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  1. I'm glad you liked it. Considering i just wrote this filter chapter in an hour i'm quite proud of myself lol.
  2. Hello everyone, author here just to let you know that this chapter is short due to it being a filter chapter Chapter 38 (10:59pm) 28 minutes later… Summer Bay – Surf Club – Main Area Entering the Surf Club, Kyle was surprised to see everything there was within just the main area itself. Then he saw the saw signs, one point towards a doorway to the left of him which led into the Gym, where both Heath and Casey worked. The other sign led up the stairs to where the family restaurant was located. Before he had a chance to say anything a lady, he didn't recognise came over to him. "Kyle, how are you?" the lady says to him. Kyle just looked at the women and then at Brax with a look of confusion on his face. "For god sake women give him a chance to adjust to his surroundings before you pounce on him." A man says as he comes out of the office. "Oh, hush Mr Stewart." Thinking he should probably say something, Kyle replies: "I'm fine thank you." Brax decides now might be a good idea to reintroduce Kyle to everyone: "Kyle, this is Marilyn our next-door neighbour. This man here is Alf Stewart he set the search up the other night to help find you." "Well I guess nice to meet you both." Kyle says politely then turning to Alf he holds out his hand "Thank you for helping Brax and Heath to find me." Shaking Kyle's hand, Alf responds with: "It was no bother young fella. I'm just happy that we managed to find you." "Anyway, we better get upstairs as I have some stuff to do." Brax says as he notices how awkward Kyle seems to feel around them. With that the two of them say goodbye and head upstairs. (11:19am) 20 minutes later… Summer Bay – Surf Club – Angelos – Main Restaurant Area Walking over to the bar, Brax says hi to his staff then grabs the books: "Kyle, why don't we sit outside. That way we can't be disturbed." Kyle nods his head in agreement and then follows Brax outside. (11:24pm) 5 minutes later… Summer Bay – Surf Club – Angelos – Balcony "So, is this what you do?" Kyle asks Brax as they sit down. "Well I used to." Brax replies as he opens the books. "Used to?" "Yeah until you came to the Bay and I made you the manager." "Me?!" "Yes you. Your great at it too." "I know I got top grades in my HSCs, but I don't think I'm good enough for a manager role." "Believe me you are good enough. Kyle, the staff love you because you're the type of boss that this place needed." "If you say so but I don't think I am good enough." Kyle says then looks into the restaurant and mutters "Especially now." Watching his brother, Brax comes up with and idea: "Well why don't I show you how to do the books and then you can give it a try?" Kyle turns back around: "Sure it can't hurt can it." With that Brax takes Kyle through the books and also rights down what he needs to do just so he can refer back to something. Once he was finished explaining, Brax went off to put an order for lunch in and get some drinks. (2:01pm) 2 hours and 37 minutes later… Summer Bay – Surf Club – Angelos – Main Restaurant Area Kyle was currently sat at the table nearest to the bar when Heath appeared out of nowhere. "Hey Kyle." Heath says as he sits down beside him. "Hi." Kyle replies with a sad look on his face like something was bothering him. "What's wrong?" "Nothing is wrong." "Then why do you have that look on your face?" Taking one look at Heath and knowing he isn't going to give up, Kyle sighs in defeat: "I think Brax is going to be angry." "Why?" "Well, I messed up one of the calculations in the book." "Kyle, he will understand if you tell him." "No! We can't tell him; I don't want him to get angry and kick me out as I don't know where to go. I mean could go to Tamara's, but I don't know how to get there." "Well, why don't I help you?" "You?" "Yes me." "No offence but did you even finish school." "Well I finished only exam I did was maths though." Heath says which gets a laugh from Kyle. "You got an 82 for maths, right?" Kyle says. "Yeah I di…" Heath stops midsentence then just stares at Kyle with a smile on his face. "What?" "You remembered." "Remembered what?" "The mark I got on my maths exam." Suddenly it clicks in Kyle's mind and he starts to smile too: "I remembered." "You sure did." Heath replies. Before Kyle could say anything else, Brax appears from the Kitchen and notices the smiles on his brothers' faces: "What's going on?" "Kyle, just remembered something." Heath tells him excitedly. "That's great mate." "It was only Heath's maths HSC score. So, nothing special." Kyle tells them while playing with the pen lid. "It doesn't matter. You remembered something that's all that counts." Brax tells him "I'm kind of sick of this place, so why don't we head home and watch a movie?" "Well I was hoping we could go and see Tamara?" "I don't think she will be finished school yet mate. But once she is why don't I take you round then?" Brax suggest. Kyle nods in agreement then closes the books for the restaurant: "Oh Brax." "Yes Kyle?" Brax says taking the books from him. "I need to tell you something and Heath said you wouldn't be angry so please don't be angry." "Angry about what?" "I messed up one of the calculations." Brax just laughs, then says: "That's ok Kyle, it was your first time doing them. Anyway, let's head home." With that the three Braxtons head back to the house.
  3. Hello everyone, I'm sorry that I haven't updated since January but I have been so busy with work, things in my personal live and my MacBook deciding not to work at the worst time when Apple have decided to close their stores so no genius bar to take it too. Luckily, I know someone who works on the genius bar in one of my local apple stores and they've managed to sort the MacBook out and were able to retrieve this chapter which went missing along with my latest one shot chapter. I'm also so grateful for the reviews that I not only receive for this fanfiction but also my other one Kyle Braxton One Shot Series and I love reading them. If you have any more one-shot ideas, please keep sending them to me via a direct message or as a comment on my one shot series topic and I will add them to the list. Chapter 37 (10:04pm) 45 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Living Room After deciding in the end to take Kyle straight back to the house, Heath had called Bianca so someone could get Nate to be at the house ready for when they got back. Also, to tell them just to act normal as they didn't want Kyle to panic. So, it didn't surprise any of them to see the doctor sat at the dinner table talking and drinking coffee. "Mate, just sit on the couch for us." Brax says to Kyle as he puts his stuff down on the cabinet. Nate watching Kyle slowly sit down, gets up and walks over to him: "Hi Kyle, my name is Nate Cooper." "Hello, I take it you're the doctor." Kyle says without looking up. "That's me." Nate says with a smile then turns to Brax "Don't' suppose you know if he tripped over anything?" "No sorry Doc." Brax responds to the question. Sick of people talking about him like he wasn't in the room as they had done for the past week, Kyle speaks up: "If you wanted to know that why didn't you just ask me?" "Sorry Kyle, I'll remember for next time." "Good because I may not be able to remember much but I can tell you that I didn't trip however I did remember feeling dizzy then waking on the floor which in turn led to me throwing up." Kyle says recounting the moment he woke up on the bush floor. "That's great Kyle." Nate tells him "Ricky don't suppose you could get Kyle here a drink of water please." Ricky nods then gets up and does what she was instructed before heading towards the sofa and handing Kyle the glass. Taking to glass, Kyle places it on the table. "Are you not going to take a drink?" Nate asks him. "Why? I'm not thirsty." "So, you could rid of what I can imagine is the taste of sick in your mouth." Nate laughs. "Wouldn't it be much better for me to just brush my teeth then it taste nicer?" Kyle suggests to the doctor. "Your probably right. Why don't you go do that now? Maybe Casey can show you where the bathroom is." Nate says turning to look at Casey who figures out what Nate is trying to do. Standing up with the help of his crutches: "Come on Kyle, I'll show you where it is." Kyle stands up and follows Casey out the room. This then leaves the others to talk freely. "So, what do you think Nate?" Bianca asks the doctor. "Well he seems to be ok from the initial check and just talking to him." Nate replies. "What about the fact he collapsed?" Brax ask with a look of concern. "Well right now he seems to be doing fine. So, the collapse