Guest Posted June 24, 2017 Report Share Posted June 24, 2017 Great chapter So Phoebe and Justin are fighting because Justin hired a lawyer. Justin always thinking about food Update again soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted June 24, 2017 Report Share Posted June 24, 2017 Great chapter Surprised that Justin and Phoebe are fighting because Justin hired a lawyer to get full custody of Ava Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sallyandflynnfan Posted June 25, 2017 Report Share Posted June 25, 2017 On Wednesday, May 17, 2017 at 3:53 AM, Ludub said: Awww, I like Joebe, or Phustin as I prefer to call them! So, is it Boebe then? Or Broebe? Or Phody? Not so keen on the idea of them at all (because, in my mind, Brody is sooooo in the closet!), but I'm willing to go with it for this story (and because so many people seem to want it so desperately! ) Hahahaha! It just struck me! If Brody went with his old name they could be Phart!!! I think its phody Pls update this is so good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christine king Posted June 25, 2017 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2017 18 hours ago, pembie said: So are Phoebe and Justin fighting because he has hired a lawyer for custody of Ava? Surely Phoebe won't choose to run off witth Brody because of that? or maybe Brody tries his luck while ordering takeawa either way If that does happen it seems like a very low blow. Something tells me they might be abit longer than a hour Lets hope Mason gets to have his honey chicken that made me laugh Short answer yes... long answer there's more. 13 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said: Interesting news of Justin's! Isn't it! 10 hours ago, Kristen said: So Phoebe and Justin are fighting because Justin hired a lawyer. Justin always thinking about food Yes... but no. 9 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Surprised that Justin and Phoebe are fighting because Justin hired a lawyer to get full custody of Ava Yes... but no. 1 hour ago, sallyandflynnfan said: I think its phody I think it is too. Thanks guys for reading next chapter should hopefully be up in a week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted June 25, 2017 Report Share Posted June 25, 2017 Seems like a very risky strategy, suing for full custody. Would a court really award custody to a dad that hadn't been a part of his child's life for 7 years because he was being hunted by drug dealers? Hmm.... funny how the conversation moved so quickly from that to 'mmm I fancy Chinese...' Looking forward to the next chapter x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christine king Posted June 25, 2017 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2017 3 hours ago, Ludub said: Seems like a very risky strategy, suing for full custody. Would a court really award custody to a dad that hadn't been a part of his child's life for 7 years because he was being hunted by drug dealers? Hmm.... funny how the conversation moved so quickly from that to 'mmm I fancy Chinese...' Looking forward to the next chapter x Yeah we'll see. Thanks for reading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christine king Posted June 28, 2017 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2017 Thanks guys for reading the new chapter is up now. Chapter 7 In Car to Yabbie Creek Brody and Tori are chatting Brody: so? Tori: no way are you getting out of talking about this Brody: about what? Tori: oh I don't know, what do you think? Brody: that I don't want to talk about this Tori: tough because you are Brody: why must you be so annoying Tori: annoying? I'm your nice helpful sister Brody: cough. Annoying sister. Cough Tori: what was that? Brody: just wondering what you want for dinner? Tori: satay beef Brody: ok cool Tori: and you? Brody: roast pork Tori: of course you always order that Brody: it's my favourite Tori: more like you want to see whether they can cook it better then you can Brody: well yeah.. but they can't! Tori: confident much? Brody: what was i saying before? Oh yeah cough. Annoying sister. Cough Tori: who's paying for dinner? Brody: you are? Tori: that's right so who won't get any if they don't shut up? Brody: fine! I'll be quiet Tori: no wait, we weren't done with our converstation Brody: you said no more talking! The Morgan's Mason: it's so annoying waiting for them Justin: go do something Mason: no! Justin: take Buddy for a walk Mason: with Raffy? Justin: sure Mason: ok see you soon Mason and Raffy leave Justin: finally Phoebe: oh come on your brother wasn't that annoying Justin: I know, it's not him Phoebe: I know Justin: I said sorry for lying Phoebe: it's not about the lying Justin: really? Phoebe: well not everything... you should of told me Justin: I know Phoebe: I just feel like you keeping that from me was your way of cutting me out Justin: that's not true Phoebe: then why didn't you include me in this decision? We're together and I'm a part of this Justin: I didn't want to drag you into it Phoebe: too bad! I was apart of it the minute we got together you knew that but you still lied Justin: well what can I do to make it better? Phoebe: you can start by telling me how you think this custody thing will play out Justin: I'm hoping Nina will realise she needs to let Ava see me Phoebe: but if this dosen't work? Justin: I don't know, I haven't thought that far ahead Phoebe: we'll talk more about it later Justin: ok but we're good? Phoebe: we're good Phoebe and Justin kiss Car back to the bay Brody: good we got everything Tori: yep, I did check Brody: that's good Tori: are we going to finish this converstation? Brody: nope Tori: I really think you need to talk about this Brody: talk about what? Tori: Brody! Just listen ok, I know your not as okay as you make out? Brody: ok about what? Tori: about Phoebe! Brody: you don't know what your talking about Tori: don't I? Brody: I already told you Justin is the reason I never told her Tori: you and I both know he's not! Brody: yes he is! Tori: you can only keep hiding for so long Brody: I'm not hiding Tori: yes you are Brody: I regret not telling her but there is nothing else Tori: what about your ex? Brody: what about my ex? Tori: the fact she dumped you for a girl Brody: that had nothing to do with me, I didn't turn her gay! Tori: I never said you did.. so not the point? Anyway you were way messed up after that Brody: yeah but it's been 8 years and I have moved on from all that, I'm good now Tori: I don't think you are.. I know you aren't Brody: I am! Tori: if you were, you would of told Phoebe you liked her from the start, you were scared, scared she was going to reject you Brody: yeah isn't everyone sacred of rejection Tori: yeah but they don't act like you did Brody: I didn't act like anything Tori: yeah because your words/actions were totally the same? Brody: huh? Tori: you say one thing and mean another? Brody: No I didn't Tori: you did.. you chose not to go for her because of your past despite your feelings Brody: your right! I let my past define my present but now it's too late to change things Tori: is it? Brody: why what do you know? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted June 28, 2017 Report Share Posted June 28, 2017 Hmm, interesting. While I can sympathise with Brody to some extent, I think Tori's being very unfair to Justin. What makes Brody's feelings for Phoebe more important than Justin's? Why is she opening this can of worms and stirring up trouble? Sad that Brody has been so scarred by his previous experience that he's been too frightened to start a relationship with anyone else. Quite an admission. At least he recognises it though. Again, your dialogue just flows so well! Really well written! Looking forward to the next chapter x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted June 28, 2017 Report Share Posted June 28, 2017 Great chapter Brody has feelings for Phoebe? I almost forgot about that. I look forward to the next chapter Update again soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sallyandflynnfan Posted June 28, 2017 Report Share Posted June 28, 2017 Love it. It a amazing fanfiction Brody needs to hurry up and tell Phoebe he likes her Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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