AtlantaG1912 Posted September 29, 2016 Report Share Posted September 29, 2016 11 minutes ago, Kristen said: Great chapter Liked Brax being so protective of the boys I wonder who Ray is. Update again soon p.s maybe wait a bit until all the members read the last two chapters before you update again just a suggestion. thanks for the review and the only reason i'm posting them so much is because I've already uploaded it in fanfiction.net so I'm trying to get all the chapters i have on there uploaded here so i can write the next chapter. However i will take your suggestion onboard Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted September 29, 2016 Report Share Posted September 29, 2016 Brax is quite a controlling guardian, isn't he? Not that that's a bad thing necessarily. At least they know he cares about them. Seems Ricky does have him wound round her little finger though, lol! So, theres some 'bad'uns' after poor little Kyle then? Looking forward to seeing how this unfolds Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted September 29, 2016 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2016 Had been catching up with the last two chapters and they are really good. Laughed at how Casey tripped over his own shoelaces! Poor guy, lol! Liked the additon of the teens into this fanfiction Uh oh...sounds like some guys are after Kyle...! Â I wonder why...? Update soon please xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 30, 2016 Report Share Posted September 30, 2016 Great chapter liked family time for Kyle's birthday and the presents he got were lovely. Update again soon  Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 30, 2016 Report Share Posted September 30, 2016 Nice update, liked Kyle's presents. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted September 30, 2016 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2016 Great chapter  Liked the presents Kyle got for his birthday Update soon please xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted September 30, 2016 Report Share Posted September 30, 2016 Aw, just caught up on the last two chapters!  Loved them! Kyle got really lovely thoughtful presents from Ricky and Brax, and it was lovely to see them in such a happy family scene with the pancakes. Enjoyed the little bit about Kyle beginning to open up about his time in foster care. All very sweet. And I absolutely loved this second chapter with Oscar and Evie being annoying siblings. Very well written. It was lovely to have Denny there too and to see that she'd worried about them. Really enjoying this story so far! x p.s. love your descriptions of things i.e. "like a snake wrapping itself around a tree trunk" and in the previous chapter "The smell of chocolate chip pancakes creped its way through the share house like a cat looks for it's next meal" Lovely use of language!  Well done! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AtlantaG1912 Posted September 30, 2016 Report Share Posted September 30, 2016 6 minutes ago, Ludub said: Aw, just caught up on the last two chapters!  Loved them! Kyle got really lovely thoughtful presents from Ricky and Brax, and it was lovely to see them in such a happy family scene with the pancakes. Enjoyed the little bit about Kyle beginning to open up about his time in foster care. All very sweet. And I absolutely loved this second chapter with Oscar and Evie being annoying siblings. Very well written. It was lovely to have Denny there too and to see that she'd worried about them. Really enjoying this story so far! x p.s. love your descriptions of things i.e. "like a snake wrapping itself around a tree trunk" and in the previous chapter "The smell of chocolate chip pancakes creped its way through the share house like a cat looks for it's next meal" Lovely use of language!  Well done! i'm glad you are enjoying it. Also thank you for such a lovely review. X P.S. i took combined english for my alevels and I'm studying journalism at uni so i'm trying to use what i was taught and still being taught to help make each chapter better,  1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted September 30, 2016 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2016 Great chapter Liked the scene with the Macguire siblings and liked how Denny is in this fanfiction. Oh man! I miss Oscar and Denny so much on the show. *sighs* Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AtlantaG1912 Posted September 30, 2016 Report Share Posted September 30, 2016 6 minutes ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Great chapter Liked the scene with the Macguire siblings and liked how Denny is in this fanfiction. Oh man! I miss Oscar and Denny so much on the show. *sighs* Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx thank you so much for the lovely review and i also miss oscar and denny they were such good characters (and josh too). P.S. I'm currently reading you're fanfic Life at Summer Bay and i just want to say i like totally love it. xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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