might have just been down to the fact that he might have been panicking as he didn't know where he was." "What you're basically saying is that the collapse could be down to a number of things?" Heath asks. Standing up and moving over to the table, Nate looks at them all: "Yes that's basically what I'm saying. Look at the end of day we weren't with him when he collapsed so all we can do is take his word for it on what happened. Now I might go and leave you all to it but if you need me don't hesitate to call as I get that this is not only a massive change for Kyle but also yourselves." "Thanks Nate." Brax says as he shows him to the door. Closing the door, Brax then walks back over to the sofa and sits down. "Well Kyle has gone to bed." Casey says as he re-enters the room. "Maybe we all should head to bed as it's late." Bianca suggests. "You lot go. I'm just going to sleep on the sofa in case he wakes up." Brax tells them. "Oh no, you're going to bed like the rest of us." Ricky says to her boyfriend "I know your worried, but we need to trust that he will be fine, and we also need to make sure we are in the best place to help him if he needs it meaning you need to sleep as well." In the end, Brax gives in and takes Ricky's hand and goes off to bed just like the rest of them. (9:23am) Next Day… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Brax and Ricky's Room Brax was finishing getting ready when Ricky woke up. "Come back to bed." Ricky says while rubbing sleep out of her eye. Sighing, Brax stands up and grabs his phone off the bedside table: "I wish I could, but I need to check on Kyle and make sure he has had his medication." "Brax, he will be fine." "How do we know that Ric." "We just need to give it time and this will become a new normal." "I would like the old normal back. Kyle was the one we never had to really worry about. He was the one that knew what needed to be done at the restaurant and he was the one who could sort himself out without needing me to get in the way." "Unless him and Casey were arguing you mean." Ricky laughs hoping it would make her boyfriend smile, but it didn't "Why don't you take him to the restaurant today? Maybe it might help?" Smiling, Brax looks at her and says: "That's not a bad idea actually." With that Brax went out the room to hunt down Kyle. (10:31am) 1 hour and 8 minutes later… Summer Bay – Path on the way to the Surf Club "So, tell me again where we are going?" Kyle asks as he follows Brax along the path. Stopping, Brax turns to his little brother and says: "Ricky suggested I bring you along with me to the restaurant. That way you can maybe help but also get some fresh air." "I kind of think I got enough fresh air last night Brax." "Well think of it this way, it will help you get used to the route you need to take if you wanted to visit the restaurant." Brax suggests. "I suppose your right." Kyle says, "But do you think I could maybe help out?" "I don't see why not." Brax says then starts walking again. Kyle quickly follows behind him, while just looking around at everything in hopes it might jog something in his memory but so far nothing comes back.
  4. I'm glad you enjoyed i toyed with a few ideas before i wrote it but felt this idea would be more interesting to read. I will add it to the list but might leave it a while as the lockdown here the UK is driving me mad to the point where if me and my family dont get let out soon we might end up killing each other lol.
  5. Hello everyone, I'm sorry that I haven't updated since January but I have been so busy with work, things in my personal live and my MacBook deciding not to work at the worst time when Apple have decided to close their stores so no genius bar to take it too. Luckily, I know someone who works on the genius bar in one of my local apple stores and they've managed to sort the MacBook out and were able to retrieve this chapter which went missing. I'm also so grateful for the reviews that I not only receive for this fanfiction but also my other one Levels of Tragedy and I love reading them. If you have any more one-shot ideas, please keep sending them to me via a direct message or as a comment and I will add them to the list. Idea by Helena (BacktotheBay) : Can you please do a one shot where a fire starts in Kyle's bedroom and Brax has to rescue him. For this Kyle is in his final year of school so he is 18. I decided to make Casey two years older than him. Chapter 36 - Fire Hazard Sunday (10:23pm) … Summer Bay – Braxton House – Living Room "You're late!" Brax says as soon as Kyle walks through the front door. Rolling his eyes, Kyle stands in the doorway: "So?" "It's a school night and you are meant to be home by half 9 at the latest." Heath reminds his baby brother as he joins the other two Braxtons on the sofa. "Do I look like I care?" Kyle asks them as he points at his face. "Kyle, it doesn't matter if you care as at the end of the day, I'm the adult and you are the child." Brax states to him. "Really as last time I checked; I was 18 meaning I'm technically an adult in the eyes of the law." "When you live in this house you are meant to follow the rules." Brax goes on to say "Anyway, it's late get to bed and I'll deal with you in the morning." "FINE!" Kyle shouts and then storms out the room. A slam of a door indicating he was in his bedroom. "Was I ever that bad?" Casey asks his brothers. "Well you had your moments, but you certainly weren't as bad as Kyle that's for sure." Heath laughs. "That's good to know I think." Casey states. With that the brothers go back to the game they were watching. (6:42am) Next day… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Dining Room Flinging his backpack on the sofa, Kyle wanders over to the table and sits down. "We need to talk about last night." Brax tells his brother as he places a plate in front of Kyle. "No, we really don't" Kyle retorted. "Yes, we do. Firstly, where were you last night?" Kyle stays silent as he just eats his toast. "Don't make me ask you again." "I was with my mates." "Well I didn't think you were on your own. I meant where were you as in place." "Funny not. If you must know I was at Matt's place with the guys." "So, if I call Matt's parents, they will say you were there?" "How would they? Matt's mum left again, and his dad was at work as always." "Why doesn't that surprise me? Look Kyle, at the end of the day I don't mind you being with your friends, but it was a school night and you agreed to be home by half 9 on a school night." "I lost track of time so shoot me." Kyle says as he stands up and puts his plate in the sink then walks over to his school bag. Watching his brother put the textbook that was on the living room table in has bag and then tie his school tie, Brax wondered: "What happened to you Kyle? You used to be the one I never had to worry about but over the last year I don't know what happened, but you certainly aren't the kid who first came to live with us." Kyle grabs his backpack and heads towards the door, before leaving for school he throws over his shoulder: "News flash Brax, I grew up!" Brax just watches as Kyle leaves. Sighing he says to himself: "Oh, don't I know it!" (12:03pm) 5 hours and 21 minutes later… Summer Bay – Summer Bay High – Lockers Kyle walked over to his locker and put his stuff back inside it then slammed the door shut. Turning around, he says to his friends: "Brax was on my case again this morning." "What for this time?" Rocco asks him. "Well the usual." "No surprise there then." Aden says as he grabs his bag from above his locker "If it helps Morag was on my case last night too." "Ugh, don't know which I would prefer." Kyle says causing them all to laugh "Anyway let's go grab lunch." (12:35pm) 32 minutes later… Summer Bay – Stewart's Point "I'm so happy we don't have to be back till last lesson." Kyle says as he pulls a lighter and a packet of cigarettes out of his bag. They all agree as Kyle starts passing the stuff around. "What do you think Brax would do if he knew you smoked?" Matt quizzes his friend. "I honestly couldn't care less what he would do." Kyle answered him "Besides the others have done much worse than smoking when you think about." "True, I know my dad wouldn't care either way." Matt replied. "Sally would ground me for ever." Rocco threw into the conversation. They all then turned to look at Aden. "Roman might have a talk with me about the dangers of smoking but Morag would more than likely kill me." Aden says. With that they all go back to smoking and eating their lunch. (4:41pm) 4 hours and 6 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Kyle's Bedroom Kyle had just got home after going to the Surf Club to play some pool with his friends. He had been happy to see that no one was