Laura from Kath! Great to see the third part Natasha.

OMG That was so not what I expected! Great chapters Natasha!xxx

Wow ILM! What a perfect ending. I loved the way you intertwined your childhood events with actual events. Actually I loved everything about this story. Really well done! Shame it had to end.

OMG poor Kane! That was heartbreaking! Go away busybody Betty! Oooh what's the twist? Another great quality chapter ILM.xx

Nooooo! Please, you can't do this to me! I won't let you! What am I going to do without your stories?! You say something like that and then write an absolutely fantastic chapter. I'm going to go away and sulk now and not even tell you why it was so fantastic *spits dummy out of the pram*.

Ooops...I forgot about this fic, sorry. Shame on me! I've had loads to catch up on though, great chapters. I love how this is so different from everything else. Great work! Please update soon.

That cracked me up Nicole, well done!

Another one! I'm so glad you're reposting all your stories...I missed them first time around. This one is different because you're looking at Dani's side too. Such a contrast of emotions but really well done. I can sense trouble when Kane goes the Caravan Park I really liked that chapter. Please post the next one soon!

The it chapter? Oh Jess you do make me laugh! Love it. Great update.xx

In the distance the blue sea sparkled in the sunlight while a ship sailed leisurely across the water. Nearer inland the surfers would be riding the waves, taking advantage of the wind that was frantically rustling the garden trees, but the myriad of buildings and streets inbetween blocked an actual view of the beach from the Phillips’ dismal house. What an absolutely stunning description. Fabulous! nearly toppled the dresser while experimentally seeing if the bottom drawer would still take his weight if he stood on it. Kirsty said her Grandad would make everything alright and Kane had never trusted anyone like he trusted Kirsty. "But I haven't got any cheese, Grandad!" So cute! I love how you get into their childhood thoughts, it's so realistic the way you write children. OMG cliffhanger! Love The Dark, poor Kane's terror. You've really got him tugging at the heart strings now ILM. Kirsty just has to get there ontime and don't let everyone think the worst of Kane...please?

Exclusive clubs are the best! You're being paranoid anyway, just threaten not to write anymore and you'll be amazed how many people are reading but just not reviewing...it works for me anyway And surely I'm a good enough reason to keep going anyway? Do you have any idea how scary the scouse hitmen can be?

Fantastic chapter Jess, loved it.

Wow! That was worth the wait. Loved all the Kane, Milko etc stuff. The swapping of hats had me laughing but how could you let Kane run back home to danger? Shame on you I loved the Carly stuff but somehow I think Steven's possibly your strongest point. I don't know why but I really feel his emotions, you write everything well but especially him. Great chapter.xx

I'm hovering because I can see your posting and I'm so impatient for another update of this that I'm hoping having my ugly mug around will make you hurry up!

Yes! I'll call off the witch hunt I was planning then...

Wow...please don't leave us hanging too long. great chapter, really wicked update.

Loved it Angel Rose! I want this to continue so badly, it has so much potential and I love reading your stories. I'm really for the Mattie Ric pairing and Matties burns are yet another predjudice to be dealt with...and we all know you write predjudice well! Do I really have to beg?

I'm glad you decided you liked this after all. You didn't have much confidence in it when you first sent it to me. I don't know why though because it's a great piece of writing, Matilda is just how she was in the beginning, remember her crush over Kim? It reminded me of that, you got her spot on and Jade and Nick, that was so sad, they were so meant to be together but I think you had the right ending in the end. I definitely got a sense that there had been so much hurt it was impossible to go back. Really great work Jess, loved reading it again.

Cracking update Jess...you went and made Parker nice! Like Kase said it makes things so much more difficult! Great chapter too, it's great to see the boy's friendship and I love your little teaser at the end. Hope your juices come back soon!

^^^^^^^^^^^^^ I agree with ILM. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ This was a beautifully, well written piece. I cried the first time I read it and it still gets me when I read it now. The introduction, that heart breaking ending, Flynn's words to her, her reactions. You got it just about perfect Jade. A really beautiful piece of writing, really believable and genuine. I loved every word. Well done.xx

thanks for the comments guys. About the Dallas style put downs: I'm having so much fun with this story. You know the sort of things you'd love to say to people but you'd never quite dare? I'm enjoying writing them in this story. Certain characters like Gypsy and my Hayley are just made for the little cutting remarks and it's so much fun to write! Glad it's amusing you though. Everything in my job is so intense at the moment that this story's the only outlet I have for my sense of humour and I'll keep going as long as people keep reading. In case nobody's noticed from my other story, I'm pretty bad at ending things, I just tend to go on...and on...

OMG Did not see that coming! Wicked couple of updates, please update soon natasha.