Inactive User Posted November 26, 2017 Report Posted November 26, 2017 Great start to this fanfiction Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx 1 Quote
Ludub Posted November 26, 2017 Report Posted November 26, 2017 hahaha! Love this! Particularly liked the 'bitch alert' Loved Billie's sarcasm too! VJ deserved it, he was being quite the plonker here, wasn't he?! And Brody's camp 'oooh Mr VJ' really made me laugh. Made me think of something from 'Are you being served?' I know I often write him as gay but I don't think he's usually quite this camp?! haha! NIce of VJ to bribe Brody with an armful of his own bread too! Very funny! 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 27, 2017 Report Posted November 27, 2017 Insanity begins! Great start, look forward to seeing where you take it. 1 Quote
JosieTash Posted November 27, 2017 Report Posted November 27, 2017 to quote C 3PO "Here were go again" !!!! Particularly like Billie's bitch alert, and VJ paying Brody for the donkey with Brody;s own bread !!! 1 1 Quote
Guest Posted November 27, 2017 Report Posted November 27, 2017 Great Start. liked Billie's bitch alert. VJ paying Brody with his own bread. Update again soon Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 30, 2017 Report Posted November 30, 2017 Very weird, as ever! Loved Kat's rather self-defeating plan for getting rid of the cancer cluster. And Irene, Leah and Marilyn as a combination of shepherds and three wise, er, women? Oh-kay... 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted November 30, 2017 Author Report Posted November 30, 2017 Great chapter Loved it as like RR1 said above, hehe. Can image Irene and Leah, Marilyn as shepherds/wise women, haha. Update soon please xx 1 Quote
Guest Posted December 1, 2017 Report Posted December 1, 2017 Great chapter very funny like the others have said I can just imagine Irene,Leah and Marilyn as wise woman. Matt and Roo oh deer Update again soon Quote
Ludub Posted December 1, 2017 Report Posted December 1, 2017 Well Kat certainly got rid of the cancer cluster! That's one way to go about it! haha! Matt and Roo as a randy couple?! (wherever did you get that idea? lol) and who is this 'angel' with the cocky little head tilt? (Is it who I think it is? ...Do I need to hunt for the answer? haha!) Weird, as always... 1 Quote
pembie Posted December 1, 2017 Report Posted December 1, 2017 3 hours ago, Ludub said: Weird, as always... Yes I seem to have gotten this reputation... I can do normal Quote
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