home, so he went straight to his bedroom and decided to have another smoke to take the edge of ready for when Brax gets home. Feeling a bit tired, Kyle stubbed his cigarette out and placed it in the bin. Then walked over to his bed and quickly fell asleep. What Kyle didn't realise was that when he threw the cigarette into the bin, he hadn't completely put it out. Meaning that the paper that was already in the bin had started to catch fire. (5:19pm) 38 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Garden Brax had just arrived home and decided to take the BBQ stuff straight into the garden. Placing everything on the table and taking the earphones out that he had in he was suddenly made aware of the sound of the fire alarm coming from within the house. Then out of the corner of his eye he could see flames through Kyle's window. Dropping everything Brax quickly runs into the house shouting for Kyle. (5:25pm) 6 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Kyle's Bedroom Brax doesn't bother to knock instead he just rushes straight into his brother's bedroom. Once in the room he notices the flames coming from the bin and the room full of smoke. There on the bed he noticed Kyle not moving. "KYLE!" Brax yells as he rushes over to the bed and tries to wake Kyle up. All of sudden he starts to stir and Brax picks him up and runs outside. (5:30pm) 5 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Path in front of house Putting Kyle down Brax quickly pulls out his phone to ring for a fire engine when Heath and Casey pull up to the house. Rushing over, Heath goes straight to Kyle who was currently coughing on the ground: "What's going on?" "His bedroom is on fire that's what's going on!" Brax yells after hanging up the phone "Casey come with me." "Where we going?" Casey quickly asks as he follows his brother. "To try and put the fire out!" Brax says then yells to Heath "Get Rachel!" With that the two Braxtons disappeared into the house while Heath ran to get Rachel. Leaving Kyle on his own. Watching his brothers go off in different directions, Kyle thinks to himself: What have I done? Brax is going to kill me when he finds out what I've been up to. (5:37pm) 7 minutes later… Kyle is still coughing when Heath reappears with Rachel. Kneeling down, Rachel looks at Kyle and says: "Have you got any burns that I can't see?" "N no. Jus just a co cough." Kyle says as he coughs again. "I need you to take a deep breath just so I can check your lungs." Kyle does as instructed just as Brax and Casey reappear after managing to put the fire out. "The cough that you currently have is what we expect to see in someone who has smoke inhalation. So as soon as the ambulance gets here, we can get you on oxygen. Right now, I need you to keep taking deep breathes." Rachel explains to him turning to face the brothers "Did they say how long the ambulance would be?" Brax answers: "No they didn't." "Ok I'm going to ring them again just keep an eye on him while I go grab my phone." Rachel says as she gets up and quickly runs back into her house. Watching the doctor disappear, Kyle looks up at Brax and says: "Br Brax, I'm sor sorry." Bending down, Brax knowing why he was sorry after seeing the contents of the bin once they put the fire out but decides to play dumb asks: "Why?" "I wa was smo smoke smoking. I mus must not ha have put the cigar cigarette out prop properly." Heath looks at his brothers and then asked: "Are you serious?" Kyle just responds with a nod of his which in turn makes the coughing worse. "WHAT WERE YOU PLAYING AT?!" Heath just yells at his brother not realising that now was probably not the best time to do so. "I w was ju just ex experi experimenting like most pe people my age." Kyle says as he tries to take in more air but finding it hard to do so. Brax watches Kyle closely and notices how hard he was finding it to do a simple task like breathing: "Casey go and get Rachel NOW!" Casey hears the desperation in his brother's voice and quickly runs off to grab the doctor who was still looking for her phone. "Kyle, you need to slow your breathing down like Rachel said but make sure your taking deep breathes." Brax reminds him. "I I'm try trying to, but it is isn't hel help helping." Kyle says as he starts to claw at his throat. Out of nowhere Rachel appears just as the sound of sirens echo from the distance. "He's getting worse." Brax tells her just as the ambulance pulls up beside them. Watching the paramedics running over to them, Rachel shouts: "18-year-old male, suffering from smoke inhalation. He was fine a couple of minutes ago other than a slight cough however his breathing has started to deteriorate." The paramedics quickly start helping Kyle and load him into the ambulance with both Rachel and Brax jumping in as well. As the ambulance leaves both Casey and Heath just stand there with no idea what to do. (6:06pm) 29 minutes later… Summer Bay – Yabbie Creek – Hospital – Resus After the ambulance had arrived at the hospital, Kyle had been rushed straight through to resus and Brax was left to stand in corridor. Noticing how low Kyle's oxygen stats where, Rachel turned to her patient and said: "Kyle, you need to slow your breathing down as it will help." Kyle tries to do what she says but it doesn't seem to work as his oxygen stats continue to decrease. "Julia, I need you to turn the oxygen up to 100%." Rachel tells the young nurse who was assisting her. The nurse quickly hooks Kyle up the oxygen and does exactly what she was told. Julia then proceeds to place an IV into Kyle's arm. (6:51pm) 45 minutes later… Summer Bay – Yabbie Creek – Hospital – Waiting Room By now all three of the Braxtons were sat in the waiting room, waiting to hear anything on how Kyle was doing. "I still can't believe he's smoking." Heath says calmly to no one in particular. "Well believe it Heath." Casey tells him "Once we got the fire out there was a cigarette in the bin, obviously the idiot hadn't put it out properly so when he put it in there it set the paper on fire." "What I don't understand is why he felt the need to start smoking in the first place." Brax throws into the conversation. "You heard him Brax. He was experimenting." Casey reminds them of what Kyle had struggled to say earlier. "Yeah well I don't like what is happening to him and I'm certainly not happy that he has had to learn the hard way that smoking can be dangerous. As by the state of his room, that fire started well before I got home." Brax thinks about the damage however that is suddenly interrupted by the door opening and Rachel entering the room. Before she gets a million questions thrown at her, Rachel explains: "Kyle is doing much better now. We have him on an oxygen and he is currently been settled into a room." "So, he's going to be ok?" Heath asks her. "We will no more in the morning, however I can't see why he won't make a full recovery." "So, no lasting damage?" Brax continues to question his neighbour. "No there shouldn't be. However, to be on the safe side we are going to keep him in for 48 hours just to keep an eye on him, but he should be fine to leave by then." Rachel tells them just her pager goes off "Look I have to go as I'm needed with another patient, but you can see him now as long as you go easy on him, as I think he know what he did was wrong." With that they all say thank you and follow Rachel out the room but heading off in a different direction to find their brother. (7:28pm) 37 minutes later… Summer Bay – Yabbie Creek – Hospital – Kyle's Room "I really hope you've learned a lesson from this Kyle." Brax tells his brother in hopes that the next part will sink in "Because if I hadn't come home when I did, the outcome might have been much worse." Grabbing the oxygen mask and pulling it off his face, Kyle replies with: "I'm sorry Brax. I never meant for anything like this to happen. I promise that I have learnt my lesson and won't do anything like this again." "Good." They all say at the same time. "Look Kyle, we just want our little brother back not this new person as we don't really like him very much." Casey states. Heath decided to join in the conversation: "Yeah, what Casey said. We miss the responsible Kyle who didn't cause anything us any stress or worry. So, can we please have him back." "Okay, I guess I was just sick of being the one who never had any fun and I just wanted to change that but I can see now that I went the wrong way around that and I promise I'll go back to the old me." Kyle tells them as his eyes start to close. "Just make sure you do." Brax tells him "Now put the mask back as you aren't meant to take it off and get some rest." With that Kyle puts the mask back on his face and quickly falls asleep leaving his brothers to watch over him.
