Red Ranger 1

How about changing the last part to "without the look of pity she knew she would receive if Irene found her there"?Or, no, hang on...how about "before Irene found her there and gave her one of those looks of pity"? Er, anyone else want to help out here?

Dammit I was hoping for one that wasn't happy every after.(I haven't changed that much...) Still reading though.

Oh my gosh!Belle's pregnant by Angelo?!That's a new one on me but then I tend to give Adelle fics a wide berth.Actually liked how Aden was with her when she told him.Oh god, I'm turning into an Aden fan.It's your writing. Love to see what happens next.

Actually feeling sorry for Aden.That doesn't happen very often. Hope Geoff takes the news well.

Well, what can I say to that except... Aww, thanks everyone.

Aden in jail...Probably safest if I don't comment on that. The babies were Ric's?That's a shock.Glad he knows but what's he going to say to Mattie?!

Oh wow.Mattie and Lucas losing the babies, that was just so raw, and the fact Ric was the first person she went looking for felt so right. Oh, yeah, and Aden was in it as well.

Did Drew see Lisa as Belle?Yeah, that would probably explain it:the shot of them kissing looks like Lisa but the close-up does look more like Belle.

One for UK viewers:In those trailers for the Five Life omnibus they keep showing, who's the girl making out with Drew on the couch?Is it Belle or Lisa?

Just one chapter to go! We won't see Aden's funeral I'm afraid but there will be a brief scene in the last chapter dealing with it.

Gosh, you've come to the party late again.Welcome aboard, hope you enjoy it.I'm assuming/hoping you finished reading Shattered or else this could be very confusing. Thank you for so much for saying so, I was worried that chapter would just come across as filler and I wasn't entirely happy with the last part so thanks for the gee up. Er, no, that was actually a reference to a storyline back in 2005 when a character named Callan drugged Mattie intending to rape her.

^^The actress was Claudia Buttazzoni.Her first character was Laura Bonnetti and her second character was known as Jenna Evans(although her real name was Lisa Graham-long story).

Okay, one for real die hards but in case there's one out there...Does anyone know the surname of Caitlin, Max Sutherland's on-off girlfriend who appeared sporadically on the show between about 2002 and 2004?It was never given in the credits but I'll swear there was an episode where either Don or Barry, probably Don, called her Miss something.

Oh, hang on, that doesn't work...He was eighteen in 2005 so the birthday in 2004 must have been his seventeenth(which would make sense because they bought him a car)which would make him sixteen when we first met him.

Oh boy...Robbie first appeared in the 2003 finale and I think he was meant to be fifteen at the time.He had an important birthday in 2004 which I think was his sixteenth, I'll swear he was in Year 12 in 2006.

Ah.Trying to work out Matilda's age is a minefield at the best of times so I'll play safe and say two or three years.I usually say two even though I think they changed it(which put her in the wrong age group at school).

Today's episode is 4691.

Thank you to everyone who stayed with this fic until the end-I'm glad you enjoyed it. Anyone who was disappointed it wasn't the story they were hoping for...maybe you'll enjoy my next one more.Oh, hang on...

Just to make things even more confusing, a few episodes before Justin was name-checked, Larry referred to Aden having a brother in prison(presumably Sean although it´s possible Justin has been in trouble as well). As an aside, when we first saw Aden he appeared to be living with Sean in a completely different house to the one he was in later, with no mention of any parents, not even when Aden was in hospital.The most likely explanation is that Aden and Sean moved out and then Aden had to go back to Larry when Sean was jailed.But it´s probably just another example of his ever-changing personal history.

I've just looked at the thread on this subject and apparently it's Fiona.

Er...I'm afraid the answers are, respectively, don't know, don't know and nothing.In a bit more detail: Last seen being dragged away in handcuffs(presumably jailed) Last seen being dragged away in handcuffs(probably admitted for psychiatric care) Fled the area before any charges could be brought(and, er, presumably went on to rape lots more girls-and we thought the Axel/Melody stuff was handled badly)

Five.Making fourteen in total.I thought it was going to be fifteen but then I found I had no Chapter 9. Don't ask. This seems like a good point to say I'm going on holiday in a week.Hopefully I'll manage to get this story finished before then but if I don't...apologies, you might have a wait.

First of all, many thanks to everyone who's posted nice comments about this.I was very aware that I needed to get it right and I'm glad people think I did.And they didn't even notice I'd pinched one of my best gags from an episode of Buffy the Vampire Slayer.Or at least if they did they were too polite to mention it. There will probably be a sequel to this, I've got quite a few ideas about what I want to happen in it, but it won't be the next thing I write-I've made a start on something else and the first chapter should hopefully be up some time this week.As always, I'm expecting everyone to hate it.I guess we'll see.

Hehe, well, what are you thinking? I'd love to hear guesses here, cause I have the last chapter ready anyway (it was figured out long before I even started writing this fic) and I hope I haven't been too obvious here &thanks for all the nice comments btw 2 possibilities playing in my head and I don't like either of them. Covered with spoilers to avoid offfending anyone Oh my gosh.Um...that'd be...interesting.Ahem.Still...looking forward to the ending.

Yeah, I agree with the princess above, just go for it.I've lost count of the amount of times I've been pre-empted and it's always interesting to see different people's takes on an idea.