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Aw, really like the idea of Kyle and Casey as teenagers, especially with Brax and Ricky looking out for them. There's something very sweet about that. Looking forward to seeing the group getting together down at the diner. Great start! :)

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Great chapter 

Liked Kyle and Casey as teenagers and Ricky and Brax looking after them.

Update again soon :)

 

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Great chapter

I laughed at Casey always tripping over his shoelaces.

liked that you added the other teens.

Update again Soon :)

 

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The boys are really cute together! :wub: Loved Casey's clumsiness and the teasing they got from the other teens. Three teenage boys in one house?! Sounds like Ricky and Brax have their hands full. 

The guy spying on them from the bushes is worrying. Sounds like some pretty bad people are after Kyle :( 

Looking forward to the next chapter x

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Great chapter

Liked Brax being so protective of the boys

I wonder who Ray is.

Update again soon :)

p.s maybe wait a bit until all the members read the last two chapters before you update again just a suggestion.

Edited by Kristen

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