  6. Please can you all make sure to read Chapter 30 – Watching Over You. Otherwise you won't understand what this chapter is going on about as it's going to be a follow up. Also read chapters 33 and 34 as they are the first and second parts to this chapter. This is also the final part. Idea by Joycechanxo (Fanfiction): You could try and do a spin-off of this and how Kyle discharged himself early, like he does in the soap, but in the story, his condition could get worse and maybe collapses like Phoebe and Nate predicted Chapter 35 - Against Advice Can End Badly - Part 3 (3:17pm) 1 hour and 19 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Outside/Living Room Brax and Ricky approach the front door to the main house. As Brax goes to open it, he notices that it was locked. "Hmm." Brax says out loud. "What?" Ricky asks from behind him. "I never locked the door." "Maybe Kyle did." "Yeah maybe." Brax says as he unlocks the door and enters the house "Kyle?" There was no sound from the house to indicate there was anyone else there. "He might have gone for a walk to get some fresh air." Ricky suggests as she goes to put the kettle on. "I'm just going to check his bedroom to make sure he isn't in there." Brax says as he wanders out the room. (3:24pm) 7 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Kyle's bedroom Opening the door, Brax looks around the room. His eyes go to the bedside cabinet but doesn't see Kyle's phone. Turning back round he leaves the room, not realising Kyle was actually on the floor on the other side of the bed. (3:28pm) 4 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Living room "Was he in there?" Ricky asks as she places the cup of coffee on the table. Sitting down beside his girlfriend, Brax tells her: "No he wasn't in there. Neither was his phone, so I guess he has gone for a walk." "Well then, he'll come back soon." "We promised Pheebs we would keep an eye on him." "You can't help the fact you had to go for a bail check-in." Ricky reminds him "Phoebe, will be fine as long as Kyle comes back." "Ok." Brax replies then picks up his cup and has a drink. (5:34pm) 2 hours and 6 minutes later… "So, Phoebe called." Ricky says walking back into the main house from the flat. "And?" Brax quizzes her. "Her and Denny have decided to go into Yabbie Creek for dinner and movie. Apparently, Denny thinks Phoebe needs a girly day and night." "I suppose that's good then." "Yeah considering Kyle still hasn't come back yet." Looking round, Brax notices a set of keys on the kitchen table. "What is it?" "If Kyle went out and he locked the door, why are his keys on the table?" "That's impossible he can't have. Which means…" Before Ricky has a chance to finish what she was saying Brax pulled out his phone. "Can you hear that?" Brax says as he listen to the sound of a phone ringing from somewhere within the house. "It sounds like it's coming from one of the bedrooms." Ricky tells him. Hanging up the phone, Brax runs out the room. (5:47pm) 13 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Kyle's Bedroom Brax flings his brother's bedroom door open and as he scans the room that's when he notices a foot sticking out from the other side of the bed. "RICKY!" Brax yells as he runs over to his brother and bends down. Running into the room, Ricky asks: "What do you need?" "Call an ambulance now!" Brax tells her without looking up "Kyle, can you hear me?" Tapping his brother's face makes no difference when he notices that his brother's chest isn't moving. "NO no no! Kyle, don't do this not again." Checking his brother for a pulse he panics when he can't find one. Grabbing his phone, Brax rings Nate. RING RING RING RING Nate: Brax? Brax: Kyle isn't breathing. N: What? B: We got worried when we couldn't find him. Found him passed out in his room not breathing. N: Have you called an ambulance? Are you doing CPR? B: Yes, and Yes. It's not working though. N: Right keep doing what you're doing help will be there soon. B: Not soon enough Nate. Suddenly, two people appear on either side of Brax and push him out the way and start to work on Kyle. N: Brax? You still there? B: Yes, the paramedics are here now. N: Good, I'll make sure everything is ready at my end. With that the phone call ends and Brax quickly follows the paramedics and his brother out the room. (6:07pm) 20 minutes later… Summer Bay – Yabbie Creek – Hospital – Resus "Kyle Braxton, aged 23 found by his older brother unconscious and not breathing. CPR was performed before arrival." The paramedic tells Nate as they transfer Kyle on to a hospital bed. Waving them off, Nate turns to the nurse and says: "This may have something to do with the accident so let's keep that in mind whil…" BEEEEEEP BEEEEEEP "HE'S CRASHING!" Nate yells as soon as he hears the flat line tone coming from monitor. (6:22pm) 15 minutes later… Summer Bay – Yabbie Creek – Hospital – Outside Resus Brax and Ricky were currently stood outside Resus when the door opened, and Nate came rushing out. "Nate!" Brax says causing the doctor to turn round "What's going on?" Looking at the oldest Braxton and his ex-girlfriend stood in front of him, Nate knew he had to tell them: "His heart stopped." "But they had got it started again while in the ambulance." "Yeah I know but just as the paramedics left the room he stopped breathing and his stopped again." "He was fine though." Brax tells Nate. "Are you sure? Because I told both Kyle and Phoebe that he needed to be back here, but he didn't listen." Nate informs them "So if he was showing any symptoms, one of you needs to tell me now." "Wheezing." Ricky says to no one in particular. "What?" "Kyle was wheezing this morning. He was asleep on the sofa and I went to check on him and you could hear it." "Anything else?" "A persistent cough and he has been tired. He slept the whole of yesterday pretty much away." Brax remembers "He got back from the restaurant with Phoebe after she left went to his room only came out for lunch didn't seem him again till dinner." "Tell me about the cough?" Nate asks them. "Not much we can tell you about it except it seemed to be getting worse." Ricky jumps in with: "He was slurring his words this morning when we woke him." "Slurring?" Nate says but before he gets a chance the sound of alarms ring out again. BEEEEEEP BEEEEEEP Nate quickly runs back into the room leaving Brax and Ricky just standing there both seriously worried for Kyle. (6:39pm) 17 minutes later… Summer Bay – Yabbie Creek – Hospital – Resus "This is no good." Nate says to the nurse as he tries to get the tube down Kyle's throat "Get me the next size up now!" With the bigger tube in hand, Nate manages to it down Kyle's throat to help him breathe. "Hook him up to the vent. Also get him up to CT, so we can find out what the hell is going on!" Nate demands then turns to another nurse "Get a rush on his blood work, I want to make sure there was no toxins in his blood stream." With that, Kyle is wheeled out the room and straight past both Brax and Ricky. (7:45pm) 1 hour and 6 minutes later… Summer Bay – Yabbie Creek – Hospital – ICU – Kyle's Room Ricky was sat stroking Kyle's hair and Brax was pacing the room, when suddenly the door was flung open. "OH MY GOD!" Phoebe exclaimed as she saw her boyfriend. "Pheebs." Brax says to her. "What happened?" Phoebe demands to know "You said, you would look after him while I was out!" "I had to go for my bail check-in." "So, you didn't think to take him with you!" "He was in a mood Pheebs. We weren't going to be long, so I thought he'd be ok." "So, when you got back you didn't think to check on him?" "The door was locked so I want to check his room and his phone wasn't where he puts it. Me and Ricky assumed he had gone for a walk." "Well obviously he didn't!" "We know that now. Don't you think I feel guilty enough Phoebe?" Brax tells the girls with a look of guilt all over his face. "Well you should feel guilty!" Phoebe shouts at the man "He's in here because of you!" Thinking now was a good idea to say something, Ricky shouts: "STOP! JUST STOP!" Both Brax and Phoebe stop and look at Ricky who was still stroking Kyle's hair. "It's no one's fault. All we need to focus on right now is getting him better and that can't happen if we are all arguing, so just shut up or get out!" Ricky tells them both. Phoebe goes to say something but thinks better of it and instead walks over to the other side of the bed and takes a hold of Kyle's hand. "Nate said they are just waiting on the results of his blood tests to determine what is wrong so until then, let's just be thankful he's still lying here in front of us." Ricky informs Phoebe. (7:56pm) 11 minutes later… Eventually Nate enters the ICU room to inform them all about Kyle. "So, what did the blood test