christine king Posted April 25, 2017 Report Posted April 25, 2017 Story Title: Loves binds us but does it destroy us too? Type of story: Long Fic Main Characters: Brody, Phoebe, Justin, Tori, Mason, Raffy BTTB rating: T/A Genre: Drama/Family/Romance/General Does story include spoilers: Yes Any warnings: Violence. Summary: Brody's always had a thing for Phoebe but why did he never go for it? Is Justin the real reason or is something in his past holding him back? If Justin and Phoebe break up will he finally get his chance? Chapter 1: Brody and Phoebe are on the beach together Brody: so how's things with my brother? Phoebe: good Brody: yeah? Phoebe: I don't know Brody: what did he do? Phoebe: nothing? Brody: yeah and I'm suppose to believe that? Phoebe: maybe Brody: come on.. tell me whats wrong? Phoebe: you ever think about how life could be different? what if we made a wrong decision in the past? what if you can fix it? Brody: like what? Phoebe: just stuff Brody: like? Phoebe: like what if I'm not who I'm suppose to be? Brody: what do you mean? your awesome Phoebe: thanks but that's not what I meant Brody: what did you mean? Phoebe: I don't know.. sometimes I just wonder you know? everyone that comes into your life, are they suppose to stay? Brody: if they are good enough Phoebe: what? Brody: nothing Phoebe: no you clearly have something on your mind Brody: so do you! Phoebe: I asked you first Brody: no you didn't Phoebe: just answer me Brody: no you answer me Phoebe: urg your so annoying Brody: join the club Phoebe: haha your not funny Brody: I think I am Phoebe: yeah only you though Brody: nah I think you know I am too Phoebe: maybe Brody: maybe? Phoebe: ok fine, yes, you happy? Brody: very Phoebe: ok lets go back to work now Brody: why you scared I'm going to discover your secrets? Phoebe: maybe I'll discover yours Brody: maybe, we'll see...
Guest Posted April 25, 2017 Report Posted April 25, 2017 great start I look forward to more update again soon
pembie Posted April 25, 2017 Report Posted April 25, 2017 Phoebe wouldn't be my first choice of person to tell my secrets too Brody better keep his close to his chest
Ludub Posted April 25, 2017 Report Posted April 25, 2017 Nice little exchange between them there. Looking forward to seeing where this goes
Inactive User Posted April 27, 2017 Report Posted April 27, 2017 Great start! Loved the exchange between Phoebe and Brody Update soon please xx
sallyandflynnfan Posted April 28, 2017 Report Posted April 28, 2017 Please update it. It's a great fan fiction and I love it. I wonder if Phoebe thinks she should of chosen Brody?
christine king Posted April 28, 2017 Author Report Posted April 28, 2017 On 4/25/2017 at 9:57 PM, Kristen said: great start I look forward to more update again soon On 4/25/2017 at 10:15 PM, Red Ranger 1 said: Interesting start. On 4/25/2017 at 11:14 PM, pembie said: Phoebe wouldn't be my first choice of person to tell my secrets too Brody better keep his close to his chest On 4/26/2017 at 0:26 AM, Ludub said: Nice little exchange between them there. Looking forward to seeing where this goes On 4/27/2017 at 2:07 PM, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Great start! Loved the exchange between Phoebe and Brody Update soon please xx 3 hours ago, sallyandflynnfan said: Please update it. It's a great fan fiction and I love it. I wonder if Phoebe thinks she should of chosen Brody? Thanks guys for reading, it means a lot. I should be putting a next chapter up in a couple of days hopefully.
christine king Posted May 1, 2017 Author Report Posted May 1, 2017 Chapter 2: The Morgan House Brody and Tori are outside the back with Buddy Brody: our dog is always so energetic Tori: yeah he is Brody: its good though, keeps Raffy busy Tori: yeah that's true Brody: I'm glad shes settled in the bay Tori: I think we all are now Brody: so hows Nate? Tori: hes good, were doing really well actually Brody: I'm glad, hes a good guy Tori: oh I'm glad he has your approval, I'll be sure to tell him Brody: haha Riley beat you too it Tori: oh did he? Brody; yeah Nate never brought into that macho thing but he knew we thought you were being with him then Riley Tori: yeah well you were right Brody: if you tell Justin that he'll hold it over your head forever Tori: which is why this conversation stays in the vault Brody: under lock and key Tori: yep Brody: I'm glad were all happy Tori: are we though? Brody: what do you mean? Tori: I'm asking if your happy? Brody: why wouldn't I be, family, job, what else is their? Tori: you know we are free now, you can start to date again Brody: you remember how well that went last time Tori: I'm not talking about Jeannie Brody: yeah your talking about my other ex before we went into witness potection Tori: yeah her Brody: I'm over it, its been 8 years give me a break Tori: I know your over it, I just don't know if your over how that went down Brody: I am, trust me, I'm fine Tori: then why can't you admit how you really feel? Brody: oh I don't know let me think Justin! Tori: you know your going to have to stop using him as an excuse evetually yes Brody: its not an excuse! Tori: ok fine just hear what you want to hear Brody: I'm not talking about this, just leave me alone Brody storms off
Guest Posted May 1, 2017 Report Posted May 1, 2017 Great chapter Liked the brotherly and sister chat between Brody and Tori. Update again soon
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