reveal?" Phoebe asks him before he has a chance to say anything. "The toxins that hadn't completely left Kyle's system before he discharged himself, were still there." "How?" "Well because he discharged himself it meant he wasn't getting the drugs to help counteract them. Which meant they were just attacking his body from the inside." Nate informs them "So the wheezing which was probably caused by the persistent cough. Also, the tiredness were all side effects of the issue." "When he was trapped under the bus he wasn't wheezing or coughing?" Brax says remembering how Kyle was that night just under two weeks ago. "That's got something to do with that fact that help got that sooner and the toxins hadn't had the chance to travel through the blood stream. However, he has had two days where he hasn't been monitored." "So that's why he wasn't breathing?" Phoebe asks curiously. "Exactly." "So now what?" "Well, I've decided that the best course of action is too keep Kyle in an induced coma." "So, we're back at square one?" Brax huffs. "Unfortunately, yes we are. But this is a good thing." Ricky not understanding how this could be a good thing, asks: "How?" "Because it gives us a chance to make sure that there are no toxins left in Kyle's blood when we wake him up." That's when it clicks in Phoebe's mind: "Is this so we don't have a repeat of this situation?" "Bingo!" Nate says causing them to laugh "Look, if Kyle had done what he was meant to in the first place this wouldn't have happened, but it has so all we can do now is make sure it doesn't happen again. Anyway, I have to go inform the nurses of this decision." They all say bye to Nate and go back to sitting and waiting. (11:37am) 4 days later… Darkness. This is all that greeted Kyle and a weird feeling like he was being chocked but he couldn't figure out why. Suddenly there was a voice from somewhere: "…open your eyes?" It sounded like Phoebe, but he wasn't sure. Another voice came from the somewhere else. "Kyle, can you open your eyes?" Whoever they were seemed to want him to open his eyes. So, he did what he was told. Opening his eyes, he could see who the voices belonged to, there in the room was both Brax and Phoebe smiling at him. Suddenly become more aware of the fact he was still being chocked; his head went towards his mouth. Quickly grabbing the arm, Brax shouts: "NATE!" Rushing into the room, the first thing Nate notices is Brax holding his patient's arms down. Walking over to the bed, Nate says: "Someone decided to rejoin us in the land of the living eventually." A nurse appears beside Nate with everything ready to take the tube out. "Kyle, on the count of three I want you to take a big cough." Nate instructs Kyle. On the count of three, Kyle coughs and the tube slides out of Kyle's throat. "How you feeling Kyle?" "Thirsty." Kyle tells him just as a straw is put to his mouth. "Better?" Phoebe asks him as she holds up a cup of water. Kyle just nods his head. "Kyle, do you remember what happened?" Nate asks him. "I couldn't stop coughing." Kyle remembers. "Yes, that was one of the symptoms from the toxins that were still in your system." Kyle just stares at Nate before his eyes slip shut again. Phoebe and Brax look back at Nate, who tells them that its just from the sedative that was still wearing off and that he would be a wake properly in a couple of hours. (2:50pm) 3 hours and 13 minutes later… Kyle was wide awake when Nate came back to check on him. "So, how are we feeling now?" Nate asks him. "I'm feeling a lot better, thanks Nate." Kyle replies. "Good." Nate says as he picks up Kyle's chart. "I'm sorry for not listening to you Nate." Kyle apologised "If I had done what you said and not discharged myself this wouldn't have happened." "Did you learn from it?" Kyle nods his head in response. "Well then let's leave it at that." Nate says putting the chart back and goes to leave the room. "So, when can I get out of here?" Kyle asks which causes everyone to laugh. "Not until I say so." Nate throws over his shoulder as he walks away to check on another patient.
  7. Thank you for the continuous reviews i love reading them. I going to try and write the next part tomorrow but probably won't get it up till Wednesday afternoon as i'm at work tomorrow night and then my little brother has a hearing test at 11:20am on Wednesday morning. Meanwhile if you have any ideas don't be afraid to send them my way. xx
  8. Please can you all make sure to read Chapter 30 – Watching Over You. Otherwise you won't understand what this chapter is going on about as it's going to be a follow up. Also read chapter 33 as that is the first part to this chapter I've decided to make this one shot a three part one Idea by Joycechanxo (Fanfiction): You could try and do a spin-off of this and how Kyle discharged himself early, like he does in the soap, but in the story, his condition could get worse and maybe collapses like Phoebe and Nate predicted Chapter 34 - Against Advice Can End Badly - Part 2 (3:41pm) 4 hours and 27 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Garden Brax was sat in the garden washing the BBQ down ready for dinner later that night when Ricky appeared from behind him. "This place is quiet." Ricky tells him as she sits down in the shade. Putting down the bucket and cloth, Brax turns and says: "That might have something to do with the fact that everyone but me and Kyle were out." "So, he stayed then?" "Yeah, he came out his room for lunch then stomped back there once he was finished." Brax does an impression of Kyle as he joins his girlfriend in the shade "I thought once I was finished this I would go check on him." "Maybe that's a good idea. Tell you what, I don't mind finishing this off while you go check on your brother." Ricky says as she points at the BBQ. "Rick, its fine I can finish it." "I'm not broken Brax. I'm pregnant therefore I can still do stuff, so go check on Kyle." "Only if you're sure?" Brax replies to her. "I'm sure now go." Ricky laughs. With that Brax stands up and goes back into the house. (3:52pm) 11 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Kyle's Bedroom After knocking on the door and getting no response Brax decided to go into his brother's room. There on the bed was Kyle fast asleep with the TV still on. Quietly, Brax grabs the remote off the bed and turns the TV off and places the control on the bedside cabinet. Walking over to the chair in the room, he grabs the blanket that Phoebe had probably placed there and then walked back to the bed and draped it over his brother. Making sure he didn't make a noise he exited the bedroom and went back to join his girlfriend. (4:01pm) 9 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Garden Hearing Brax walking out the house Ricky asks without looking at him: "Was he ok?" "He was asleep, so I turned the TV and put a blanket over him and left the room." Brax answers her, grabbing the cloth from her hand. "Well that's good." "Eh?" "Well Phoebe told me yesterday that Nate said Kyle wasn't meant to be discharged till at least next week so he can get some rest and heal at the same time." "So, the fact he's sleeping is a good sign?" "Yeah it means at least he's doing something Nate told him to do." Ricky jokes causing them both to laugh. "Very true." Brax concurred then went back to finishing up the BBQ. (6:17pm) 2 hours and 16 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Kyle's Bedroom When Phoebe got home from work, she was surprised to not find Kyle in the garden with everyone else. So, when Brax told her the last time he had checked on Kyle, he was asleep Phoebe thought it was a good thing. Which is why she is now having to be quiet while she gets changed out of her work clothes into something more her. While she was putting here work stuff back in the wardrobe, she heard a cough coming from the bed and quickly whipped her head round. "Hey sleepy head." She greets her boyfriend as she walks over to the bed. Sitting up, Kyle grabs the glass from the bedside cabinet and takes a quick drink. Putting it back down, Kyle who was a bit more awake inquired: "What time is it?" "Nearly half 6. According to Brax, you've slept the afternoon away. Not like I'm going to complain as it means you're getting some rest." "Following doctor's order like I was told to do but in the comfort of my of bed." "Whatever you say. Dinner's nearly ready anyway, so I'm happy I don't have to wake you up myself." "What we having like?" "Well Brax cleaned the BBQ. So, I'm assuming that we have that for dinner." Phoebe informs him. "Cool." Is all Kyle says, then goes on to ask "How did the blanket end up over me when it was on the chair?" Phoebe just laughs and stands up with Kyle copying her as she left the room. (6:56pm) 39 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Garden Andy and Josh had joined the group of people in the garden ten minutes ago, so now they were all sitting eating dinner while talking about their days. "How you feeling Kyle?" Josh asks the older man as he puts the tomato sauce back on the table. Putting down his burger, Kyle responds to him: "I'm fine thanks for asking Josh. What about your head?" Rubbing his head, Josh goes on to say: "It's fine, much better now that Evie has kissed it better." This earned the teen a slap from his older brother, Andy then follows the slap with: "No one wants to hear that Josh!" With that everyone laughs but the laughing stops when Kyle starts to cough. Looking at his brother, Brax says worriedly: "Hey mate, are you ok?" "Yes Brax, for the 4000th time I'm fine." Kyle sighs then takes a quick sip of his beer "It's just a cough. Probably from the fact I had a tube forced down my throat." "A tube that allowed you to breathe." Phoebe reminds him "Do you think it's a good idea to be drinking beer?" Suddenly Kyle slams the bottle back on the table and stands up: "I'M FINE FOR GOD SAKE!" "Ok I'm just making sure Kyle." A shocked Phoebe says to her boyfriend. Heading towards the gate, Kyle turns around and says: "Well I'm sick of it! Now I'm going to head to the Diner for something to eat in peace." They all watch as Kyle leaves the garden. "Should we go after him?" Ricky quizzes Phoebe. Shaking her head: "No." "Why not?" they all ask. "Because when Kyle gets like this, it's best to just leave him be, trust me." Phoebe says as she goes back to her food. (10:11pm) 3 hours and 15 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Living Room Kyle had eventually returned home about 15 minutes earlier and was currently sat in the living room watching TV as he didn't fancy going to bed yet until he was sure Phoebe was completely asleep. Coughing, Kyle thinks to himself. This cough is driving me insane. Actually, both the cough and everyone asking if I'm ok is driving me insane. What don't they understand about the fact I'm fine? I know that what happened scared them and they're just making sure I don't end up getting hurt even more but it's annoying. Coughing again, Kyle headed into the kitchen and grabs a glass of water then returns to the sofa. All this coughing is making my chest hurt. Oh well I'm sure it will get better after all it was only 4 days ago, I had tube breathing for me so hopefully this cough is down to that. With that Kyle goes back to watching the film he had put on, half-way through it he falls asleep on the sofa. (7:23am) Next day… Kyle was still asleep on the sofa when Andy entered the living room to grab some breakfast from the kitchen, before he headed off to work at the Gym. While he was sat at the table, Brax and Ricky enter the main house talking away when Andy says: "Shhh." Noticing Andy was pointing to the sofa, Brax sighs and asks: "How long has he been there?" "I think all night. I heard him get back at about five to ten last night, I figured he just wanted to watch some TV before going to bed and having to deal with Pheebs. But I guess he must have fell asleep there as the TV was still on when I woke up." "Do you think we should wake him, Brax?" Ricky says looking at the man she views as a brother. "Nah, just leave him." Brax says as he puts the kettle on "He obviously needs the sleep." Ricky was about to move away from the sofa when she hears a strange noise coming from Kyle. She moves closer to him and put her ear to his face. Looking up from his bowl, Andy asks: "What on earth are you doing?" Standing up straight, Ricky commented: "He's wheezing." Brax stops what he is doing and moves back over to the sofa and listens for himself. "Your right." Brax tells her. With that Brax nudges Kyle in hopes of waking him up, which works. "Wh what?" Kyle wheezes. "Mate, you don't sound to good." Brax says to his little brother clearly worried about how he sounds. "I I'm f fin fine." "No you aren't." "YES I AM!" Kyle shouts. "Alright mate calm down." Brax says as he tries to calm Kyle down. "I'm going for a shower." Kyle throws before making his way from the living room and bumping into Phoebe. "What's going on?" Phoebe asks as she pushes her boyfriend back into the main area of the house. "NOTHING!" "Kyle, stop shouting." Ricky says to the young man. "Why?" Kyle says without out shouting this time. "Because Josh is still asleep you idiot." Andy reminds Kyle. After not getting the response she wanted, Phoebe spoke up: "Can someone tell me what is going on?" "According to Kyle he's fine. However, both me and Brax could hear him wheezing before Brax woke him up." Ricky explains to Phoebe. "I was not wheezing." "How do you know? You were asleep." Brax mentions to his brother. "I've said I'm fine so leave it. Now as I said I'm going to go have a shower." Kyle says and manages to actually leave the room this time. Watching her boyfriend leave the room, Phoebe turns back to face the rest of the room's occupants: "Wheezing?" "Yep and he stuttered his words when he woke up." "I have to do something with Denny today so will anyone be able to keep an eye on him?" "Me and Brax can." Ricky says volunteering herself and her boyfriend. "Good, just make sure you check on him." Phoebe says as she goes to check on her boyfriend. (1:32pm) 6 hours and 9 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Kyle's Bedroom Kyle was in his he heard a knock at the door. "Come in." Kyle responded. The door opened and Brax popped his head through the gap: "Me and Ricky need to pop to the station for my bail check-in, so we won't be too long." "Whatever." Kyle waved his hand his brother as a way of goodbye. Brax doesn't say anything instead he just closes the door and leaves the house. Hearing the front door slam shut, Kyle breathes a sigh of relive. Thank god, they've left now I can be left in peace. My chest still hurts as well, maybe I shou… Kyle stops thinking to himself when he suddenly breaks out into a coughing fit. Realising he doesn't have a glass of water he gets off his bed and go in search of a drink. (1:40pm) 8 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Kitchen Kyle stumbles his way into the kitchen while still coughing. Walking over to the shelf he takes down a glass and proceeds to fill it. After taking a drink his cough still doesn't let up and he remembers that there was some cough medicine in the bathroom, so he go off to get some. (1:51pm) 11 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Bathroom Once in the bathroom Kyle he opened the medicine cabinet and locates the cough syrup. Taking the recommended dosage, he places the bottle back in the cabinet then heads back to his room. (1:58pm) 7 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Kyle's Bedroom Kyle was still coughing when he walked back into his room. I swear this cough is just annoying me now! Kyle walks over to his desk as he decides to do some work on the laptop but notices it wasn't there. Turning around while rubbing his chest which over the last ten minutes was starting to feel tighter, he spots the bag which had the laptop in when he came home. Walking towards the bag, Kyle break out into another coughing fit but this time it feels different to him. Suddenly his legs give out from under him and he finds himself on the floor. Pulling himself into a sitting position, Kyle leans his head back so it's resting on the bed. As he continues to cough, he can hear a rattling sound coming from somewhere within him just before his eyes start to close, Kyle thinks to himself. Why didn't I listen to Nate? Then the world turns black and Kyle slumps sideways so his whole body is lying on the floor…
  9. Please can you all make sure to read Chapter 30 – Watching Over You. Otherwise you won't understand what this chapter is going on about as it's going to be a follow up. This idea will be split into two parts as I think that will be the best way to do it. Idea by Joycechanxo (Fanfiction): You could try and do a spin-off of this and how Kyle discharged himself early , like he does in the soap, but in the story, his condition could get worse and maybe collapses like Phoebe and Nate predicted Anything that the characters speak that looks like this is from episode 6128. As this is the episode form 2015 when Kyle discharges himself from the hospital as he wants to help Brax. P.S: I'm sorry I didn't upload sooner; I've been busy with updating the Level's of Tragedy fanfiction. Chapter 33 - Against Advice Can End Badly - Part 1 (9:39am) 3 days later… Summer Bay – Yabbie Creek – Hospital – Kyle's Room "So, when can I get out of here?" Kyle asks Nate as he finishes writing something in Kyle's chart. "Not for a least another week." Nate tells him without looking up. "Why not? I'm perfectly fine Nate." "Because it was only three days ago you were on a ventilator and we don't want you to go backwards in your recovery." "Well I can recover at home though." Kyle informs him. "I'm sorry Kyle, this isn't up for discussion." Nate tells the stubborn member of the Braxton family "Anyway, I have to go and see some other patients. So, get some rest." With that Nate leaves the room. (9:58am) 19 minutes later… Kyle was watching something on his phone when Phoebe wandered into the room with a bag. "Well hello my gorgeous boyfriend." Phoebe greeted Kyle. Putting his phone down, Kyle rolls his eyes and says: "Hello, my creepy girlfriend." "HEY! I'm not creepy I'm beautiful." Phoebe responds causing both of them to laugh "So, has Nate been in yet?" "Yeah he left about 20 minutes ago." "Damn, I was wanting to ask him something." "Like what?" "How you were recovery?" "Well can't I tell you that?" "Nope." "Why not?" "Considering I know you too well I think I'd rather hear from the doctor treating you." "I'm not that bad." Kyle tells her. "Really? So, you didn't ask him if you could go home yet?" Phoebe quizzes her boyfriend. With this Kyle goes quiet. "Thought so. Anyway, I brought you the books from the restaurant and your laptop, but you can only do them while in bed. I mean it." Phoebe warns him "While you go over them, I'm going to see Nate." Kyle sighs and turns on his laptop as Phoebe leaves the room. (10:21am) 23 minutes later… Summer Bay – Yabbie Creek – Hospital – Nate's Office "So, how is he really doing Nate?" Phoebe asks the doctor as he closes the door to his office. Sitting down at his desk, Nate speaks: "He's doing better than I thought he would." "That's good right?" "Well yes and no." "No?" "His latest test results still show some toxins in his blood so until they are gone completely, he is not leaving the hospital." "Let me guess, he asked when he could get discharged this morning?" "Yes, he did. I don't think he was happy with my answer to the question." Nate say causing them both to laugh. "If it helps, he's always been like that." "Good to know he isn't just like that with me." "On a serious note, when are you looking at discharging him? Just so I know how long I need to keep him entertained." "I told Kyle this morning not for a least a week, just to be on the safe side." "Oh great." Phoebe sighs standing up. "Sorry Pheebs but it is in his best interests to keep him here." Nate tells the girl "Besides it gives you a chance to plan a welcome home party." Smiling Phoebe opens the door and says: "Now Doctor Cooper, I like your way of thinking. Anyway, I better get back to Kyle but thanks for everything so far Nate." Nate nods his head and watches Phoebe leaves then goes back to his paperwork. (1:56pm) 3 hours and 35 minutes later… Summer Bay – Yabbie Creek – Hospital – Corridor "I don't think this is such a good idea." Phoebe states as she helps Kyle walk down the corridor. "You heard the nurse earlier, she said this was fine." Kyle reminds his girlfriend. "That's true. I just don't want to get hurt even more." "Well there's no chance of that happening. Anyway, I thought Brax and Ricky would have been in." "Been in?" "Yeah to see me. Since I woke up, the only visitor I've had is you." Kyle says. With that Phoebe stops and glares at him. "Not that you aren't a lovely visitor." Kyle quickly adds. "Better." Phoebe laughs "Brax and Ricky are a bit busy at the moment." "Busy?" "Yeah you know getting the Ute fixed and work." "Well that doesn't stop them from coming to see me though. This is why I should be at home." "Kyle, you need to be here so you can fully recover. Besides home is the last place you want to be right now." Phoebe says not realising she said the last sentence out loud. "Why don't I want to be at home? You just said they were busy." Quickly, Phoebe comes up with: "They are also sorting out the cot and everything for the baby. They are being put together in the living room so there's bits of wood and screws everywhere." Kyle notices Phoebe is trying to lie and doesn't like it: "Your lying." "No, I'm not." "Yes, you are Pheebs. Tell me the truth." Knowing she has no choice, Phoebe informs Kyle: "Brax got arrested." "WHAT?!" "Brax was arrested the other day, when he was on his way to see you." "What's the charge?" "If I tell you, promise me you won't do something stupid." "I won't" "Fine, they think he murdered someone." "You've got to be kidding me." Kyle says as he quickly turns around and starts to walk back to his hospital room. Following her boyfriend, Phoebe demands to know: "Where are you going?" "Back to my room." Kyle snaps. (2:06pm) 10 minutes later… Summer Bay – Yabbie Creek – Hospital – Kyle's Room As Kyle is packing his bag, Nate comes rushing into the room demanding to know what his patient is doing. "I'm discharging myself and you can't stop me." Kyle told Nate. "That's not a good idea Kyle." Nate tells him then looks at Phoebe. Phoebe noticing the look from Nate says to her boyfriend: "Nate's right you can't discharge yourself." "Yes, I can and I will." "Kyle you aren't well enough to go home yet." "Well I don't care Nate. Brax needs me so I'm leaving." "Whatever is going on with Brax is not worth jeopardizing your health for." Nate tells the young Braxton. "Yeah well that's not up to you." Kyle says as he picks up his bag and walks past Nate leaving the hospital room behind. Quickly grabbing Phoebe's arm before she can go after him: "Phoebe, if he's discharging himself you need to watch him like a hawk." "Why?" Phoebe quickly asks. "Because anything can happen." Nate tells her. With that Phoebe nods, grabs her own bag then chases after Kyle, leaving Nate standing in the now empty hospital room. (2:51pm) 45 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – The Flat Brax, Ash and Ricky were all in the middle of a discussion about how to help Brax when they hear Phoebe from outside. "Will you slow down." Phoebe says as she follows Kyle to the house. Appearing in the doorway, Kyle stands there looking at everyone. "What are you doing here?" Brax demands an answer from his younger brother. Holding on to the door frame, Kyle speaks up: "Phoebe told me that you were arrested and I want to help." Sighing Brax tells his brother: "Well considering you're here, you might as well sit down." Phoebe looks at Brax and says: "Are you serious? You want to get him out of the hospital and straight into a murder investigation?" They all just look at her before she storms off into the main house. Ricky says she'll go after her while they fill Kyle in on what's been happening. (10:12am) Next Day… Summer Bay – Outside the Surf Club Phoebe was in the middle of trying to stop Kyle from going in to work when Nate suddenly appears by her side after spending the morning at the Gym. "Nice move." Nate says to Kyle "You know checking yourself out of the hospital and now you're trying to work?" "I just have a few things I want to take care of." Kyle lets the doctor know as he points at the book in his hand. "You won't if you collapse and end up in intensive care." Nate states to the stubborn Braxton. "Exactly what I've been saying." Phoebe points out after spending the last 19 hours trying to convince her boyfriend he should be back in the hospital. "I'm dropping off some paperwork then I'm going home." Kyle says as he look at Nate and Phoebe "Happy?" Phoebe nods her head: "Deliriously but I'm driving you home." With that Phoebe grabs Kyle's hand and walks him into the Surf Club while Nate just watches them go. (11:14am) 1 hour and 14 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Living Room Brax was sat watching the TV when Phoebe marches Kyle back into the house. Without taking his eyes of the TV, Brax speaks up: "Shouldn't you be resting?" "Don't you start." Kyle says as he plonks himself down in the seat beside his brother. Phoebe walks into the kitchen and grabs a glass filling it with water then walks back into the living room: "Here's some water. Now Brax make sure he doesn't leave the house as I'm going back to work." Brax nods and with that Phoebe leaves. "She's joking." Kyle adds as he puts the glass down and takes off his leather jacket. "Something tells me she isn't mate. Besides you only discharged yourself yesterday and I know you want to help and that make me feel a bit better about the situation, but your health has to come first Kyle." Says Brax. "How many times do I need to say I'm fine before everyone gets it through their thick skulls." Kyle snaps. Standing up he grabs both his jacket and the glass then heads to his room to watch the TV in there.
  10. i will be updating the one-shot series for the next couple of days then i'll be back to this one
  11. Just wait more to come in terms of Casey being mean....
  12. Chapter 36 Meanwhile… Summer Bay – In the bush Kyle was just starting to come round from the seizure, as he tries to sit up he suddenly goes white. Turning to his side, Kyle throws up. What happened? One minute I felt dizzy now I'm on the ground and I've just been sick. Ugh I have headache; I must be coming down with something. Why is it so cold? When did I end up outside? Ok, maybe now is good time to start panicking. I think I will just stay here for a bit before I try to stand up as I will probably end up falling straight back down again. Kyle sits up and rest up against a tree. He knows he shouldn't close his eyes but as he starts to feel tired, he closes his eyes. I think I'll sleep for just a couple of minutes just give myself some time to feel a bit better. (8:10pm) 1 hour and 9 minutes later… Summer Bay – Surf Club – Main Area "So, who's idea was it to circle all the areas searched already?" Alf asks as he looks over the map that Casey had printed out. "Casey's." Heath tells the older man. "Don't them two hate each other?" John says as he remembers the constant sounds of arguing coming from the two younger Braxton brothers. "Yeah well Melbourne changed all that John." Brax points out "Now can we get back to trying to find Kyle?" With that Alf to speak again: "Right we are going to focus mainly on the bush surrounding the Bay. We have got teams of people already on their way out there to start the search." "What about us?" Brax and Heath ask at the same time. Peter thinking it might be best if he takes this question, speaks up: "Well normally we would have family members stay here but I'm going to assume that won't work with you lot. So, myself and you two are going to take one of the areas Alf has marked on the map. And before you say anything Tamara, you will be staying here with Alf." "Why do I have to stay here?" Tamara demands to know "He's my boyfriend therefore I deserve the right to be out there searching for him." "Because I promised Leah that I would make sure you didn't get hurt plus you have school in the morning." "You seriously think I will be going to school tomorrow when my boyfriend is missing?!" "It's not up for discussion Tamara, you are staying here with Alf and that's final!" Peter tells the teen. "This unbelievable!" Tamara says and goes to a table and sits down. (8:59pm) 49 minutes later… Summer Bay – In the bush "KYLE!" "KYLE, WHERE ARE YOU!" All three members of the search group where shouting in hopes that Kyle would respond to their calls. "Brax, this is getting us nowhere." Heath tells his older brother as they walk through the bushes. "Look Heath, we have to keep searching for him." Brax says to him. "On a scale of one to ten, Peter do you think we are going to find him tonight?" "I think with the amount of people searching for your brother, we are going to find him." Peter replies "Now instead of just standing why don't we continue searching for him." With that they continue in the direction they were heading in hopes that they will find him. (9:12pm) 13 minutes later… Kyle woke up to the sound of shouting coming from somewhere nearby. Weakly, Kyle stands up and starts to walk in the direction of the voices hoping that they belong to his brothers. "KYLE!" Brax yells again. "Brax." Comes a voice from somewhere in the distance. "KYL…!" Heath's shout gets interrupted by his brother hitting him "What was that for?" "Shut up and listen." Brax tells him. "Brax." The voice comes again. Peter who also hears the voice says: "That's coming from over there." With that all three of them head off in the direction of the voice. (9:19pm) 7 minutes later… "KYLE!" Brax yells again. Suddenly there's the snapping of twigs coming from somewhere in front of them. "KYLE" All of three of them yell. Slowly a figure emerges from between the branches and Kyle appears in the light radiating from the torches that the three men were holding in their hands. "Brax?" Kyle says quietly while trying to cover his eyes. Letting out the breath he didn't realise he was holding, Brax quickly runs over to his brother and pulls him into a hug. Pulling away, Brax asks his brother: "Are you ok?" "I'm cold." Kyle answers him. Heath appears by his brother's side and says: "That might have something to do with the fact that you don't have a coat on and its freezing out here." "Oh." "Kyle, my name's Peter." Peter informs him "We have been looking for you over an hour. So, I think it might be best to get you to the hospital and get you checked out." "NO!" Kyle screams not wanting to go back to another hospital. Heath and Brax look at each, then Heath says: "I think Peter is right mate. Just to be safe as you have been missing for ages." "No, I don't want to go to any hospital. I'm sick to death of them." "Ok, but can we at least get a friend of ours to check you over?" Brax asks him. Kyle nods his head in response. "Right I think we should head to back to the Surf Club and on the way there, we can let Alf know we have found him." Peter tells them all, which they all agree to. With that they all head off in the direction of the car, with Brax helping Kyle just to make sure he doesn't fall over.
  13. You will have to wait and see about to start writing the next chapter now. Currently using my week off to update this one and then do a couple of the one shots as well but I felt this deserved updating first lol.
  14. Hey guys the author here, just wanted to point out that I know Angelo would have already left the show by this point, but I decided to keep him in it for the purpose of the story. Also, there is a surprise past character who will appear too. Chapter 35 (6:45pm) 24 minutes later… Summer Bay – Braxton House – Living Room "Anything?" Brax and Heath ask at the same time, as soon as they enter the house. "Not yet?" Ricky says as she shakes her head and goes back to her phone. "Who's she on the phone too?" Heath asks his fiancée. "We thought it might be a good idea to call the police what with the TBI and everything." Bianca replies. "That's actually a good idea, the more people searching for him the better." Brax added "Is Tamara still out looking for him?" Casey turned away from the laptop to face his brother: "Yeah she said she was going to try Stewarts Point and Leah was going to drive her into Yabbie Creek on the off chance he's managed to make it all the way there on foot." "Good, what are you doing?" "Well I'm looking for a map of Summer Bay to print off, that way we can circle everywhere we have looked so we aren't going to be double checking them places again." Casey says as he prints a map off. "Cool, then we can give that to the police then, so they know where we have and haven't checked." Brax concurred with his younger brother. Just then Ricky says bye and hangs up the phone and places it on the table. "What did Angelo say?" They all asked. "He's coming put with some detective who is visiting from the City." Ricky informs them "Apparently, this detective is actually Leah's brother-in-law so that means he probably already heard about Kyle from Leah and Tamara." "Well at least they seem to be taking this seriously." Heath adds to the conversation. (7:01pm) 16 minutes later… "So exactly what happened?" Detective Peter Baker asks the Braxtons. As Casey was the one who is had found Kyle missing he decided to be the one that filled in the detective: "I had left that note on the dinning room table just so Kyle knew that there was in fact someone home but I was in the back garden. However, after a while I decided to go check on him because he still wasn't up and when I went to his room, he was gone but his phone was still on the bedside cabinet. So, I searched the whole house as best as I could while on crutches, but I couldn't find him. That's when I realised the note I left him hadn't been touched." "So, you were the only one other than Kyle who was actually home?" "Yeah. Heath and Bianca had gone to Irene's while Brax and Ricky were at the restaurant." Casey told him. There was a noise outside, and everyone turned their heads hoping to see Kyle, but they were disappointed when it was only Leah and Tamara. "Peter, what are you doing here?" Leah asks surprised to see the detective. "Angelo got a phone call and I said I would come with him." Peter told her "I take it you two had no luck finding him then." "Bingo!" Tamara said sadly, then she looked at Casey "This is all your fault!" "Woah! How is this my fault?" a shocked Casey asks the teen. "If you had kept checking on him then this would never have happened!" "He was asleep Tamara besides I left a note on the table so he would know where I was." "You heard the doctor back in Melbourne that with Kyle's type of injury we have to make sure that you write every detail down!" "I didn't think that to go from the house out the back door into the garden would require directions!" "Kyle can't remember living in this house for god sake. So, of course you need to write it down!" Tamara continues to yell at him. "Well I'm so sorry that I didn't think for a couple of minutes!" Casey yells at her. Thinking now would be a good idea to stop the two of them arguing, Angelo jumps in between them and says: "Instead of blaming each other, why don't we get back to what's important." Everyone nods in agreement. "Right, now as I understand you have a map with everywhere that you have searched circled?" Angelo checks with them. "Yes, it was actually Casey's idea." Bianca informs them all. Tamara just glares at Casey when Bianca says this. "Well I think considering the fact that Kyle has a serious brain injury and that is now dark not to mention cold outside. I think we should get Alf to get the SES team together so we can check the bigger areas like the bushland surround the Bay." Peter says as he pulls out his phone. "Do you think he has somehow ended up there?" Ricky asks him. "It's certainly a possibility. Now if you will just excuse me." Peter says as he leaves the room. Tamara watches Peter leave and then turns to Angelo with tears in her eyes and says: "Angelo, you have to find him as I can't lose him." "Don't worry Tamara, we will find him I promise you." Angelo says "Why don't you girls stay here with Casey in case he comes back on his own and the rest of us will head over to the Surf Club as that's going to probably end being the base for the search." "I'm not staying here with him." Tamara says standing up and pointing at Casey. "Well you can come with us then." Heath says. With that they all stop talking and split up with some staying at the house and the rest heading to the Surf Club for the start of what will be a very long night for everyone.
  15. Thank you for the lovely review i'm writing the next chapter now. x
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